Mafioso vs Personal

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[Per$onal]

December 24th, 2009
Mafioso.
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I see ur in LLL and shit and I'm lookin for ppl wit skills who are loyal that are willin to elavate...so if ur loyal and u wanna elavate ur ivited to the mob.
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January 29th, 2010
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yo The MOb jus got a forum i can defiently still use ya text skills....let me know if u interested...we can make this happen

****** add me on aim fam
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watz good nugga ur inivted ot the mob...how u been though glad to see u back




You could say I'm from the government, my job's to see what all the fail's about
I saw the mob's been depressing from the start, so I just joined to bail them out
cuz the crew ain't launderin money, they ain't cheatin either, it's fuckin wackness
so when I'm saying dude's a 'fraud', it's only cuz he talks shit but can't back it
mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any

and I'm from willimantic well not from but I live here now.

and I found out he's from Windham, though the name he calls it is old now
either way I can beat maf at will, like I was doing it in his own town!
but I'm proud of where I'm from, that ain't the thing vexin me
cuz the only thing bad about my state, is that he's in the one next to me
and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
and he's been askin me to be mob for months, but it shoulda been me appointing you
when the first good bar mafiosa's ever had, is when skillustrious joined the crew

[Mafioso.]

my fault fam its 5:23am jus got home I'm defiently not droppin now I'll drop sumtime later dont worry i got u

[Mafioso.]

I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
so if ur skills are infinite... I'ma fuckin bently out the dealership.
I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
after this he'll cry N make a om, claimin we're nerds in a ditch.
but he's a clown and I dont need played namplays to prove that Pers is a bitch.
u will always be a wack textcee! we will neva see u on smack or grindtime
cuz onlytime voters say "dope, Personal"...is after they read my lines.

fuck outta here fuckboy.

[Novade]

You could say I'm from the government, my job's to see what all the fail's about
I saw the mob's been depressing from the start, so I just joined to bail them out
-lmao..cool punch but not exactly true lol..

cuz the crew ain't launderin money, they ain't cheatin either, it's fuckin wackness
so when I'm saying dude's a 'fraud', it's only cuz he talks shit but can't back it
-lmao cool

mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any
-okay

and I found out he's from Windham, though the name he calls it is old now
either way I can beat maf at will, like I was doing it in his own town!
-meh ok

but I'm proud of where I'm from, that ain't the thing vexin me
cuz the only thing bad about my state, is that he's in the one next to me
-nice

and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
-good

he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
-meh decent

and he's been askin me to be mob for months, but it shoulda been me appointing you
when the first good bar mafiosa's ever had, is when skillustrious joined the crew
-ok close



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I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
-nice lol

and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
-lmfao nice

back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
-nice

ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
so if ur skills are infinite... I'ma fuckin bently out the dealership.
-good

I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
-decent

I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
-lmfao

after this he'll cry N make a om, claimin we're nerds in a ditch.
but he's a clown and I dont need played namplays to prove that Pers is a bitch.
-meh ok

u will always be a wack textcee! we will neva see u on smack or grindtime
cuz onlytime voters say "dope, Personal"...is after they read my lines
-ok



vote=maf,
better overall verse..good battle niggas...keepin it honest

[Controll]

Maf fed per$, battle over. Thanks, congrats, good job Maf.

[Mafioso.]

good job tryna sway how the fuck did I feed off his verse dumbfuck.

[YungDosia]

You could say I'm from the government, my job's to see what all the fail's about
I saw the mob's been depressing from the start, so I just joined to bail them out
Not feelin the opener.
cuz the crew ain't launderin money, they ain't cheatin either, it's fuckin wackness
so when I'm saying dude's a 'fraud', it's only cuz he talks shit but can't back it
No.
mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any
Lol.
and I found out he's from Windham, though the name he calls it is old now
either way I can beat maf at will, like I was doing it in his own town!
Okay.
but I'm proud of where I'm from, that ain't the thing vexin me
cuz the only thing bad about my state, is that he's in the one next to me
Lol cool.
and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
Bad misdirection wording was off.
he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
Meh...
and he's been askin me to be mob for months, but it shoulda been me appointing you
when the first good bar mafiosa's ever had, is when skillustrious joined the crew
Not a good close.



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I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
Meh, didnt really like this opener.
and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
This was fire.
back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
Okay.
ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
so if ur skills are infinite... I'ma fuckin bently out the dealership.
nah.
I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
Okay.
I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
Lmao, nice.
after this he'll cry N make a om, claimin we're nerds in a ditch.
but he's a clown and I dont need played namplays to prove that Pers is a bitch.
okay.
u will always be a wack textcee! we will neva see u on smack or grindtime
cuz onlytime voters say "dope, Personal"...is after they read my lines.
Good closer.


