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no biting or feeding
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ight, coo
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aprenticekid15
C_Drama
10 lines max
no crew or d/r votes
no biting or feeding
verses due half an hour after check in
ight, coo
1
iight dogg so u spittin first or what. no bullshit iightdogg lets do this@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
umm you spit first, ima be on da road for ten mins to pick up something
ight?
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ill spit after u come back from the road slick one...... waitin on ur shit but ima start in like 5 mins ............................
Yo ill hit this up lata dont think im duckin neither iight spit ur shit nd i wont duck iight no hate peace
yea yea, i wouldnt think that cuz i jes got back, and ma moms knocked me for the comp neways
if u here, spit, (i just spit first on anotha battle)
WTF man w.e im spittin im start like now iight!!!!!!! IIGHT LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
IIGHT FAGGOT UR DONE!!!!
Just like your mom, your style- is hurtin eyes, internalized, master raps cuz my spit can fertalize/ (WOW lets go)
I detected ur gay wishes of prowlin gay clubs and turnin eyez/
(DONT TEST ME)
Me or my style is like Stevie WOnder, cuz they not seein ya/
Spittin more acidic sickness than bul-EM-IA/
1-1 no one remembers ur wack wholesome wins, remembered as nursery shit, like THE OLSEN TWINS!!!/
so take my bulemia shit and binge!!(bitin), Your not competition ur debris left in my path/
like a atomic blasts, dont wry cuz the mind blocks out the painful past/(mind blocks out painful memories)
Like how APrentice kid lyrically,..... just raped ur ass/
My corruptin cords just left this faggot heated, WHO THE FUCK UPPINS FIVE TIMES/
means UR FAGGOT SHITS NOT EVEN WORTH READIN!!/
He lost his other battle cuz he uppined 6 times.... what does this tell u??
haha wow, nice drop,
writing ma shit now
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I'm feelin grimey now~how you want it~your ears or your knees?//
I send CONVICTED queers to the CHAIR like CHRISTOPHER REEVES//
Best if you leave ~ cuz you'll either be ~ tied up in trunks//
Or [back on the job]....wearing [black thongs and red pumps]//(lol think about it)
I carry no symptoms but I'm sicker than your mom's cervix//
STRETCHED OUT more than YOUR VERSES~result of her daily service//
So learn this.....going against me~ain't logical//
..Your wins will come out more SHORTER than ATHLETES in a hospital//(really, think about it)
Stopping your [flow] like [clots] and [artery valves] or [water turning cold]//
Deliver ya ass to the whole RB Staff SLICED IN HALF like HOT DOG ROLLS//
send CONVICTED queers to the CHAIR like CHRISTOPHER REEVES
that ^ didnt make sense at all.. not too bad of a spit good multis but ur wordplay and punches lacked nyway nice drop 1
ha actually i meant to say "on the chair", i fucked up on that one
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nice drop from both so i'll break it down
flow-apprentice
punches-apprentice
Multies-drama
Wordplay-drama
enjoyment-apprentice
overall- apprentice for a better overall verse
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IIght thx for the honest vote iight yall UPPIN ON THIS BATTLE SHIt UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNMMM
my vote aprentice....more original.....
however-its not cool how after his verse was done u start talkin bouot it in posts.....let us read it...that what we are here for.....non the less u recieve my vote....
ps...advice..mix up ur verse a lil bit next time..u used that bulimia line twice-an kill the "!!! & ()".....we can figure stuff out ourselves...were not idiot...pc*1*
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