10 lines. 1 hour after checkin.
miracle
Rizzo-
10 lines. 1 hour after checkin.
im here
post w/e bro
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he's known to choke up - making him a joke to me...
rizzo could drool on a locksmith, and still cant spit on key/
beating me no chance - i'll wreck your face in...
imma take him down 1st....like new years decorations/
live or die, u dont have a choice- ur lifes in my hands..
and thats got u soda pressed u'd think i was crushing cola cans/(so depressed)
slice ya skin and crack ya ribs - just to open ya chest
then declare bankruptcy before killin u,
................................to see account down to ur death/(a count down)
this cunts thru he never does the dew..never sick, just flu
and you tryed out for every crew..AND still nobody wants you
^sorry needed 5
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...786/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...545/index.html
Check my badd I went to sleep last night broo.
Alright, Yea I challenged Miracle, Some people can say Im trippin.
There like yo you know he's the leader of Vylent Legion?
Im like yea so what, this dude sucks.
He has the force of a car, I have the power of two trucks.
So, Miracle, Do you know who you dissin?
Ill have you in critical condition.
Miracle is in VL, so he thinks he glistens.
For now call me a HitMan, And your the one I'm hittin.
And you know, that you'll need a miracle to be winnin?
'Cause this is a battle Ive been missin.
lets get some votes
he's known to choke up - making him a joke to me...
rizzo could drool on a locksmith, and still cant spit on key/
beating me no chance - i'll wreck your face in...
imma take him down 1st....like new years decorations/
live or die, u dont have a choice- ur lifes in my hands..
and thats got u soda pressed u'd think i was crushing cola cans/(so depressed)
slice ya skin and crack ya ribs - just to open ya chest
then declare bankruptcy before killin u,
................................to see account down to ur death/(a count down)
this cunts thru he never does the dew..never sick, just flu
and you tryed out for every crew..AND still nobody wants you
vs
Nothing
This was an obvious bodybag. Rizzo came with no punches, but at least he's got structure down. Miracle had some good lines, and his opener and subsequent bar was dope.
Vote/ Miracle, but keep at it Rizzo. You have potential to get better.
he's known to choke up - making him a joke to me...
rizzo could drool on a locksmith, and still cant spit on key/
vs nothin
one sided battle.. miracle some dope lines ur opener was fuckin dope.. rizzo no punches but good structure keep at it no hate
v/miracle
upps
he's known to choke up - making him a joke to me...
rizzo could drool on a locksmith, and still cant spit on key/
beating me no chance - i'll wreck your face in...
imma take him down 1st....like new years decorations/
live or die, u dont have a choice- ur lifes in my hands..
and thats got u soda pressed u'd think i was crushing cola cans
vs
none
Rizzo, work on content and gettin better punches. you had mad old punches and set up was really bad. Miracle, nice flips and word play dog. good punches from you, just work on structure and youll be goood.
v/ miracle
mira had a load of advanced tricks in his
riz, u didnt have 1
be back w/50
beating me no chance - i'll wreck your face in...
imma take him down 1st....like new years decorations/
live or die, u dont have a choice- ur lifes in my hands..
and thats got u soda pressed u'd think i was crushing cola cans/(so depressed)
slice ya skin and crack ya ribs - just to open ya chest
then declare bankruptcy before killin u,
................................to see account down to ur death/(a count down)
vs
nothing really.. I saw no punches man..
I think miracle came hella hard .. with his wordplay and just overall punches... his was an actual diss.. Rizzo's was just kinda talking about him it seems.. no real word play.. better flow but a horrible rhyme scheme..
v/ miracle
upp
please return the favor wit an honest vote on Uben. Sonned vs One Man Army.
As far this battle is concearned I believe Miracle came with harder punches and some decent concepts that were flipped nicely.
Rizzo needs to work on putting together some punchlines and content.
Vote/Miracle
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