ayura vs banga

[DaBanga]

Originally posted by WALLBANGER
ok heres the rules if you really serious.....
u spit first
no dr h c votes
dont take too long
10-30 lines
no feeding or bitin
holla and i'l set up

spit

[DaBanga]

you gonna spit or what?.......................______________________ ______________________________________

[/:Ayura:\]

checkin in



5 -spectrums- on my -knuckles-//
Punches leaving you seeing -multiple-colours- lying on a -rainbow-//
-Bent-halo-, with weak electrodes -statics-that- package- -lame-flow-//
ill need is a ?ruler? that doesnt ?seem?to?end?//
cus thats how long you'll ?sleep?my?friend?//
feel ya ?spirits-decend? from the matter of ya physical form//
then i'll battle you in heaven just once -more-//
just to prove god -wrong- that i am the -true-storm-//
you merely a pawn being pushed around in this fo-rum//
not for long, my ?piracy techniques? will get you pushed of this ?board?//
you could get fucked on all ?fours?, like a ?horse? still you dont bring no ?4orce?//
couldnt knock -off- a pencil balancing on a oil-based-ball-//
?teeth bricks? | ?saliva cement?, you can almost ?taste-this-wall?//
extracting ya energy source, results show your not energy effiecient at all//
you versus me, its like the naked human vs Da [b]M[b/]ega Xenomorph//
conducting realm shifts from darkness to lightness//
theres absolutely no differance in your apperance//
you still - look - like - shit//
a weakling trying to make living over dissing//
the record labels will refuse before you even enter the building//

oh, by da way:

im making a documentry about WALLBANGA with a ?home camera?//
its called ?"weak at all angles"?, realesed in Edmonton, Canada......................

[/:Ayura:\]

aight my bad, done a few mistakes there, limme repost:



5 -spectrums- on my -knuckles-//
Punches leaving you seeing -multiple-colours- lying on a -rainbow-//
-Bent-halo-, with weak electrodes -statics-that- package- -lame-flow-//
ill need is a ?ruler? that doesnt ?seem?to?end?//
cus thats how ?long? you'll ?sleep?my?friend?//
feel ya ?spirits-decend? from the matter of ya physical form//
then i'll battle you in heaven just once -more-//
just to prove god -wrong- that i am the -true-storm-//
you merely a pawn being pushed around in this fo-rum//
not for long, my ?piracy techniques? will get you pushed of this ?board?//
you could get fucked on all ?fours?, like a ?horse? still you dont bring no ?4orce?//
couldnt knock -off- a pencil balancing on a oil-based-ball-//
?teeth bricks? | ?saliva cement?, you can almost ?taste-this-wall?//
extracting ya energy source, results show your not energy effiecient at all//
you versus me, its like the naked human vs Da Mega Xenomorph//
conducting realm shifts from darkness to lightness//
theres absolutely no differance in your apperance//
you still - look - like - shit//
a weakling trying to make living over dissing//
the record labels will refuse before you even enter the building//

oh, by da way:

im making a documentry about WALLBANGA with a ?home camera?//
its called ?"weak at all angles"?, realesed in Edmonton, Canada......................

[/:Ayura:\]

uppin this battle-kitten to be spitting.......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........

[9~MIllAMETER]

uppin for
sum cats to hit my battle up
an ill hit htis up
fosho
pc................................................ ..........uppin for em both

[9~MIllAMETER]

i jsut read ya verse hmmmm banger shud take this one easy
sum ya shit didnt even make sense or rhymes
no real personals an alot of fake punches just tellin u wut u need to hear
u shud make it more easier to read an have it flow better an actaully have real personals an punches

[DaBanga]

ok i just got hame and spittin soon.............................................. ......................................

[DaBanga]

you hold onto ya dick like candy cause if you let go its gone/
only way you get girls is if you drug up ya mom/

you beatin me is like a hole in one on a par five/
i'll kill this kid at such a small age people ask "he was alive?"/

i'll spit fire lyrics that punch and move fast/
better know a good doctor cause your gonna need a body cast/

this kids the inventor of "fruit" and the maker of "queer as folk"/
have this cat on the ground with my lyrical smoke, only one toke/

you couldnt make hot spit if you lit shit on fire/
he siad he liked women and wasnt gay,and called me a lier/

i spit right in ya face so you can "taste what im spittin"/
skin your body and leave ya eyes last so you can "see what im rippin"/

im hittin this cat with ease like hittin a fat chick with giant set of car keys/
any last words before i kill you, and all you said was no nigga please/

..::..::finishin::..::..
my shits ambidexterous, hit you left and right equally/
just the look of your face brings out the "freak-in-me"/

you couldnt spell good rap if you was givin a tracer/
i'll rip up ya life up as if i was an eraser/

im slicin this rap up like hs "splinter" and im "shredder"/
ya "ninja" boys cant help you now, you be seein a "red-blur"/

hope you like blood cause you'll be sheddin out lots/
burn ya ass to a crisp like an oven and tater-tots/

my shits comlex like an enigma wrapped in a puzzle/
only time you close to spit is when you "cum-guzzle"/

you spit satisfactory shit worse than your report card effort/
i bang down ya walls of your skill lackin fort/

you impetint bitch cant get your dick to stand upright/
he wouldnt get a boner if carmen electra fingered her pussy tight/

im a lyrical assassin with aim like msn/(lol "aim" as in contacting)
and my rhymes connect like your pussy with other men//

i didnt take nearly as long as you...o well....uppin for votes

[Tupac55]

Yo this wasent even close and i aint feel like x-planin But................

Vote Banger........................


banger if you wouldent space out your lines so much it weould flow easier............


Peace ~UNO~

[rApId_LyRiCs]

i say banger took it wit more punches and his made more sense....you need creativity tho it was kinda basic...............

vote= banger

[DaBanga]

uppin numba 1_________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ________

[DaBanga]

uppin 2 .................................................. .............................................

[Rappad]

OH DEAR LORD
Wallbanger merked
him
This shit wasn't close
The other cat put up a decent verse, but flow was completely missing.
Vote=wallbanger
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[DaBanga]

uppin 3 and dont sleep on this battle,........................................... ..............................................