FL HW Champ Match: Mafioso. vs Arch.

[The Archetype]

Pic Battle
Check in w/ pic by Tuesday
Drop by Friday
10-20 lines

[Mafioso.]

LMAO...arch heres some dumbshit for ya

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/a...icture0010.jpg

[The Archetype]

http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/...g?t=1274324409

just taken... lol... don't ask where i got the jacket...

[Mafioso.]

http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/...g?t=1274324409

yea i'm high now so let me get this over with

LMAO!
I cant stand this geek, jus by this pic I can tell his ass is sweet
he looks like a fushion of Alyse...mixed with Brandon Heat.
I cant take this serious, I laugh everytime I look at ur punk ass
cuz it looks like ur lips are playin jumprope...wit ya long ass mustache
u'll get crush fast, claim he has style but my gear will end this goblin
I'm BALLLLINNN!
ur jus some black guy who likes wearin woman clothes...Dennis Rodman.
but I feel like I'm responsble for arch becoming a bigger faggot.
cuz I said real man wear pink...so he startin stylin w/ his sistas jacket.
ur style is tragic, I pity the day abiona actually gets turned on by you
cuz ur only picture perfect...for GOW's new tourney, The Carnival.
fuc wat this clown uh do, I'm always gettin deep in pussy and dickin the hoes.
while u only get deep...wen it involves ya index, and pickin ya nose.
now watch him text his comrades so they can come N hate on the thread.
but Arch fuck ya "blackberry"(no phone) I'm talkin the shape of ya head.
this jamican is dead, claimin he's thuggish but this must be the worse case.
cuz wat faggot tries to look gangsta...while wearing a pink northface?
I knew u was a bum in the 1st place, so dont front like u made stacks.
cuz thee only thing cheaper then them glasses is...that dingy ass wavecap
ppl compare me to made cats, we compare u to Dylon from making the band.
+ ur fingers r so greasy, I can make a new type of oil jus by shakin ur hand.

yea my keyed 20, hope u enjoy :hung:
oh and no noob votes meanin if u jus joined this site and dont understand our verses then dont vote...thank u come again

[The Archetype]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/a...icture0010.jpg

All this Pokemon talk is too much. I mean, enough's enough
Then this fuck posts his pic and looks like Jigglypuff... w/ a touch of Hush
For you to talk shit to Hush about his face shows your eyes are seeing lies, Son
Cuz his eyebrows look up to your eyebrows and idolize them
And w/ those features, it's no wonder you're the one your baby's mother hates
Rather than be photo'd w/ it... even your lip is trying to detach from your face
Or maybe I'm wrong. On 2nd look your nose has 2 blowholes from a whale
That lip pull probably happens everytime this bitch inhales
An overall view of your picture immediately had me dying
I chose the gayest jacket I could find... and you topped that w/o even trying
He obviously still lives @ his mom's. He's sure to follow all the rules
But it doesn't count as your own place cuz your fam can't stand being in the same room
Maf hopes to get rich off of this rap shit. I can see the appeal
He's a starving artist... Evidence? This pic was taken during a meal
This bitch has obviously been beaten up, but you can't tell he's been in scraps once
Kid got eyes so big it takes 6 direct hits from fists just to black one
With the picture out, it's evident why him and his girl have beef
He told her he had a horse's parts... but forgot to mention it was his teeth
Maf's face will get him noticed but it may take a little while
For someone to notice his model features... fit for Operation Smile

...blah...

[Whys Weighs]

Arch.

All this Pokemon talk is too much. I mean, enough's enough
Then this fuck posts his pic and looks like Jigglypuff... w/ a touch of Hush
lol
For you to talk shit to Hush about his face shows your eyes are seeing lies, Son
Cuz his eyebrows look up to your eyebrows and idolize them
lol
And w/ those features, it's no wonder you're the one your baby's mother hates
Rather than be photo'd w/ it... even your lip is trying to detach from your face
aight
Or maybe I'm wrong. On 2nd look your nose has 2 blowholes from a whale
That lip pull probably happens everytime this bitch inhales
lol
An overall view of your picture immediately had me dying
I chose the gayest jacket I could find... and you topped that w/o even trying
lol
He obviously still lives @ his mom's. He's sure to follow all the rules
But it doesn't count as your own place cuz your fam can't stand being in the same room
not so good
Maf hopes to get rich off of this rap shit. I can see the appeal
He's a starving artist... Evidence? This pic was taken during a meal
not so good
This bitch has obviously been beaten up, but you can't tell he's been in scraps once
Kid got eyes so big it takes 6 direct hits from fists just to black one
ehh.. weak
With the picture out, it's evident why him and his girl have beef
He told her he had a horse's parts... but forgot to mention it was his teeth
lol
Maf's face will get him noticed but it may take a little while
For someone to notice his model features... fit for Operation Smile
meh..blah


