GAME~IN$ANE vs FATAL LYRICS

[FATAL_LYRICS]

yo you know the rulz...........spit you got 20 mins

[GAME~IN$ANE]

u on????
let do this
but my rules u fjkin crack head was u spit fukin first ..how many time i wana tell u or we spit sum wut in the same time period..
i dont like feeders an even if u promise not to feed i dont give a fuk
u down
10-15 lines
we both drop in 25 minutes if u take till an hour DQ

[GAME~IN$ANE]

CHECK
mic 1 2
u ready to be merked.
IN................................................ ........uppin for dis fool to drop

[FATAL_LYRICS]

ok checkin in and dropin............

im gonna merk this "herb" cuz to you my lyrics are "superb" bitch youve been handed a wins you dont "deserve" my shits unreal its soundin like it came from another "world" now you on my merkin list cuz bitch youve just bein "served"/
im spitin "devine" this fuckin kid must be outa his "mind" make this kid read it over like hes pressin "rewind"/
my lyrics are "devastatin" so strong rippin through mcs like they armor "penatratin" and bitch im my rhymes are as vicious as "satan"/
you notin but a dick rydah and a "hata"(hater) bitch ive served so many people youd think i was a "waiter"/
ill knock your teeth out just so you cant bite my "rhymes" you gotta stop dwellin on your wins these are new "times"/
battlin me is the only thing youve eva done "insane" im dropin these clips leave you in a daze full of "pain" leave you wit a perment blood "stain"/
these bitchs must all wonna get "eliminated" leave you outa rhymes lyricly "disinagrated" cuz bitch im so hot if i spit close to the pacific the whole ocean would get "evaporated" you thought youd win but i geuss you "misscalculated"/

[FATAL_LYRICS]

yo common.........................hurry.............. .................................................

[BigDisHipHop]

Dope Flow by Fatal... its gonna be good to see the comeback of Game Insane... but that was alright...

Peace
Big D........

[FATAL_LYRICS]

if he even shows up................................................ .................................................

[BigDisHipHop]

HAHA True...... IF he shows up... i think he will..................

Big D.............................

[FATAL_LYRICS]

he betta im givin him an hour from now......that kid called me out...made rulz that if in an hour it wasnt droped youd get a DQ then takes off so he betta spit quick or hes gettin the dq

[GAME~IN$ANE]

aite my bad dawg i have a virus or had a virus on my cvomp now its gone..it made me shit down half way thru..
so give me 25 minutes..ill drop even sooner...layte\

I ALWAYZ SHOW

[GAME~IN$ANE]

AIte coo verse..nuthin speacail...im gunna have to try..this time

yo

Battlyn me is Insane,Naw dats just played,uzin da same lines ya heard from ya pears//
Left the other 2 victims of mine,u the third,think bout a new career//
Dis Herbs strate bammer,i wudnt waist my time rollin-u-up//
KNock ya down like hammer,got u wishin i didnt show-up//
Ill hit this net thug so hard hell drop dead cold in his dads office chair//
Sendin head slugs to ya dome, cuz My illness cant be compaired//
KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//
Ya crew cudnt contend to my skills, when my lyrics are enableD//
Damn be foreal kid, im spittin rappad lyrical shells injectin u to da fullest//
Im LYrically strapped bitch, an when im paked wit da steal u start sweatin bullets//
U proly sum hik white boy walkin around wit a mullet , on his head//
Inbead u wit a loss till u drop,an think about a new hobby instead//

wuick but full of heat..
pc uppin

[youngblood]

damn game took this 2 me, killerrrrrrrrr flow, damn game just merked u, fatal no hate, u got skill, mad props homie

poll vote- game

[Whitelightning]

this wasn't dope.

BREAKDOWN:

Multi:Fatal
Vocab:Fatal
Wordplay:Game
Punches: Game

Overall: Game

Dis was so close...cause it was so whack...game..you got it...

[GAME~IN$ANE]

^^uppin eh one of u didnt poll ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ttttttttttttttttttt
AN U BOTH R ON

[An']['hropoLog¥]

Sorry i cant vote but ill hit this up with feedback

flow=game
punches=nither realy but game
lol nobody realy had anythin so i dont know just forget the rest

Game u had sum good punches and nice flow, so u take this one.
Work on ur punches tho, try to cum up wit better ones, make similier and metas too along wit more multi's, cuz u got skill

fav line

KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//

Fatal your verse was pretty basic, and ur flow? run on sentences like crazy, where are the comas?

keep elivatin dog u got potential

can ya'll hit this up with a vote in return for this feedback, thanks

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