LLL SEASON 13
Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.
verses due thursday 11:59 est
Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 10 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines
LLL SEASON 13
Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.
verses due thursday 11:59 est
Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 10 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines
Check going 10
Last edited by Uncle Sam; August 26th, 2010 at 08:13 PM
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A.K.'s Never fresh and the ladies can’t stand Allens stenches
+ He’s got more L’s and is about as useless as a set of 20 Allen wrenches
I tried lookin up his battles just to see what kind of shit ‘e drops
All I found is he loves 2 no show n he’s seen more body bags then NY city cops
I’ll Cut ur face off viciously with a rusty, alcohol soaked, paring knife
Now watch ur mom give skillful head…damn son ur dad has such a caring wife!
I’m in the spirit of giving….this faggot an L
Not talkin Xmas, but every bar voters break down will be like “No Al, No Al”
Leave his body icy-cold, like a house with no pilot light
This dead man “walkin” is the only time u’ll see a fully armored “silent” knight
Last edited by Uncle Sam; August 26th, 2010 at 08:16 PM
smh... no show can i please get some feed?
A.K.'s Never fresh and the ladies can’t stand Allens stenches
+ He’s got more L’s and is about as useless as a set of 20 Allen wrenches
Hm i can see the idea but i dont think it came off well imo
I tried lookin up his battles just to see what kind of shit ‘e drops
All I found is he loves 2 no show n he’s seen more body bags then NY city cops
Ok-ish
I’ll Cut ur face off viciously with a rusty, alcohol soaked, paring knife
Now watch ur mom give skillful head…damn son ur dad has such a caring wife!
Nah, weak
I’m in the spirit of giving….this faggot an L
Not talkin Xmas, but every bar voters break down will be like “No Al, No Al”
Could've worded this much better and looked a lil forced
Leave his body icy-cold, like a house with no pilot light
This dead man “walkin” is the only time u’ll see a fully armored “silent” knight
Not the best of closers
Err all in all you had just one decent bar but you could've executed some of the others much better for it to land harder imo. But this is far better than the verses u dropped in FL - well the ones i saw at least..no hate
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