Scoobie vs. M-Var!o

[scoobie]

6 bars......


M-Var!o, time is of the essence
im the teacher, you the student so theres no questions
ya styles like that of a pansy
ima murder ya young shit like jean bennett ramsey
ima split ya skull in two n fuck up ya world
leave ya redheaded like the windys girl
when im threw with you
ur gonna transfer forums,like the bullied kid in skool
ya memory banks runnin on empty
while mines on full
ya think ya hot shit
but you justa cold sample of stool

[scoobie]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...160/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...159/index.html

[MV]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...081/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...079/index.html

[MV]

this aint no joke....u hustle ? what does scoobie do?
fuck X? so you SHAG E, while i master blocks like a rubix cube

six bars is more than enough to make my point... in me i trust
what u said woulda slid/sled-dawg, for ICE u can get ya face mushed

make sure you do like me..go meet ya wifey on her knees if she like me
skeet have her wipen her face...looking like she tryna get hyphee

no homo but your homo...only whinnie the pooh would sound more gay
i bet you served time...and spent ya whole commisary on land-0-lakes

look at this fucker...i swear scoobie is the kinda bitch i hate most
how can you even appeal to the real...he still gets tricked by fake ghost

whats next? im hungry for more comp...and u give me a scoobie snack
this noobie's wack, nigga u could hang proof he's a nutered sack

[RidiculeCloud999]

m-var!o-pretty good shit actully...some lines were a little weak...some really good though...good flow

and u give me a scoobie snack
this noobie's wack

what does scoobie do?
fuck X? so you SHAG E, while i master blocks like a rubix cube

vs

scoobie-nice try....red headed wendy's girl...too used...but i got it...it was an ok line

memory banks on empty...shoulda did something differnt with that...like memory bank on empty, you need to bail out...

wote marv!

[scoobie]

thats koo thanks for the critique

[SummonedTitan]

Scoobie... all you had was flow... you had no punches... no metas... no heavy hitting ideas..... nothing bro... just a flow... which even got too long..... your not gonna make it without punching your opponent... you need to work on creativity, not just trying to rhyme bro...

vs

M... hmmm you have the idea... but your not quiet getting it... your punches go no where with a whole lot of filling... less fillers, and more to the point, quick on the relapse, if ya gonna one two his ass every line... you have to go somewhere wit it... i'm kinda dissapointed... but never the less you had the idea to win the battle here... i'm sorry not to quote anything, just nothing was creative or on the path it needed to go....

Weak battle, elevate n hollah....

Vote - MVar

[MV]

'preciate the feed.

UPPN

[MV]

uppn

[The Incredible Hulk]

M-Var!o, time is of the essence
im the teacher, you the student so theres no questions
0/5
ya styles like that of a pansy
ima murder ya young shit like jean bennett ramsey
1/5
ima split ya skull in two n fuck up ya world
leave ya redheaded like the windys girl
1/5
when im threw with you
ur gonna transfer forums,like the bullied kid in skool
0/5
ya memory banks runnin on empty
while mines on full
ya think ya hot shit
but you justa cold sample of stool
1/10

3/30


this aint no joke....u hustle ? what does scoobie do?
fuck X? so you SHAG E, while i master blocks like a rubix cube
2/5
six bars is more than enough to make my point... in me i trust
what u said woulda slid/sled-dawg, for ICE u can get ya face mushed
1/5
make sure you do like me..go meet ya wifey on her knees if she like me
skeet have her wipen her face...looking like she tryna get hyphee
1/5
no homo but your homo...only whinnie the pooh would sound more gay
i bet you served time...and spent ya whole commisary on land-0-lakes
0/5
look at this fucker...i swear scoobie is the kinda bitch i hate most
how can you even appeal to the real...he still gets tricked by fake ghost
1/5
whats next? im hungry for more comp...and u give me a scoobie snack
this noobie's wack, nigga u could hang proof he's a nutered sack
1/5

6/30

Best bars from both:-

Scoobie
ima split ya skull in two n fuck up ya world
leave ya redheaded like the windys girl

vs

M-Vario
this aint no joke....u hustle ? what does scoobie do?
fuck X? so you SHAG E, while i master blocks like a rubix cube

Analysis
Scoobie your whole verse was pretty dreadful. I take it you're quite new to text and that verse took you 5 minutes tops. Read up on a few battles on how to get creative with your punches. M-Vario you were better but still at times your shit was pretty horrible too but you did attempt at wordplay,I'll put the lack of anything really decent down to the fact you just did enough to win.