Not voting just leaving some feedback pretty cool read some good lines on both side that made me laugh but maf took this with the consistancy and better punches.

[Mafioso.]

per...dos its part of the crew and its honest u really not goin take that vote?...tru talk even if he would have voted for u i wouldve told u to take it...this fake ass e-ney between ya two needs to stop.

[Switch.]

You could say I'm from the government, my job's to see what all the fail's about
I saw the mob's been depressing from the start, so I just joined to bail them out
Okay-ish personal could've been better
cuz the crew ain't launderin money, they ain't cheatin either, it's fuckin wackness
so when I'm saying dude's a 'fraud', it's only cuz he talks shit but can't back it
decent, slightly forced but its still cool
mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any
Lol not bad
and I found out he's from Windham, though the name he calls it is old now
either way I can beat maf at will, like I was doing it in his own town!
meh..okay
but I'm proud of where I'm from, that ain't the thing vexin me
cuz the only thing bad about my state, is that he's in the one next to me
meh not hard enough imo
and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
Lol this was nice
he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
personal but not hard enough
and he's been askin me to be mob for months, but it shoulda been me appointing you
when the first good bar mafiosa's ever had, is when skillustrious joined the crew
Nah

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I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
personal but not hard enough, pretty mediocre
and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
Good hit, pretty smooth too.
back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
Gave me lolz
ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
so if ur skills are infinite... I'ma fuckin bently out the dealership.
not feelin
I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
Haha this was sick
I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
lol decent hit...(btw i think this where king thought u fed)
after this he'll cry N make a om, claimin we're nerds in a ditch.
but he's a clown and I dont need played namplays to prove that Pers is a bitch.
Nah not hard enough
u will always be a wack textcee! we will neva see u on smack or grindtime
cuz onlytime voters say "dope, Personal"...is after they read my lines.
hmm kinda self glory..and i think this is slightly played anyway.

Hmm this is a tough decision tbh because both of you obviously dropped decent verses. Personal i thought u had a lot of personals in your verse which was good, some i wasnt feeling and a couple of the good lines u did have could've been made better. Maf i was slightly disappointed by your opener and closer as i didnt feel they were hard enough but the majority of the bars in between them were pretty hard and consistent. overall though i feel that the good lines that pers did have were not as good as Maf's stand out bars which is why my vote goes to him. But seriously this could go either way, good battle guys. No hate to either.

v/Maf

[Controll]

I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
wow this bar gets lame especially after seeing so many other people do it
and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
nice, cool bar
back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
played, seen it done a whole bunch of times
ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
so if ur skills are infinite... I'ma fuckin bently out the dealership.
nah
I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
nice cool bar
I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
yeah you already did a crew rhyme once? and your basically outta concepts huh? lame
after this he'll cry N make a om, claimin we're nerds in a ditch.
but he's a clown and I dont need played namplays to prove that Pers is a bitch.
at least you didnt use a per$-handbag play, but this is wack
u will always be a wack textcee! we will neva see u on smack or grindtime
cuz onlytime voters say "dope, Personal"...is after they read my lines.
nope

btw the italicized "i asked you" is directly to his quote and his bars about him joining the crew. dunno how you can't say that's not feed, but I see all Mob in here, so its whatever.

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You could say I'm from the government, my job's to see what all the fail's about
I saw the mob's been depressing from the start, so I just joined to bail them out
this was alright, nothing special
cuz the crew ain't launderin money, they ain't cheatin either, it's fuckin wackness
so when I'm saying dude's a 'fraud', it's only cuz he talks shit but can't back it
nah, this was some JC Penny - lets bitch type of bar
mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any
damn, now this was coo
and I found out he's from Windham, though the name he calls it is old now
either way I can beat maf at will, like I was doing it in his own town!
understandable, pretty good for the town of his, it's a coo play
but I'm proud of where I'm from, that ain't the thing vexin me
cuz the only thing bad about my state, is that he's in the one next to me
rofl, yo tho, same word rhymes = non-quotable imo
and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
same as the bar above this one sir
he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
ether
and he's been askin me to be mob for months, but it shoulda been me appointing you
when the first good bar mafiosa's ever had, is when skillustrious joined the crew
played, the whole bar = skillustrious = punch = barcotic play just gets boring after a while

v/ Personal. 3 quotables to 2. I don't even go around the website as much as Maf and I'm banned from most the sites he's on, but most of his shit was utter trash or played. Per$ had some played shit aswell with some trash, and some other shit, but he pulled out a victory. Don't really understand how Maf won from the votes above me, but its whatever.

