can a mod delete that wack vote please, 3-3 it should be...thanks for the feed an votes as well maf, pers, daz an the rest...
can a mod delete that wack vote please, 3-3 it should be...thanks for the feed an votes as well maf, pers, daz an the rest...
Bump...^ Mods? WTF...
word...uppinOriginally Posted by Define
Done.
And I'm not lying, your attempts dude'll get ripped quick,
Cause i've seen better shots <-- at the special olympics.
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
vs
Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
close but imma give it too define...just enjoyed his verse a tad bit more in this one....
Vote=define...
Define-
Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
o.k punch couldve been better though, i liked
the intestine part, kinda comedic in a HC sense.
And I'm not lying, your attempts dude'll get ripped quick,
Cause i've seen better shots <-- at the special olympics.
nice concept, lacked in the punch area though
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
lol ok, nice
you suck it's true...wack multis, plus...this man is a fairy.
So fuck a grave site <-- where you stand; you'll get burried.
rhyming and flow was off, meh
Peep'em out...AK noob bodied you...your just lame as shit,
Plus your lines couldn't touch <-- should change to script.
pretty cool ender but you couldve ended harder man
KnowP-
Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Def, and cant see that your punches are old n played
deaf=not hearing, blind=not seeing. and you said
"def, and cant see" it made your punch attempt hella irrelevant.
you had a good concept though.
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
no line connection, i liked it but it didnt hit ...at all
Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking
cool but lacked a punch
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
nice idea....
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
honestly..1st line looked promising but then the 2nd
line came and i was seriously confused as hell. I get that you were trying
to say he settled with a mime and a (fish) meaning he couldnt do better
but you just worded it really awkwardly.
define, you had nice ideas, concepts and executed them real nicely. you had nice wordplay and puns in your verse, and consistent with your punches even if some of them didnt hit all that hard, you still had more.
knowp, ive seen you drop BOMB shit before and this was just hella laxed I think, you thought youd get an easy win by dropping a keystyle verse. Alot of your ideas were played, and no hate bruh i know you can drop way better shit than this.
MVGT/ Def, had better punches, more consistency and was more creative.
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