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Thread: Predictions Of The Future

  1. #1
    WeRd-smith
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    Predictions Of The Future

    tough times breed dark thoughts and call for drastic measures
    my only aim is to elevate and alleviate this building pressure
    with the force to procreate and sedate imploding fissures
    tear back the crack holding my skull in place
    i use words to disgrace the debased morals in my face
    change words no funk faked more nukes then an army base
    hard to believe anyone could outdo this ace
    shit i can barely concieve this sieve is out the race
    what type of breed is this beast bent to dominate
    the type others wish to conform and then emulate
    fuck the rumors i think its time i set it straight
    the only time i'm at ease is when i ejaculate
    i've been poked prodded critiqued and thoroughly tested
    searched for my inner illness inside my dark decrepit essence
    learned every bit of lifes difficult and corrupt lessons
    i need no smith and wesson my words keep them guessing


    this is a glimpse into the not so near future
    i was sent to rearrange the game out of its impending stupor
    with the force of a fully loaded luger
    i plan to show the formula for making platinum from pewter


    in these limited years i've shed unlimited tears
    spent days alone just me and my oppressive fears
    overpowered by unforseen and malicious jeers
    faces riddled with hate and disgusting racist leers
    but don't be fooled this body is harder than it appears
    while it seems wierd i see my true reflection in the mirror
    so i quit trying to hide my pain in a pool of weed and beer
    i concoct words of envy in death defying feats
    my body on liquour drought i strive to keep my feet
    hard to see clear for the fog on my street
    how can i live well when i can barely afford to eat
    so i open myself to criminalistic type ventures
    hustle on the corner make niggas need coke and dentures
    but this is the type of shit my mental tries to censure
    it's a hard life to live i wouldn't wish this mortality on any enemy
    besides i don't even know where the good lord is sending me


    this is a glimpse into the not so near future
    i was sent to rearrange the game out of its impending stupor
    with the force of a fully loaded luger
    i plan to show the formula for making platinum from pewter

    you wanna see the real me behind the words and thoughts
    take a good look at the last hip hop album you bought
    view the heat in the last rhyme you brought
    think about the last accolade your heart sought
    see rap can't be learned and most ceartinly can't be taught
    if you're not open to catch it then it won't be caught
    and you'll never get it if your brain is stretched tight and taut
    tried and true i beat on tracks with the hope to align perception
    even though i'm manic blue i still live with designed deception
    i give it 200% without hesitation or exception
    i do this with the blessing of god gift and anti deppressants
    so hope for love and live for life perhaps you'll see the light
    don't touch the mask and glove you see every night
    morals made from interpretations of wrong and right


    this is a glimpse into the not so near future
    i was sent to rearrange the game out of its impending stupor
    with the force of a fully loaded luger
    i plan to show the formula for making platinum from pewter

  2. #2
    N.D.eva
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    Thought ya flow was ok, but ya structure seemed abit erratic and ya word play could have been better..................... aight dawg

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    yo i thought this was raw...
    your wordusage play and thought was hitten and on point.i read and think street love and this would get some
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    WeRd-smith
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    upping.......

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    Yeah this peice was pretty good, i thought it was a good read, your flow was pretty good, your structure was alright, your wordplay i thought was good, overall it was a good peice i thought, if you get the chance check out my peice called "Losing Hope", Thanks.

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    pretty damn good mang, flow was catchyi thought...cud'a brought it up a little more to make it more complex..but it was a damn good street buzz..keep it up...check out my hypothisis keystyle lates mang
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    WeRd-smith
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    thanks upping

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