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Ra Ill
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your weak sauce & you wont be heard of in the mag or premier
look kid you could win for only being a fag slash queer.
your not even ill with the flow & not top notch with ya writes
he's the snitch type that rides like a cop a squat on bikes.
im not looking forward to losing i just comence the brusieing
but his verse is never heard of like when they cement his shoeings.
& im seeing that this poor chump cant write a dope verse
& this kid spits so much filler it could enlight the whole universe.
he could kick push and shove - and still get no love
he gets a five finger discount on sex by sticking his dick in a oil filled glove.
Yo Ra man, how do you do it , you rap the sickest
Too bad, you don't got enough fans to back it bitch
Ra can't get behind the bars, even if he got arrested
My style you couldn't touch, even if you try and molest it
Trying to beat me in a battle , really and truly is frail brother
Your RB career is going down the drain like a 'failed plumber'
Any day yo, Lost murders wacks with lyrically precised ease
Bout to get fucked dead by words like necrophiliacs giving a eulogy
Lord knows your a geek , and that's not even the worst
every punch you throw is just a 'poor joke in a weak verse'
uppin ....feed?
uppin
im not looking forward to losing i just comence the brusieing
but his verse is never heard of like when they cement his shoeings.
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nothing
i gotta say ra got this, it was an ok battle i guess but lost just didnt really connect with a lot of his lines and i have to say thats all that mattered
v/ ra ill
hit my battle w/ puzzle
A.rtificial I.ntelligence
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not much. nothing isnt really worth quoting to be honest. if i had to choose who won this, it would be ra ill considering he made the least amount of mistakes and Lost Sanitys verse was just way wack.
vote il
Originally Posted by King Ancel
I agree with Ancel.
I say Ra Ill won the match because he had slightly better punches, that hit a little hard than the other guy. Other guy, work on your wording and find fresher concepts.
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..Distinct Advantage..
^ Pretty much
ill came decent....i've seen alot better
i like the cement line also, which was probably ur best....the closer was ok
sanity ur text is promising.....shorter lines dont give the full impact but they were ok
The touch line was a bit played....also a few others...like the drain line
Keep workin on ur concepts.....
overall vote=Ill
im not looking forward to losing i just comence the brusieing
but his verse is never heard of like when they cement his shoeings.
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NA
LS didnt really have any eye-poppin verses. good attempts but no conversions
Ra won this one with this one bar I believe.
LS, you gotta bring the punches alive a lil better and you could of won this battle
v/ Ra
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