~feed-back~ vs Alyse Flowers'

[The Archetype]

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Verses: Fri Midnight EST (see rules thread for further detail)
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6-0 KO rule, 10 votes=auto win

[Alyse Miller]

hey FB : )... 10?

[~feed-back~]

yes ma'am.

[Alyse Miller]

This faggot will do anythin to relive his glory days, as a vets lunch
"The Darkest region of your mind"...ware he visits after a sucker punch
Fact is Maf, nick, n' hush Tossed you in the talent pool as bait
LLL n' Fbs League ^matches related-both share 3 Ls for common traits
Face it bitch, its lightnin when my punches connect clashes
if its "static to follow"<---then it'll be shockin if he actually win matches
I feel sorry for ya chick, an to think you had mad game n' shit
Cos last Time he attempted a beatin...he got mased at first Base wit a bitch
a Brawler? nigga, you swing misses n i'll feel ashamed if i was you
Cos the only lie bout his user-title...is follow Which his Punches Never do

[~feed-back~]

Alyse aint making a dent in this rap shit, she's in a breed all on her own
so if this bitch's markin her territory its in the yard by the garden gnome
its amazing you're in a crew. never thought you'd have guys behind your back
cuz you've always dropped straight cheeks n now your ass as flat as your raps
dont assume you're winning this shit either. thinking like that'll get you smoked
going through so many withdrawls, banking on ya woman's intuition'll leave you broke
i've got a flow constructed by the gods, there's no way you could body me
cuz im burning the comp n you couldnt get a flow, kraken in greek mythology
i've deflowered you,still you're a dirty whore n no sponge could keep Alyse in place
so fuck getting a date...some soap and a tub of water's a threesome we all would appreciate

[KnowP]

This faggot will do anythin to relive his glory days, as a vets lunch
"The Darkest region of your mind"...ware he visits after a sucker punch
-not really
Fact is Maf, nick, n' hush Tossed you in the talent pool as bait
LLL n' Fbs League ^matches related-both share 3 Ls for common traits
-worded bad but i see it
Face it bitch, its lightnin when my punches connect clashes
if its "static to follow"<---then it'll be shockin if he actually win matches
-nice
I feel sorry for ya chick, an to think you had mad game n' shit
Cos last Time he attempted a beatin...he got mased at first Base wit a bitch
-nah
a Brawler? nigga, you swing misses n i'll feel ashamed if i was you
Cos the only lie bout his user-title...is follow Which his Punches Never do
-ok


vs


Alyse aint making a dent in this rap shit, she's in a breed all on her own
so if this bitch's markin her territory its in the yard by the garden gnome
-lol
its amazing you're in a crew. never thought you'd have guys behind your back
cuz you've always dropped straight cheeks n now your ass as flat as your raps
-nah
dont assume you're winning this shit either. thinking like that'll get you smoked
going through so many withdrawls, banking on ya woman's intuition'll leave you broke
-too much of a stretch
i've got a flow constructed by the gods, there's no way you could body me
cuz im burning the comp n you couldnt get a flow, kraken in greek mythology
-nice
i've deflowered you,still you're a dirty whore n no sponge could keep Alyse in place
so fuck getting a date...some soap and a tub of water's a threesome we all would appreciate
-ROFL


ok battle. both had some good punches, but Flow had more misses than FB this round. His verse ended with some good shots.

v/ FB

[Slowhands]

This faggot will do anythin to relive his glory days, as a vets lunch
"The Darkest region of your mind"...ware he visits after a sucker punch
- meh weak
Fact is Maf, nick, n' hush Tossed you in the talent pool as bait
LLL n' Fbs League ^matches related-both share 3 Ls for common traits
- nah
Face it bitch, its lightnin when my punches connect clashes
if its "static to follow"<---then it'll be shockin if he actually win matches
- lol decent
I feel sorry for ya chick, an to think you had mad game n' shit
Cos last Time he attempted a beatin...he got mased at first Base wit a bitch
- nah
a Brawler? nigga, you swing misses n i'll feel ashamed if i was you
Cos the only lie bout his user-title...is follow Which his Punches Never do
- weak


vs


Alyse aint making a dent in this rap shit, she's in a breed all on her own
so if this bitch's markin her territory its in the yard by the garden gnome
- nah, seen this alot tbh
its amazing you're in a crew. never thought you'd have guys behind your back
cuz you've always dropped straight cheeks n now your ass as flat as your raps
- nah
dont assume you're winning this shit either. thinking like that'll get you smoked
going through so many withdrawls, banking on ya woman's intuition'll leave you broke
- seen the 'intuition' concept on her already
i've got a flow constructed by the gods, there's no way you could body me
cuz im burning the comp n you couldnt get a flow, kraken in greek mythology
- ok
i've deflowered you,still you're a dirty whore n no sponge could keep Alyse in place
so fuck getting a date...some soap and a tub of water's a threesome we all would appreciate
- lol


Overall - pretty even battle, but kinda weak. Alyse had the line of the battle with the static shit tbh, if she had a bar or two more of consistent punches she would have taken this imo, but feed back hit once or twice more so i got him taking it by a hair, up.

v - fb

[Cody Nash]

This faggot will do anythin to relive his glory days, as a vets lunch
"The Darkest region of your mind"...ware he visits after a sucker punch
ware?? really?? anyway.. weak punch
Fact is Maf, nick, n' hush Tossed you in the talent pool as bait
LLL n' Fbs League ^matches related-both share 3 Ls for common traits
ehh... bad wording
Face it bitch, its lightnin when my punches connect clashes
if its "static to follow"<---then it'll be shockin if he actually win matches
nope...
I feel sorry for ya chick, an to think you had mad game n' shit
Cos last Time he attempted a beatin...he got mased at first Base wit a bitch
okay...
a Brawler? nigga, you swing misses n i'll feel ashamed if i was you
Cos the only lie bout his user-title...is follow Which his Punches Never do
not feelin it

vs

Alyse aint making a dent in this rap shit, she's in a breed all on her own
so if this bitch's markin her territory its in the yard by the garden gnome
eh nope
its amazing you're in a crew. never thought you'd have guys behind your back
cuz you've always dropped straight cheeks n now your ass as flat as your raps
okay..
dont assume you're winning this shit either. thinking like that'll get you smoked
going through so many withdrawls, banking on ya woman's intuition'll leave you broke
eh okay
i've got a flow constructed by the gods, there's no way you could body me
cuz im burning the comp n you couldnt get a flow, kraken in greek mythology
nah...
i've deflowered you,still you're a dirty whore n no sponge could keep Alyse in place
so fuck getting a date...some soap and a tub of water's a threesome we all would appreciate
okay...





bleh... vote feedback

[Tettris]

i've deflowered you,still you're a dirty whore n no sponge could keep Alyse in place
so fuck getting a date...some soap and a tub of water's a threesome we all would appreciate

vs

nothing

v/feedback

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

its amazing you're in a crew. never thought you'd have guys behind your back
cuz you've always dropped straight cheeks n now your ass as flat as your raps
i've deflowered you,still you're a dirty whore n no sponge could keep Alyse in place
so fuck getting a date...some soap and a tub of water's a threesome we all would appreciate

vs


nada


alyse eur wording is shit and fb u was lack here man


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