Mafioso

I cant stand this geek, jus by this pic I can tell his ass is sweet
he looks like a fushion of Alyse...mixed with Brandon Heat.
kinda weak
I cant take this serious, I laugh everytime I look at ur punk ass
cuz it looks like ur lips are playin jumprope...wit ya long ass mustache
lol
u'll get crush fast, claim he has style but my gear will end this goblin
I'm BALLLLINNN!
ur jus some black guy who likes wearin woman clothes...Dennis Rodman.
really not good
but I feel like I'm responsble for arch becoming a bigger faggot.
cuz I said real man wear pink...so he startin stylin w/ his sistas jacket.
coulda been better
ur style is tragic, I pity the day abiona actually gets turned on by you
cuz ur only picture perfect...for GOW's new tourney, The Carnival.
aight
fuc wat this clown uh do, I'm always gettin deep in pussy and dickin the hoes.
while u only get deep...wen it involves ya index, and pickin ya nose.
nahh
now watch him text his comrades so they can come N hate on the thread.
but Arch fuck ya "blackberry"(no phone) I'm talkin the shape of ya head.
lol
this jamican is dead, claimin he's thuggish but this must be the worse case.
cuz wat faggot tries to look gangsta...while wearing a pink northface?
pretty weak...
I knew u was a bum in the 1st place, so dont front like u made stacks.
cuz thee only thing cheaper then them glasses is...that dingy ass wavecap
pretty weak
ppl compare me to made cats, we compare u to Dylon from making the band.
+ ur fingers r so greasy, I can make a new type of oil jus by shakin ur hand.
aight but coulda been waaay better

This was an aight battle.. I think Arch came a bit harder though.. he started out hella strong but kinda lost it then got it back... Maf had some played stuff in there.. I liked like 4 of ya punches opposed to 5 from Arch.. so therefore..

v/ Arch.

Peace Out..

[Alyse Miller]

Arch.

All this Pokemon talk is too much. I mean, enough's enough
Then this fuck posts his pic and looks like Jigglypuff... w/ a touch of Hush
rofl
For you to talk shit to Hush about his face shows your eyes are seeing lies, Son
Cuz his eyebrows look up to your eyebrows and idolize them
lol @ that
And w/ those features, it's no wonder you're the one your baby's mother hates
Rather than be photo'd w/ it... even your lip is trying to detach from your face
ok
Or maybe I'm wrong. On 2nd look your nose has 2 blowholes from a whale
That lip pull probably happens everytime this bitch inhales
Lmao
An overall view of your picture immediately had me dying
I chose the gayest jacket I could find... and you topped that w/o even trying
LOL
He obviously still lives @ his mom's. He's sure to follow all the rules
But it doesn't count as your own place cuz your fam can't stand being in the same room
nah weak
Maf hopes to get rich off of this rap shit. I can see the appeal
He's a starving artist... Evidence? This pic was taken during a meal
lol
This bitch has obviously been beaten up, but you can't tell he's been in scraps once
Kid got eyes so big it takes 6 direct hits from fists just to black one
meh
With the picture out, it's evident why him and his girl have beef
He told her he had a horse's parts... but forgot to mention it was his teeth
lol!!
Maf's face will get him noticed but it may take a little while
For someone to notice his model features... fit for Operation Smile
nah weak


Mafioso


I cant stand this geek, jus by this pic I can tell his ass is sweet
he looks like a fushion of Alyse...mixed with Brandon Heat.
i dunno how brandon heat looks lol an FUCK YOU FOR USING ME LIKE
IM FUCKIN HIDEOUS!! but no
I cant take this serious, I laugh everytime I look at ur punk ass
cuz it looks like ur lips are playin jumprope...wit ya long ass mustache
ROFL
u'll get crush fast, claim he has style but my gear will end this goblin
I'm BALLLLINNN!
ur jus some black guy who likes wearin woman clothes...Dennis Rodman.
weak
but I feel like I'm responsble for arch becoming a bigger faggot.
cuz I said real man wear pink...so he startin stylin w/ his sistas jacket.
could of been worded better!! fuck this was a good set up !
ur style is tragic, I pity the day abiona actually gets turned on by you
cuz ur only picture perfect...for GOW's new tourney, The Carnival.
lol ok
fuc wat this clown uh do, I'm always gettin deep in pussy and dickin the hoes.
while u only get deep...wen it involves ya index, and pickin ya nose.
LMAO
now watch him text his comrades so they can come N hate on the thread.
but Arch fuck ya "blackberry"(no phone) I'm talkin the shape of ya head.
LOL
this jamican is dead, claimin he's thuggish but this must be the worse case.
cuz wat faggot tries to look gangsta...while wearing a pink northface?
no weak
I knew u was a bum in the 1st place, so dont front like u made stacks.
cuz thee only thing cheaper then them glasses is...that dingy ass wavecap
weak an simple
ppl compare me to made cats, we compare u to Dylon from making the band.
+ ur fingers r so greasy, I can make a new type of oil jus by shakin ur hand.
LOL but worded weird



