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Thread: C.O.L.O.R.Z. freestyle by DJKingDavid

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    Talking C.O.L.O.R.Z. freestyle by DJKingDavid

    C.O.L.O.R.Z. freestyle

    i keep more drugz then those dam CVS storez (i got it)
    n therez so much coke i cant see my dam floorz (snowin)
    i got em 2 for 2 dealz so they goin by tha fourz (discountz)
    n i know how to sell it so i always make my scorez (lickz)
    im ridin in a legendary pirate ship n its sittin on tha shorez (coast)
    n i mix tha past with tha future just watch how my shyt soars (UFOz?)
    im ridin with these gurlz i call em my phantom whorez (dissappear)
    n if they dont wanna go i push em out tha phantom doorz (get out)
    i gotta super duper trap n its way better than yourz (trapstarr)
    n i got so much money that i cant fit in my drawerz (sockz)
    im out here everday sweepin up cheese like its chorez (im cleanin up)
    n i got em military weaponz for anyone who want warz (WW3)
    when im bout to ride out u can catch me on tha platform (starport)
    n im tryin to decide what ride imma have transform (like tha movie?)
    i heard this guy was snitchin n i think his name was norm (lame)
    n sometime n tha afternoon hes headin out to inform (copz)
    well hes gonna miss that appointment i wont let him perform (showz cancelled)
    imma roll up on him like mother fukin thunderstorm (violent)
    with holy lightin in my fukin hand bulletz stingin em in a swarm (bzzzzzz)
    n leave him in tha street dead with his body luke warm (dyin)
    mayn i be commin with tha cream like in ya coffee im tha foam (yeah)
    n i keep that metallica on me wherever i may fukin roam (everywhere)
    my spaceship be flyin round with tha fukin wingz all chrome (ooooo)
    n i keep ur main bitch hummin on me like a fukin ohm (insane)
    u lamez better not try me or ill put tha steel to ya dome (head shot)
    better yet ill flip a switch n send em heat seekin missles to ya home (boom)
    i got these hood ratz bitchez fukin singin me opera (high class)
    n im eattin so fukin good i got extra cheese like a whoppa (dam)
    my spaceship got some long earz n i make that shyt hoppa (like a rabbit?)
    n when ridin round in my shyt my bak seat got tha choppa (ready)
    if u thinkin bout jackin u know i keep a heart stoppa (cardiac)
    n ill dump some shotz in ya azz until u fukin droppa (dead)
    i be swaggin like im retarded but i dont go to tha shoppa (nah)
    cuz my shyt is too exclusive u know this KING stay propa (fresh)
    mayn im sendin energy thru tha beatz n im conductin like coppa (conductivity)
    n u know im tha KING so i always stay on tha toppa (true)
    my flow is so insane i spit lines super fast like a choppa (roundz)
    n im breakin all tha rules n still dont give a dam bout no coppa (fuk em)
    i dont like to ride alone cuz i rather ride with a boppa (head giver)
    n i switch em out like light bulbz they go out n get swapa (turn em off)
    i got all black clothez just watch how i can vanish (poof)
    n come bak with some hoez that only speak spanish (mexicana)
    im controlin tha base so who i dont like i can banish (ur gone)
    n we all rokin our crew colorz n we all feelin so clanninsh (gangz)
    i see u lamez play pussy but ur still lookin all manish (cross dresser)
    n ur all gettin fired so now they all get can-ish (ur done)
    if i pull my gunz out bet they all get ran-ish (death race)
    n if i catch em imma bake em so they all get pan-ish (like cake)
    i gotta keep that work movin so i always be packin (wrappin)
    n i keep my eyez on tha shipmentz with that GPS trackin (global)
    when im hurtin for tha work then u know i get to jackin (mask up)
    n if u movin money online i gotta whole division for hackin (crookz)
    yeah by any means Necessary imma get this shyt crackin (money)
    n when tha drug money slow down imma go bak to mackin (hoez)
    i put em gurlz in my pocketz n every new game im rackin (like pool)
    n they love it from behind so thats how i be smackin (doggy)
    im tryin to KO ya pussy so u know i keep whackin (killin it)
    n i stick em up against tha wall so we call that tackin (dam)
    i keep my help close by nah i never be slackin (never)
    n i see u fukin lamez commin n u all start attackin (beef)
    mayn if u wanna get to it then we can get it crackin (clik-clak)
    n imma cut ur yardz down so ur star player im sackin (body bag)
    imma all star in this game so nah i dont ride on tha bench (all star)
    n im makin dealz over seaz with these gangstaz speakin french (bonjour)
    u guyz act like this game is on hard mode but rele its a centch (easy)
    imma general in this war so u know i stay down in tha trench (front lines)
    with tool boxez in tha trunk u need a fix i grab my wrench (mr fix it)
    n if u talk shyt ill start dumpin on u lamez until u drench (soaked)
    after ur dead ur body wont even be able to clench (sphinter)
    ull be shyttin on urself so u know my trap got dead body stench (graveyard)

    REAL RETARDED GANGSTA SHYT GET AT ME PPLZ HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!


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    Re: C.O.L.O.R.Z. freestyle by DJKingDavid

    no love no feed? yall aint feelin it?!

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    Re: C.O.L.O.R.Z. freestyle by DJKingDavid

    ...again nothing...

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    Re: C.O.L.O.R.Z. freestyle by DJKingDavid

    Plz Feed On This...

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    Re: C.O.L.O.R.Z. freestyle by DJKingDavid

    uppin for OJ

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    Re: C.O.L.O.R.Z. freestyle by DJKingDavid

    wow one more up...FEED THIS FUKIN PIECE!!!
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    Re: C.O.L.O.R.Z. freestyle by DJKingDavid

    Ok u got some nice punches on almost evey line. But again the flow/rhyme scheme gets boring after a while. Try some more complex stuff rather just ababab rhyme scheme. Try hanging some lines by ending the bar mid thought/sentence and continuing on the the next line. Or rhyming the first word or a middle word sometimes along wit the last one.

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    Re: C.O.L.O.R.Z. freestyle by DJKingDavid

    lol dam ur like tha MIRROR of what i need...n what u need...well i guess mayb u cud show me...cuz u got what i lack...
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