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Vote for the better verse, not your friend lolz
DUE 1 HOUR MAX from Check Ins.
Check...
10 Lines
House Rules
No D/R - Noob or Loyalty Votes Please
Vote for the better verse, not your friend lolz
DUE 1 HOUR MAX from Check Ins.
Check...
*locks the door*
you're dead
...Lolz nah...you're dead my nigga...with a quick key...
Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
And I'm not lying, your attempts dude'll get ripped quick,
Cause i've seen better shots <-- at the special olympics.
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
you suck it's true...wack multis, plus...this man is a fairy.
So fuck a grave site <-- where you stand; you'll get burried.
Peep'em out...AK noob bodied you...your just lame as shit,
Plus your lines couldn't touch <-- should change to script.
Blahhh...Bodied.
Define
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...797/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=428691
Blah?? get off of Archs go-nads
Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Def, and cant see that your punches are old n played
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
lolz @ go-nads, you silly guy...
you like phat sack better???
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=428856
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...821/index.html
vote upz
Wow; I know niggas see this...smh BUMP.
Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
Vs.
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
v/ Know P. took this battle by a quotable. Not spectacular, i was generous with quotes for this battle. Not the best I've seen from P, and first shit i've seen from Def.
tube socks +
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
vs
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
+ trout n pole
Know got it. felt like D was tryna come all guns blazing but KP wasn't phased n jus killed it anyways.
v/KP
^ WTF? Aren't ya the same person yo...
uppin
define
isten dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
^^this was a good concept but wording killed its effect
badly could of been hard as hell.
So please give up...cause effortless, Def is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on RB <-- none of your punches do.
^^i liked this to. but 3 bar set up wasnt needed really could of been
set up regularly.
KP
Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Def, and cant see that your punches are old n played
^^i liked this kp but wordin could been better here lol
you so rushed this.
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
^^this was LOL i was laugin hard for some reason ok bar
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout
^^i get this lol but again your wording made me mad! lol
but decent
Overrall Kp not your best flat out you keyed this you didnt even proof read this imo lol but thoes 3 lines were the ones i felt stuck out. honestly define your first bar could of been dope your wording was bad just fix that an some bars didnt need to be in 3 bar format. fix your wording an if you would of done that an had solid shit you would of had this. kp stop being so lazy. lol
MVGT: KP
yup:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...646/index.html
OKC
lol at asia
uppin
punches :def (made more sense)
multis: def
flow: tie
wordplay: none To weak
nameplay: kp
CONSISTENCY: DEF
overall DEF TBH this battle is just WOW to me but W.E this battle i'm gonna rate on due to CONSISTENCY and def had that cat by a long shot
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