Overall:
an alright battle arch. i liked your opener that shit was lol i can actually picture that pokemon shit lol. but no actual complaints here your verse was solid an alot more consistent more laughs and stronger hits. Maf! DO NOT KEY A CHAMP VERSE AGAIN! im highly disappointed in you. also bout you using me as a ugly punch! but other then that i wastnt feeling most hits in your verse its like you didn't try. some bars came off so simple WHY!!! but anyways your verse was solid just a few errors in wording and hits being softer. if you would of had alot harder hits and actually sat down an reread this this wouldnt be like this.


vote Arch for alot more polish consistent verse

Feed my New poem you two! :x
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...049/index.html

[KnowP]

I cant stand this geek, jus by this pic I can tell his ass is sweet
he looks like a fushion of Alyse...mixed with Brandon Heat.
u'll get crush fast, claim he has style but my gear will end this goblin
I'm BALLLLINNN!
ur jus some black guy who likes wearin woman clothes...Dennis Rodman.
but I feel like I'm responsble for arch becoming a bigger faggot.
cuz I said real man wear pink...so he startin stylin w/ his sistas jacket.
I knew u was a bum in the 1st place, so dont front like u made stacks.
cuz thee only thing cheaper then them glasses is...that dingy ass wavecap


vs


And w/ those features, it's no wonder you're the one your baby's mother hates
Rather than be photo'd w/ it... even your lip is trying to detach from your face
Or maybe I'm wrong. On 2nd look your nose has 2 blowholes from a whale
That lip pull probably happens everytime this bitch inhales
An overall view of your picture immediately had me dying
I chose the gayest jacket I could find... and you topped that w/o even trying
Maf hopes to get rich off of this rap shit. I can see the appeal
He's a starving artist... Evidence? This pic was taken during a meal
With the picture out, it's evident why him and his girl have beef
He told her he had a horse's parts... but forgot to mention it was his teeth


Good entertaining pic battle. Funny stuff from both sides, but i feel Arch takes this with a more polished verse. His punches just landed harder imo. Maf had some good ones but fell off close to the end with weak punches.
I'm feelin this type of battle for the Champ match tho... shows creativity.

v/ Arch

[KnowP]

oh yeah, whys weighs sig gets a 15 out of 10...

[YungDosia]

u'll get crush fast, claim he has style but my gear will end this goblin
I'm BALLLLINNN!
ur jus some black guy who likes wearin woman clothes...Dennis Rodman.
I LOL'd to this.
but I feel like I'm responsble for arch becoming a bigger faggot.
cuz I said real man wear pink...so he startin stylin w/ his sistas jacket.
LMAO!
fuc wat this clown uh do, I'm always gettin deep in pussy and dickin the hoes.
while u only get deep...wen it involves ya index, and pickin ya nose.
Okay probly my favorite line in ya verse, shit was nice.
now watch him text his comrades so they can come N hate on the thread.
but Arch fuck ya "blackberry"(no phone) I'm talkin the shape of ya head.
lol, nice!


Vs.


For you to talk shit to Hush about his face shows your eyes are seeing lies, Son
Cuz his eyebrows look up to your eyebrows and idolize them
LMAO! nice.
And w/ those features, it's no wonder you're the one your baby's mother hates
Rather than be photo'd w/ it... even your lip is trying to detach from your face
I liked this shit made me laugh.
Or maybe I'm wrong. On 2nd look your nose has 2 blowholes from a whale
That lip pull probably happens everytime this bitch inhales
LOL!
With the picture out, it's evident why him and his girl have beef
He told her he had a horse's parts... but forgot to mention it was his teeth
LMAO again nice wordplay and funny.



This was pretty cool read, it was actually pretty close for me. Those lines i quoted were the only lines i felt in both verses and there were 4 each. Came down to who's i was feelin more and which i felt hit harder. Imo Archs. did the most damage, no hate to either.

Vote-Arch.

[King]

but I feel like I'm responsble for arch becoming a bigger faggot.
cuz I said real man wear pink...so he startin stylin w/ his sistas jacket.
I knew u was a bum in the 1st place, so dont front like u made stacks.
cuz thee only thing cheaper then them glasses is...that dingy ass wavecap

Vs.


For you to talk shit to Hush about his face shows your eyes are seeing lies, Son
Cuz his eyebrows look up to your eyebrows and idolize them
And w/ those features, it's no wonder you're the one your baby's mother hates
Rather than be photo'd w/ it... even your lip is trying to detach from your face
With the picture out, it's evident why him and his girl have beef
He told her he had a horse's parts... but forgot to mention it was his teeth

definitely not the best pic battle i've seen. tbh, i didn't find anything all that funny which is surprising because you both pic battle pretty often. either way, Arch connected with more consistency and blah blah blah, all the reasons that were probably stated in the other 4 votes.

vote Archimedes