Just messin around

[Youngbull]

im so damn creative, goin straight off the dome
but ima write this shit down, so you can read it at home
im only 16, but my rhymes so grown
lightin up all this piff, damn im hella blown
i got this rap shit sewn
got damnit its easy
im the best kid doin it, you betta believe me
to all of these dudes who tryna decieve me
i can blow ya head off and end ya life, im greezy
and im grity and grimy you dont know what ive seen
a movie bout my life? shit its to damn obscene
im smarter than these cowards, i got more intellect
im comcast, you dsl, you to slow to connect
me and my boys roll up on, and you know we paid
and im comin with the Heat, you can call me D-Wade
shit, im only in the tenth grade,
but im spittin like im twenty
matter fact, no age, im just spittin like im money
cuz thats all i care about, always on my mind
im like fuckin' Tony Hawk, im always on my grind
and i aint hard to find
just holla out Young Bull and ill spit
keep talkin, and get hit with some Young Bull shit
Im comin at you, as if you was a muthafuckin matador
two shots from my cannon leave you dead up on ya kitchen floor
shit, am i the sickest doin it? for sure
and i know yall want some more
but im audi like my ride
so its young bull, goin harder than some raw hide


just fuckin around, bored, first post on this site
comments and criticism?

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[dakyng]

this was good had a aight flow and basic concept had a few good punches in there.

[Crookshank]

You definitely got mad potential dude. Work on the flow, structure n whatnot. On some real shit, I like your vocab. If you could just flow that shit and stay on some topical rhyming, you got it. I'd like to see more from you. Feed me back if you get a chance. Stay up

[Flash12]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=7041125