CalamityClamSlam VS NathMB

[Yazoo]

10 lines, due 1 hour, check ... links coming

[CalamityClamSlam]

Check.

[Yazoo]

You claim to have originality but your ryhmes are all the same,
stunted from birth, little bitch's foolishy reaching for fame,
I saw your other battles, against that fresh kid, man that shit was weak,
he didn't even show up, yet were still hangin' by the skin of your teeth,
Dick head I ain't an athlete, but I can still knock you for 6 fam,
people will think i'ma sportsman the way I own the clam slam,
Calamity:an event resulting in great loss and misfortune - meaning of his name,
This idiots been here 5 minutes ... yet he's already turned the gun on his brain,
vista, xp, 96 - naming operating systems makes me a good rapper!
no ... it just means real emcees can destroy you faster,

quick keystyle



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[CalamityClamSlam]

I may be new to this place, but get one thing straight
I'll be the kid setting the mother fucking pace
Like Ricky Bobby, there's only one spot for me in this race
Pull out while you can man, maybe you can save some face
Or you can do like your father, stay in and wind up with a mistake
You may be black, but the only hood you'll see is on your Volvo '98
Kid I'll tell you this, I ain't ever killed a man in the streets
But as you're all witnessing I'm killin' one right now with my beats
I'm fucking elite, and I welcome you to the one-man show
I play games like your sister, hi-ho-popped-her-cherry-OH


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[Switch.]

I saw your other battles, against that fresh kid, man that shit was weak,
he didn't even show up, yet were still hangin' by the skin of your teeth,
Meh ok i suppose
Dick head I ain't an athlete, but I can still knock you for 6 fam,
people will think i'ma sportsman the way I own the clam slam,
Alright

vs

Or you can do like your father, stay in and wind up with a mistake
You may be black, but the only hood you'll see is on your Volvo '98
Okay

weak battle but NathMB edged it for better attempts at punches and bein slightly more clever with his lines even though they didnt hit that hard. Both of you need to elevate but CCS u seem like u might have potential ..i cud be wrong or i cud be right only time will tell. No hate to either though.

V/NMB

[Extortion]

mb:
You claim to have originality but your ryhmes are all the same,
stunted from birth, little bitch's foolishy reaching for fame,
weak open imo 2/5
I saw your other battles, against that fresh kid, man that shit was weak,
he didn't even show up, yet were still hangin' by the skin of your teeth,
cool flow but meh 3/5
Dick head I ain't an athlete, but I can still knock you for 6 fam,
people will think i'ma sportsman the way I own the clam slam,
nah man 2/5
Calamity:an event resulting in great loss and misfortune - meaning of his name,
This idiots been here 5 minutes ... yet he's already turned the gun on his brain,
lol decent 4/5
vista, xp, 96 - naming operating systems makes me a good rapper!
no ... it just means real emcees can destroy you faster,
decent 3/5
total:14/25

vs

clam:
I may be new to this place, but get one thing straight
I'll be the kid setting the mother fucking pace
no punch here, lay off self glory 1/5
Like Ricky Bobby, there's only one spot for me in this race
Pull out while you can man, maybe you can save some face
naht feelin that 0/5
Or you can do like your father, stay in and wind up with a mistake
You may be black, but the only hood you'll see is on your Volvo '98
lol weakish coz of words but ok concept 3/5
Kid I'll tell you this, I ain't ever killed a man in the streets
But as you're all witnessing I'm killin' one right now with my beats
nah nah mah 1/5
I'm fucking elite, and I welcome you to the one-man show
I play games like your sister, hi-ho-popped-her-cherry-OH
3/5?
total:8/25

mb took this no problem but both of you need to work on your verse wording, concepts
no hate
rtf honestly plz

mb>clam

[Keylo]

vote 4 NathMB Calamity's verse was too focused on flow and rhyme scheme to be a solid battle verse..nath mb's verse wasnt the greatest but it was enough to beat his opponent's. didnt really catch any hot lines..nath's first 4 bars were bout the best in the battle..but nice bout y'all

peace

[CalamityClamSlam]

Up1

[Yazoo]

uppin

[CalamityClamSlam]

upp

[Puncha Blurta]

Calamity:an event resulting in great loss and misfortune - meaning of his name,
This idiots been here 5 minutes ... yet he's already turned the gun on his brain,
vista, xp, 96 - naming operating systems makes me a good rapper!
no ... it just means real emcees can destroy you faster,

^^ 1st of those 2 is dope, 2nd coulda been better but i liked it
MB, u took dis one pretty easy 2

clam, u need to work on actually building punches, i noticed that u wasted time talking about urself a litte, fuck that, jus come with the fuckin flame right from word go, aint always easy to do but us take ya time with it an elevate

[Rhyme Schemes]

I saw your other battles, against that fresh kid, man that shit was weak,
he didn't even show up, yet were still hangin' by the skin of your teeth,
alright but when did he battle me?
Dick head I ain't an athlete, but I can still knock you for 6 fam,
people will think i'ma sportsman the way I own the clam slam,
not bad
Calamity:an event resulting in great loss and misfortune - meaning of his name,
This idiots been here 5 minutes ... yet he's already turned the gun on his brain,
nice

vs

Or you can do like your father, stay in and wind up with a mistake
You may be black, but the only hood you'll see is on your Volvo '98

calamity you gotta work on how to structure a proper punch, read some LLL and practise in the cypher a bit, keep battlin and youll only get better to bro but my vote goes to

v/ NathMB

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