You just returned home from war and no one recognizes u. What's going through your mind. from deadproof fuck u if u think im stealing.
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You just returned home from war and no one recognizes u. What's going through your mind. from deadproof fuck u if u think im stealing.
16 lines.
due before midnight.
dont look like this guy ---> :hung:
and yea..
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WORLD WAR II
The holocaust is over, I just want to forget about the harsh times through the years..
Fallin asleep on the planeride home, still hearin gunshots and tanks that are changin gears..
Generals yellin at us, move it soldier, we have to take out the enemy! In the harsh heat..
Thoughts about the frag grenades exploding, each time I'd jump a lil in my
seat..
I'm back now, arriving in Tampa Florida., just hope my family sent a ride for..
Waited about an hour, holdin my old clothes, still dressed in my military uniform..
Get a cab, I recognize the driver, hey Tony how's it goin? I'm finally back from war..
he says welcome back but I've never seen you before.. Then slams the trunk door..
That's odd, well must not be him, can't wait to see my mother.. She'll be so happy n suprised..
But it was about two days away to her house, so I stayed in a hotel and left at sunrise..
Finally arrived, her cars parked out in front so I knew she'd be home, it was around 4..
So I got my bags out the cab, payed the tab, and approached the door..
Hey mom! I'm back! And I gave her and my dad a big hug,
But they didn't know who I was.. And told me 'to get out thug'
But I'm your son.. You don't recognize Me? I grew up under you and daddies care..
All the sudden I woke up in Germany under a tent.. And I smelled gunsmoke in the air..
Looking through the plane window thinking to himself..
2 years in Okinawa I don’t know if ill be the same,
Torn bodies in Defeat Rivers of Blood toll numbers gain
...Graphic themes my day dreams flash.....
I look down at my home I stare blank on what’s been changing,
I been away for so long through my letters I was always grieving,
My families connection kept me tied down to reality...
The Plane lands...
Look at all these memorable faces I see my loved ones,
Arms open wide as a smile as long as the San Diego bridge....
I stand still ware I stepped off but they stood still in cringe,
Why they not run so? It’s as they looking through me,
My heart freeze an drops with a tear blur my eye see,
he approaches them...
Stepping closer they step back from my presence,
I yell to them “it’s me your father" but there eyes...
Stared a dagger straight though my spirit,
Pain shot through I was heart broken I admit,
I felt as my families love turned on me as a hypocrite
He watches them walk away as he cries...
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sorry i cant vote asia lol we in crew but i bump for you ha!
lol^^
yu silly yu must be high but you aint have to do that loser ha ha i could of upped it!
but upp1
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LMAO people are gonna vote for u because u put it like that, like "oo she put yellow and stuff def. vote for her" -.-
Aw shut up upp #3
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last upp#4 i used upp all my upps an not even 1 vote.. lol
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upp5 we get 7 upps never mind lol
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aight, to look at these from the pioints, tex had alot of imagry and detail, seemed almost more like somthing similier to what ive done, where asia, seemd to have a bit more emotion anfd feling, bnoth where good,
so,
aight structure-asia stanza -text wordplay-asia body-text filler-tie met-asia
w/asia
""If you write for yourself or a loved one, you can never be wrong!!!!""
-The world makes me cold,the marines make me thoughtless-the difference between you and me is, thats just it...
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