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Thread: The Struggle (Debut Song)

  1. August 24th, 2003, 10:54 AM #1
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    Exclamation The Struggle (Debut Song)

    This is not a freestyle... My first self produced... i think i slipped on a small part i finished it at about 6 in the morning... and started it at 1 in the morn.... but yea everyone wont feel this one im sure, but i do.. maybe cuz its my life i dunno. so holla back some feedback and drop a link if u wanna......
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  2. August 24th, 2003, 01:19 PM #2
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    uppin wtf? no views ;/
  3. August 24th, 2003, 04:52 PM #3
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    i gotchu..........listenin........is that a camron beat.....chopped up.....i feelin the beat...........shits mashin.....lyrics is tight........not lyrical.......you speak truth.....i like that...........flow is off at times........wanna make a remix.....pm me....you kno i bring heat
  4. August 25th, 2003, 12:05 AM #4
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    uppin.. Will someone give me some feedback or sumtin... shit... y is it so hard to take 2 mins to type a little sumtin.........................
  5. August 25th, 2003, 12:17 PM #5
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  6. August 25th, 2003, 06:59 PM #6
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    Ha ha ha ha ha ha, so here we are. It's the other way around now huh. Unlike you I will not be biases.

    Ok first things first, how old are you son, cause it siound like you 9 years old on the joint. Your voice is soft, like a babies ass. Your vocals lack emotion. Sound like you readin it. I became, a little uninterested, until I heard the ...uhh...was that a hook. At first I thought you was on some R. Kelly Shit (C'Mon Lil Girl Hold ya head up).

    Nevertheless, good effort, you had to get ya naked ass out here sometime.
  7. August 25th, 2003, 08:51 PM #7
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    lol... actually the emotion was good when i recorded.... but in the mixing to make it fit the beat it makes the sound more monotone which takes away from the emotion..... but yea anyways i did it soft for a reason.... and i got one more year of highschool.... but yea i figured everyone wouldnt feel it... but thanx for ya comment/feedback.
  8. August 27th, 2003, 03:43 AM #8
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  9. August 27th, 2003, 12:38 PM #9
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    You got it backwards man, you make your voice fit the beat. Actually they're supposed to compliment each other,............................................ .................................................. ...................
  10. August 28th, 2003, 10:42 AM #10
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    wasn't really feelin it.....beat was garbage.....production was ok.....ummmmm lyrics were ok.."going to school with the same high yellow t-shirt"....lol....yea sum things you say really make sense if other people understand you and what you really spittin.....but you sound like dead, or like you tryin to rap loud but you can't.....you should work on this track a little more and make sum changes, then it should be straight.....holla!






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