Young Buk (Bak again) .V. J.Dubya

[Young_Buck]

Ayo 7-15 lines

No biting feeding.......

No crew hater neewbie or un xplained votes


Peace

[Young_Buck]

Ayo Ayo JDub, you chekin in yet??????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????????????????

[J.Dubya]

yeah, i'm checkin in. uppin for your verse
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[Young_Buck]

yo this gonna be a walk-over, like a stoll over a fukin foot bridge//
J.dubya you gonna fuked on this battle, like how you got made by ya momma and dadda// (hard)
ima murder you lyricaly and throw your body in the nearest river or creek//
these punches come so hard they make you eat your meals through a straw for a week//
my verbal attack comes like a dictonary equip with a semi-auto mack//
this dude rhymes like a dog tryin to walk with one leg//
your first loss and another victory to me//
cus the only type of flow this bitch gets it at a cetain time of the month//
what you gonna do when young buck come for you?//
i leave you on the cement bleeding, the cops asking witnesses who shot ya?//
my gun leaves your skin with gashing holes and tears and rips//
burn your bdy bring ashes back to ya momma get a comission//
at ure funeral i run out shoot the witnesses in the intermission//

[Young_Buck]

drop soon dude .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............

[J.Dubya]

aight, i'ma start writin my verse now
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[J.Dubya]

Your style changes more than a difference college girl's sexual preference/
You got no flavour and even less cents, so I'll direct you to Vanilla Ice for reference//-1
Am I in a disregarded special care home? Cuz u're lookin like you're retarded/
Couldn't stop my attack if your whole verse were guarded, it shoulda been discarded//-2
Your back's against the wall, seems I'm battlin Goliath the way you were quick to fall/
You couldn't respond to my lines if this were a telelphone call. Sink you like a pool ball//-3
Like those lava lamps soon as you're heated you'll start to glow, eventually even blow/
You a pussy, didn't ya know? Only style you have is down below...a menstrual flow//-4
You're lame in this rap game-you commited treason, I hate you simply for that reason/
This a battle of wits, I'm connecting with so many hits you'd think it was baseball season//-5
It's like I'm Young Buk's brain, the control center that spots every one of his thoughts/
This bitch is startin to flicker, gonna burn out quicker than a light bulb-60 watts//-6
Young Buk's stupid, at school he writes down every new word that was taught/
Here's a new one, "distraught", this herb trying to give me food for thought//-7
Just call me Nas cause it only takes one mic to toss your fifth loss/
This guy couldn't cause a raquet if he were playing a game of lacrosse//-8
He's lame, couldn't claim fame if he took aim and murdered Saddam Hussein/
Like newbies he's the same, lines so played they look copped from a video game//-9

[J.Dubya]

UPPIN (1)
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[J.Dubya]

please no quoted votes, be original...
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[Young_Buck]

Uppin .................................................. .................................................. .........

[Alchemy]

Hmmm:

Punches:J
Personals:J
Flow:J
Wordplay:J
Meta:J
Multi:J
Creativenss:J
Vocab:J

Overal:J

Alright to me this was a 2 sided battle. One side was the sick spit by J and the toher side is the spit by Young that probably hurt him more then it helped him, full merk.

[J.Dubya]

FINALLY a voter^. Thanks dogg...
Currently J. Dubya: 1; Younk Buk: 0
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[J.Dubya]

UPPIN (2)
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[C_Drama]

umm, this battle was iight

J got this tho

but even sayin that

his punches were mad basic

still

he had the better shit, Youngbuck shit was weak

Vote = JDubya

oh (poll votes is retarded, moderators can vote more than once without even respondin to the thread)

so...

[J.Dubya]

POLL votes please...
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