Monster's ink vs The Archetype

[Raydeoh]

Your existence is pointless. Everything about you says it sucks
He tried to give his life the old heave ho...
But couldn't lift his girlfriend up
DECENT MISDIRECTION. WASN'T EXPECTING THAT
I don't get the hype. Everything this guy has done is a dud
Ink's left such a weak impression...
He'd even be impossible to track in mud
OKAY
Even with that moniker you're a no name. You'll never be someone big
Cuz the closest to talented you've ever been...
Is your name location in your sig
OKAY I GUESS. A BIT SIMPLE
Kid leaves me in the dark when i tell him to key a bar that's hot
Cuz sunglasses over when he tries to think of something decent he ever dropped
EHH. MAYBE IM NOT CATCHING THE W/P RIGHT BUT...
Monster in the closet? That punch wouldn't be based in reality
When his usertitle is him bragging about his homosexuality...
AGAIN A BIT SIMPLE. PERSONAL. BUT SIMPLE. WISH YOU WUDA FLIPPED IT BETTER

VS.

niggas fiend for your shit like you spit coke,but all i see is 8 wack lines and a misquote
nigga you aint a G you dont get dough frontin like you got locked up
when you locked yourself in a room full of faggots your about as straight as a dick joke
THIS WAS STRETCHED AS FUCK. PUNCH WAS WEAK.
you text alot cuz truthfully on tracks your shitty on vinyls spot
you dont mind suckin ABL dick
cause you lost your gag reflex to beat punch for the title shot
OKAY
when i put up the bitched slapped thread i doubt you was scared
now your like daniel in the lions den.....
.........................but in this case it seems god forgot you was here
EHH. I GUESS
andi aint done i'll leave this bastard shook...
....like you dont need to take out to watch this cat get cooked
MEH

ARCH TAKES THIS ONE PRETTY CONVINCINGLY. OTHER GUY NEEDS TO GET HIS STYLE TOGETHER

VOTE/ARCH

[The Archetype]

no... i didn't really go all out... lol... to the top...

[..Compa..]

The Archetype

Your existence is pointless. Everything about you says it sucks
He tried to give his life the old heave ho...
But couldn't lift his girlfriend up
..lol dope liked it..

I don't get the hype. Everything this guy has done is a dud
Ink's left such a weak impression...
He'd even be impossible to track in mud
..not bad actually..

Even with that moniker you're a no name. You'll never be someone big
Cuz the closest to talented you've ever been...
Is your name location in your sig
..heh true and reason I didn't try a personal like this damn you arche lol..

Kid leaves me in the dark when i tell him to key a bar that's hot
Cuz sunglasses over when he tries to think of something decent he ever dropped
..decent-ish word play..

Monster in the closet? That punch wouldn't be based in reality
When his usertitle is him bragging about his homosexuality...
..was gonna use something like this too lol, so not bad..


Rogue Alchemist

niggas fiend for your shit like you spit coke,but all i see is 8 wack lines and a misquote
nigga you aint a G you dont get dough frontin like you got locked up
when you locked yourself in a room full of faggots your about as straight as a dick joke
..damn to stretch bro' that's never good and felt this could of been a bit better..

you text alot cuz truthfully on tracks your shitty on vinyls spot
you dont mind suckin ABL dick
cause you lost your gag reflex to beat punch for the title shot
..eh again you got the concept for a personal but it just lacks..

when i put up the bitched slapped thread i doubt you was scared
now your like daniel in the lions den.....
.........................but in this case it seems god forgot you was here
..naw not feeling this..

andi aint done i'll leave this bastard shook...
....like you dont need to take out to watch this cat get cooked
..wow no lol, to basic..

Vote- The Archetype not a bad verse though arche, it was decent and you really didn't need to do that much seeing I didn't really felt one bar from monster