[Controll]

I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
lol decent hit...(btw i think this where king thought u fed)
[/B]

yup, its like your replying to Per$, which is the first hint of a feed.

[moose35]

You could say I'm from the government, my job's to see what all the fail's about
I saw the mob's been depressing from the start, so I just joined to bail them out
meh..basic
cuz the crew ain't launderin money, they ain't cheatin either, it's fuckin wackness
so when I'm saying dude's a 'fraud', it's only cuz he talks shit but can't back it
again, kind of basic. But alright.
mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any
lol
and I found out he's from Windham, though the name he calls it is old now
either way I can beat maf at will, like I was doing it in his own town!
meh..
but I'm proud of where I'm from, that ain't the thing vexin me
cuz the only thing bad about my state, is that he's in the one next to me
lol nice
and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
lol
he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
not hard enough
and he's been askin me to be mob for months, but it shoulda been me appointing you
when the first good bar mafiosa's ever had, is when skillustrious joined the crew
basic

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I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
ok
and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
good flow, alright punch
back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
lol
ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
so if ur skills are infinite... I'ma fuckin bently out the dealership.
wasn't feeling
I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
lmao
I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
ok
after this he'll cry N make a om, claimin we're nerds in a ditch.
but he's a clown and I dont need played namplays to prove that Pers is a bitch.
nah..
u will always be a wack textcee! we will neva see u on smack or grindtime
cuz onlytime voters say "dope, Personal"...is after they read my lines.
good closer

close, but Maf gets my vote. Overall more consistent verse. Quality battle though, good verses from both you guys.

v/Mafioso

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[Fourloko]

mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any
and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
^^ good hit...

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I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
^^ these are decent at best...

ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
^^ nice...
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I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
^^ this gotta be the bar KING II was talking about...
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even thou i have mafi with more qoutes they was decent W/ 1 nice hit and a probable feed bar
which is a DQ...
personal have less quotes but they hit slight better and they was all good hit...

so my vote/ personal...

no hate...

[Bender]

You could say I'm from the government, my job's to see what all the fail's about
I saw the mob's been depressing from the start, so I just joined to bail them out
hmmm not realy feelin this line, it' ok but no that har hitting
cuz the crew ain't launderin money, they ain't cheatin either, it's fuckin wackness
so when I'm saying dude's a 'fraud', it's only cuz he talks shit but can't back it
lol ok i like the play on this one again not the hardest hitting, but cool
mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any
lol nice, kind of a played concept but this was pretty cool, nice hard hitter
and I found out he's from Windham, though the name he calls it is old now
either way I can beat maf at will, like I was doing it in his own town!
eehhh not really feelin this one too much, kinda light
but I'm proud of where I'm from, that ain't the thing vexin me
cuz the only thing bad about my state, is that he's in the one next to me
hahaaha nice punch, cool fresh concept, prolly your best line
and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
played concept but a good punch
he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
not feeling this one, does he really run his own buisness or is it just a punch, either way, i dont know if he does so this seems a little weak
and he's been askin me to be mob for months, but it shoulda been me appointing you
when the first good bar mafiosa's ever had, is when skillustrious joined the crew
i don't know who skillustrious is, so i guess i wasn't feelin this one, forgive my not knowing who he is, maybe it would have hit harder if i were familiar with him

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I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
hahaah nice punch
and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
LMAO awesome, prolly your best line, this just destroyed it
back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
hahaha fresh concept, cool punch, nice har hitter
ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
so if ur skills are infinite... I'ma fuckin bently out the dealership.
ehhh not feeling this one too much
I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
lol hahaha, no comment
I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
nice delivery, i liked this one, although it wasn't the hardest hitting punch
after this he'll cry N make a om, claimin we're nerds in a ditch.
but he's a clown and I dont need played namplays to prove that Pers is a bitch.
cool, i like it, i was totally expecting a nameplay at some point
u will always be a wack textcee! we will neva see u on smack or grindtime
cuz onlytime voters say "dope, Personal"...is after they read my lines
oh there it is lol, still nice but i think i have seen lines like this used on him before so you lose points for not being original lol

well this was a pretty good battle..personal had a few really tight lines and so did maf, it was pretty well matched up, although i think that maf had a few harder hitting punches and a little bit more fresh concepts....I have no beef with personal at all, but after what happened in the past perhaps he won't want to count my vote...either way it is fine, no hate at all just giving my opinion...
v/maf