yo spit you got 30min from check in.......
jiggyziggy786
FATAL_LYRICS
yo spit you got 30min from check in.......
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his name is fatal lyrics, yeah they're fatal when ya hear it/
but not because they're hot, but instead cuz they're impaired shit/ one listen is enuf to make you start to fear it/ but me- i rip it apart until he can cannot share his/ lyrics any longer/ i hurt him so bad, he realizes he made a wrong turn/ when he attempted to attack me, attempted to battle rap me/ he thought that he was phat see/ but he really needs practicing/ he's not a rap emcee/ instead he is a crap emcee/ he belongs on mtv/ with christina justin and britney/ he doesn't have the raw skills necessary to build intelligent hip hop/ when the mic is in his hand, it like flip flops/ my shit's hot/ his is not/ he's got a mish mosh of shit that needs a pit stop/ his lyrics are not what he claims they are/ instead they're brainless, by far/ the worst that i will see ever in history/ i'm sicka of this shit now so i'ma stop me
ima drop this shit like a "bomb" bitch you couldnt spit hot if i made you chug "napalm"/
you takin it up the "bum" the only thing your spitin is your dads "cum"/
even if you had sars you couldnt spit "sick" you chokin like you suckin on a 10inch "dick"/
look at your name "jiggyziggy" you make me think you wonna be 6 feet down wit "biggy"/
i might've let you win...but i aighnt that "nice" runnin outa ideas so you have to rhyme emcee "twice"/
you mighta battled before but im the "hardest" damn this is rap and you talkin bout hiphop "artist"/
well you aighnt worth a "closer" two minutes from now this shits gonna be "over"/
i get on the mic people start to "clap" this aighnt about the flow its about who knew how to "rap"/(ME)
you rapped one word with another and then stopped and started again......you had no flow
you can't spit independent stanzas, gotta keep shit flowing....
you need practice
hahaha.....man look at yours man you need alot of practice shut your bitch ass up and see what people say...plus i did mine in 9 min you took like 30min....and you just cant get the flow....sorry but other people arnt that stupid...........
but props man no hate................................good battle....................................
somebody vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
where's everyone??????????????????????????????????
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i'm not gonna voet cuz i voted on fatal's last battle..but fatal try not to do ur lines spaced like that make a bar:
blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblah
blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblah//
then space...see wut i'm sayin..cuz like that u make it hard for people to read ur verse cuz it throws them off
jus a lil advice..and jiggy..i'm sorry..but wtf is up wit that name???
just vote on i hottie ill remember your advice....thanx................................... ......................
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