V/ M-Vario

[QzA]

Scoob-
M-Var!o, time is of the essence
im the teacher, you the student so theres no questions
^^Uh....doesnt the student ask his teacher questions?
ya styles like that of a pansy
ima murder ya young shit like jean bennett ramsey
Nope!
ima split ya skull in two n fuck up ya world
leave ya redheaded like the windys girl
ok...HC type shit
when im threw with you
ur gonna transfer forums,like the bullied kid in skool
geezuss!
ya memory banks runnin on empty
while mines on full
ya think ya hot shit
but you justa cold sample of stool
LOL!!! I'm cracking up cuz that shit was beyond corny.....Orvill Redenbacher aint got shit on your last bar ROTF!!

MV-
this aint no joke....u hustle ? what does scoobie do?
fuck X? so you SHAG E, while i master blocks like a rubix cube
Nice bar...punch was just ok tho
six bars is more than enough to make my point... in me i trust
what u said woulda slid/sled-dawg, for ICE u can get ya face mushed
Dammmm!! that concept was raw!! You just didnt execute it correctly!...it barely grazed
make sure you do like me..go meet ya wifey on her knees if she like me
skeet have her wipen her face...looking like she tryna get hyphee
on the verge of corn.....not feeling this one.
no homo but your homo...only whinnie the pooh would sound more gay
i bet you served time...and spent ya whole commisary on land-0-lakes
Butter/gay prison sex=played concept.....stray away from the gay shit!
look at this fucker...i swear scoobie is the kinda bitch i hate most
how can you even appeal to the real...he still gets tricked by fake ghost
lol!! decent
whats next? im hungry for more comp...and u give me a scoobie snack
this noobie's wack, nigga u could hang proof he's a nutered sack
Shit!!! another raw concept and it wasnt executed right!

Man MV....you be on the verge of some monsterous shit but it seems like you rush through them to fininsh the bar but all in all it was an ok drop.

Scoob.....I know in your head some of that shit seems to be really insulting....but its not....its corny. I liked the horrorcore wendys girl line but thats about it.MV was more consistant and showed far more promise in this battle.Good luck next time Scoob.Gratz MV

V-MV

[143]

this is pretty one sided, didn;t see any hits from scoobie pretty much like a verse written like it was a battle

mv came a little harder made some good play a few punches. Both need to elevate but MV you are trying keep at it.

vote mv

[MV]

uppn

[Advantage]

scoobie:


M-Var!o, time is of the essence
im the teacher, you the student so theres no questions
short and weak
ya styles like that of a pansy
ima murder ya young shit like jean bennett ramsey
na
ima split ya skull in two n fuck up ya world
leave ya redheaded like the windys girl
hell no
when im threw with you
ur gonna transfer forums,like the bullied kid in skool
slant rhyme=noo
ya memory banks runnin on empty
while mines on full
ya think ya hot shit
but you justa cold sample of stool
wtf^

vs


M-Var!0

this aint no joke....u hustle ? what does scoobie do?
fuck X? so you SHAG E, while i master blocks like a rubix cube
lmao. wording coulda been betta

six bars is more than enough to make my point... in me i trust
what u said woulda slid/sled-dawg, for ICE u can get ya face mushed
na

make sure you do like me..go meet ya wifey on her knees if she like me
skeet have her wipen her face...looking like she tryna get hyphee
coulda been wittier

no homo but your homo...only whinnie the pooh would sound more gay
i bet you served time...and spent ya whole commisary on land-0-lakes
wtf is landolakes?

look at this fucker...i swear scoobie is the kinda bitch i hate most
how can you even appeal to the real...he still gets tricked by fake ghost
lmao...would like to see more bars like this

whats next? im hungry for more comp...and u give me a scoobie snack
this noobie's wack, nigga u could hang proof he's a nutered sack
not for end

scoobie your verse was too short coming to length of lines. You tried concepts but didnt wit them well at all. vario dont explain wordplay and work on delivery

v/mvario

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