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Thread: Torture Methods ft. mc81

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    Torture Methods ft. mc81

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    i'mma cereal killer ready to test limits of humanpain...lets commense...
    to kidnappin ya family shit i'm murderin ya moms ina sentance~/~
    ropes ready to linch kids...now what ya offense isdefenseless...
    rippin you pussies like sororiety bitches with
    stalkers on ya campus's~/~
    deploy death i'm drivin rusty nails in the deepest
    of ya vien...evil riens...shit syn and MC test the limits of
    morbidly pain~/~
    insane nah we just wired,capable to eventually ripskin....
    stop bichin gasoline ya family til they itchin with
    they chest singed in~/~
    demented i'll choke a oxygen mask till lungs
    collapse and ya pass out....
    fast mouths get crushed in i'm the devil child born
    in storms under a rain cloud~/~
    snap backs....drive railroad stake threw you ...gotthis kid scared to talk...scared to walk ....fuck iding this victim you can't outline parts in chalk~/~


    mc81

    This world doesn't lack killing, nor blood spilling...
    But I'll be the last to cease murders in newspaper
    clippings
    Think i care when tears shed? Got A Betta Chanze of
    Givin Away Beer Kegs, I'll Trash Ya Specs
    Opposite Sex? I don't care as long as Snappin Necks,
    And Give use to Tecks
    Cuz Ya Pain I Thrive, I'll Gouge out Ya Eyes, Just So
    I Can't Hear Tears Dry, I'll put you In Flight
    Despite Ya Fright, I'll Fill Your Legs Up With Clips
    So Now Peeps Can Call You Thunder Thighs
    Despite No Hate, I'll Determine Ya Fate, Leave Your
    Mind Outta State
    Like Progressive Insurance I'm Killin You At a Great
    Rate, Imma Take more Than Estate
    I'll Amptutate Ya Limbs so Now You can Dodge Hits with
    Agility
    Ya Chances of Survivin Are Slimmer than an Anorexic
    Community

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    feedback plz...

    drop a link for feedback and i will give u some... btw this is my first ever poetical thingy... man that feels good to get all that outta my head...
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    upppin for this.....................................

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    yo both of you came strong

    rippin you pussies like sororiety bitches with
    stalkers on ya campus's~/~

    very strong punch mad props but it was also the strongest the others though good lacked the same umph

    mc81
    This world doesn't lack killing, nor blood spilling...
    But I'll be the last to cease murders in newspaper
    clippings
    Think i care when tears shed? Got A Betta Chanze of
    Givin Away Beer Kegs, I'll Trash Ya Specs
    Opposite Sex? I don't care as long as Snappin Necks,
    And Give use to Tecks

    all that was hot top props

    Cuz Ya Pain I Thrive, I'll Gouge out Ya Eyes, Just So
    I Can't Hear Tears Dry, I'll put you In Flight
    Despite Ya Fright, I'll Fill Your Legs Up With Clips
    So Now Peeps Can Call You Thunder Thighs
    Despite No Hate, I'll Determine Ya Fate, Leave Your
    Mind Outta State

    none of it made that much sence

    Like Progressive Insurance I'm Killin You At a Great
    Rate, Imma Take more Than Estate
    I'll Amptutate Ya Limbs so Now You can Dodge Hits with
    Agility
    Ya Chances of Survivin Are Slimmer than an Anorexic
    Community

    real ill you cats sound good togeather just lacked a lil build on it and you will be mass ill
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    thanx for the feedback fam...

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    no prob peep me and noe brayna on neva b famus
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    the bars got really jammed up, iono that may have messed up the flow, it looks better on notepad.


    can i get some more feedback?

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    good topic and most of tha vocab was on point,flow was there,wordplay was patchy but in some cases good,all in one a nice collab,8/10.Good verse for a first collab.

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    thanx for the feedback... UPPIN on this...

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    uppin on this thanks for the posts..............

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    Uppin for feedback on this piece...

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    niceness......SynText had better vocabulary in this...u both had some tight flows....nice topic....agree with west on a majority....nice collab....esp. for first collab i've seen SynText in......mc81...u had some nice shit too...u had a better flow...and u was more on point than SynText....but Syn had u in vocabulary........

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    ayo thanks for the probs smoka lets get some more crits...................................

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    uppin man lets get some more feedback.

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