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Current Champion: Sober
Contender: K
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Check.......
- you bitches cant see me like air, but fear me, Because you Feel Me there-
-I Like a Map My Legends Defined By my Keyz
-I'm a Carnivore Rapper, I love Beef!
-Notez-
Checka
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Dear Lord we make good music...
He's Already Dead! Thats Not A PAradox, Cuz I Really Am Sendin a Pair a Shots
N Nothing Could 'Cover' ya Blood Loss Fast Enough Even if u had a 'Pair of Docs'
(Docs-Doctors or Doc+Cover clothing=Dockers)
- you bitches cant see me like air, but fear me, Because you Feel Me there-
-I Like a Map My Legends Defined By my Keyz
-I'm a Carnivore Rapper, I love Beef!
-Notez-
I drop a divine line plague, insane and bubonic
I destroy with my style, you just take Notez on it
Last edited by Dox Phonic; March 24th, 2009 at 11:19 PM
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Dear Lord we make good music...
Make your line simpler man, the capital letters, the random puncuation made me automatically hate your line w/o even reading it. and a bar that has to be explained at the end sucks already man. you don't have to explain shit that we would have gotten man, it takes away from the power of your punch. next time just write it simpler like this and it'll be just as good.
He's already dead! thats not a paradox, cuz i really am sending a pair of shots
And nothing could cover ya blood loss fast enough......
.......even if you had a 'pair of docs
regardless, your multies were cute and the wordplay wasn't bad. the pair a docs line i dont think i've heard before and you delivered it alright.
Can't really say much. It was just simple, and the notez line is probably as played as you can get. Try to think of something away from the obvious next time.
vote/Notez
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v/ Paradox. Even though his was played and very simple, it was still much better than Notez. He at least had a nice flow to it. Notez was very forced and needs MUCH rewording. and please stop with the caps letters and unnecessary apostrophies. the mods already went over this....we are supposed to be elevating...not ignoring.
Paradox's didnt really make sense to me - i understand the nameplay, but if ya read the punch its kinda odd - notez was pretty played out, but i think dude had a better overall punch.
v/ Notez
The Uprising
notez - im sorry that was horrid, it seems like u tried wayyyy 2 hard...i think u shud have changed the whole rhyme.
paradox - ok the notez thing i can see why ppl wud say its played but i think it was good enough to take this one
vote - paradox
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Close battle
\/=para wasnt feelin notes as much
notez - dont explain ure punch, people should get it...far to unwitty tho
para - not great but enough to win
vote para!
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Notez--no need for expo's we're not retarted...well some of us arent.....but still not that good
dox-your wording fucked up everything......cool try tho
vote-Paradox, Pair of sock, pair of cocks..& wait for it....para STOp
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i think notez had it, because his bar was a bit more complex...i didnt really think Para had anything......
V/ Notez.. plz dont explain ur bar it was OBVIOUS
notez-ur punch was cool but the cap lock thing is old skool....u had some nice multies and a good punch
paradox-ur punch was simple and it did flow very well
v/notez for a harder and more complex punch
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