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Thread: Notebook Piece: Hiphop

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    You've Earned a Custom Title! Manimal!'s Avatar
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    Notebook Piece: Hiphop

    The Second Of Three Pieces I Write On The Train Goin Down To Barmouth, Several Kids Have Asked Me To Post Them, So Here. .



    Hiphop

    Fuck the pop chart, hiphop's my life & i love the art,
    to the point my bloods breakdancing to the beatbox of my heart
    These stop / start Candy Rappers are Decaying whats right
    Hiphop is Not a type of music, its a Culture, a way of life.
    On mics, we entertain, and for those who are not sure -
    Rhythm And Poetry is exactly what 'RAP' stands for.
    Not violence, drugs & graffiti, which is pertained as threatening
    Tag writers are freely expressing using 3-D Dimensions.
    Pops merely a reflection that saw a gap in the market,
    made Pop stars go RnB, thus using rap as a target
    But artists such as myself, sit back & laugh cuz its funny
    when people like Timberlake are Justin it for the money.
    They know nothing, or very little, of the culture their tryna riddle
    Sure, the cash and fame would be nice, but its the music i live for
    Not material objects, i still cut wax with the best,
    and leave Bass Loops with High Hats in a Cymbal of suspense
    Ever since i grasped that first spray can & began to write,
    that wall became my work place, it was love at first Site.
    Id practice every night, phats & slims were my chosen tools
    Using faster pace to create a masterpiece of Old Skool
    Where bold ruled, high top fades were the latest craze,
    Nowadays itsthought 'Bein Real' means singing about gays
    Yet im winning without praise, your revealing the true bitch in you
    thinking your "Backpacker" cause of the music you listen to.
    If you strongly believe that, then please, Stop
    Because if you dont live it, then your not Hiphop.

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    WOW

    This was really dope...there was some remarkable wordplay

    Dope as fuck

    Everything was relevance to your topic...styaed on that well...flow was flawles throughout

    Some strong messages in there...seemed like they were planned to be in there...seemed personal to yourself as well

    Hit on realitys as gays...the growing popularity of hip hop...and grafitti

    Fo real...this was one of the best open mics i seen if not the best...

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    I dropped to show RM what hot was;
    And this faggot got Butterflies in his stomach the size of Mothra

    Your text is just another weak display
    One fist to your eye'll make it go through that black album remix phase. - Saviour Arraign

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    This has too be one of the WHACKEST piece I have ever read......Just playing...lol..Yo man on the real Note , this piece was Fire........Your Flow was off the chain , Your Lyrics related too the topic throughout this piece......It had a strong message...Your Wordplay was Tight as hell...............I liked that one line ........when people like Timberlake are Justin it for the money.........lol , Tight Line right there dawg...........Some cats who read this piece , might not understand that line.............Overall I give this open mic a 9/10......

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    Damn dude that shit was awesome!!! the flow couldnt have been better, the wordplay kicked ass, and the message that u delivered was fuckin awesome. i loved readin it and id rate it a nine and half outta ten. GREAT SHIT!!!!

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    YO I FIRST OFF I APRRECIATE THE FEEDBACK DAWG. NOW YOUR FLOW COMES TO ME IN ONE WORD. DOPE! I love the message and the wordplay is insane. good shit. I even learned a couple of things just readin you know? Keep an eye out for me dawg. Im always lookin for advice and comments.
    -Peace

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    yo now doubt i cant diss a damn thing on this peace it was ill no doubt
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    I've seen this concept somewhere before.. lol

    Fuck the pop chart, hiphop's my life & i love the art,
    to the point my bloods breakdancing to the beatbox of my heart
    ^Wow.

    Rhythm And Poetry is exactly what 'RAP' stands for
    ^Nice.

    I liked this piece and you name as well. lol

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    ^ Lol.

    I Posted This A Day Or Two Before You Posted Yours On The Same Subject = )

    I Didnt Want To Post This, I Like To Hold Pieces Back That I Write For The Fuck Of It But Kids Wanted To See It So I Wrote It Up Yesterday For My Die-Hard Fans To See!

    Glad You Liked The Name, Im Also Camarac, Baron Mynd, Vortex, Bob Afett - You'll See The Names Around The Board In The 'Legends' Forum A Lot. .

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    Nice drop, good flow, nice vocab....could make a good audio, ...i liked readin this piece, was real nice....and a good message in it...props to u...peace

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    Yo Yo Yo,yo props to you dawg,felt this drop entirely,all round as tight as i've seen from a new kat,not much to critique coz most was all good,so 9/10.

    Peace

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    Im Not New, West. .

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    Nice Peice Man....
    I can see that you really spend much more time on your peices than me.....haha....i hate spenidng time on shit....but i gotta break that habbit.....
    Topic...Nice...I dont think i've seen it before...might have but i dont rememebr....

    Your flow was sick....Followed it the whole way.....
    Nice wordplay...That justin line was sick....i had to read it over cuz i was like "wait, what?" haha....but i get it....

    Nice

    Overall- 9/10

    Thanks for checking out mine too



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    G.Hod
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    As a "die-hard fan" I am disappointed. . Gramatically, you're a bastard; you've never dropped a piece that didn't have good mechanics in every aspect. But you can think of a better topic than this, in my opinion.

    However, as I read it over for the second time, I can't help but notice a few stand-out lines:

    Not material objects, i still cut wax with the best,
    and leave Bass Loops with High Hats in a Cymbal of suspense
    Where bold ruled, high top fades were the latest craze,
    Nowadays itsthought 'Bein Real' means singing about gays
    Yet im winning without praise, your revealing the true bitch in you
    thinking your "Backpacker" cause of the music you listen to.
    Those were great lines. .

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    Of course i can do better topics, this was just the second of three pieces i wrote while on the train down to Barmouth, i wouldnt have bothered posting it if that kid hadnt asked me to for him. .

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    Pretty sick shit man... I like the whole spin of it. Pretty sick wordplay. Keep it up. Hit me up with some feedback on my shits...

    Late.

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