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good luck
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Destruction
Tha Remix
10 lines max
No d/r, crew, or hate votes
You spit first
good luck
-1-
checkin in....I told u ...I gotta go for awhile so spit whenever I wont feed off ur verse or nuttin............I'll spit in some hours not sure when whenver i get back so holla
i'm goin' to tha store and to run some errands right now too so i'll spit when i get back it might not before some a few hours though..............
so you spit when u can and i'll probably spit after depending on when i get back.............................................
Part his brain for some knowledge and realize theres nuttin to gain//
His Mind Filled with More air than any plane, SO i switch Lanes//
His Open wound wit gang green, My rage Can surpass the Hulk//
Spit Fillers into this kid, decapitate his lid so he becomes the Bulk//
Lock on and rock his clock wit my punches,keep him guessin and call him quasimodo cuz he keep havin hunches//(quasimodo was the hunchback of notre dome)
Spit Venom and insert it in him,So his stomach contracts wit lyrical cramps like he was doin crunches//
Sure He murks herbs hes to scared to battle vets,Deepthroat is all he does hes a catcher for more balls than the mets//(the mets are a baseball team)
Dagger Flows chop his legs for the short shop,"lets kill him now" and I say "ok lets"//
Scared to post first his verses leave him like a plate of Cookies easliy fed off of//
Cuz I just merked you a thousand times,thats more than my tru love gave me when she was handin out Turtle Doves//
Ok now u spit SInce I didnt have to go as long as I thought........And NO beef after this battle
^^^not too bad dawg i'll vote wen the other guy drops!
can u vote on my battle wiv joe black on the 1st page of front lines, thanx, don't mean 2 freepost but im 4-1 up n its bein slept on!
Good Verse but not good enough
...:::Workin' into tha Merkin':::...
"Injecting" "vile" lyrics into your "bloodstream" to tha point you on your "deathbed"//
Lethal infliction of Tha Remix's wrath now i'm about to spread tha "butter" on this "bread"//
Destruction has a "mouth" of constant "suction" so there it is that was his introduction// (mouth of constant suction- sucking alot of dick)
I'm like tha "giant" while u be tha "munchkin" you wit your boyfriend and sexually touchin'//
...:::R.I.P Destruction:::...
"Suicidal" bombs droppin' on you to tha point you wanna "commit" i'm so "sick" i'ma make you "vomit"//
I'm cleaner than "comet" I'm tha "lord" of this "ring" while you weaker than a "hobbit"// (comet is soap lol just a lil humor)
I'm off tha "hook" wit my "vocabulary" which makes me "hooked on phonics"//
You must be smokin' that chronic I'ma throw away tha "key" after i seal this win and "lock-it"//
I "scintillate" when i merk people like you, "Sententiously" merking you wit "lines only of a few"// (sententiously= saying much in a few words or lines Scintillate= Shining)
Traumatized that this is no longer a "dispute", I just played you like a "band member" playin' tha "flute"//
alright you all give this cat a hardd time but with all those rhymes that made no sence its clear destruction took this on propz to tha remix......he almost had my vote
beef jerky tastes good...but its so expensive now adays...government conspiracy thats what that is...MWUAAHAHAH..........
uppin for these cats.......!!!!!!!!!!///////////////
easily tha remix...no beef destruction but you should choose ur battles better....
remix was easily 3 levels above tha level destruction is at....
destructions only stand out line...
"Lock on and rock his clock wit my punches,keep him guessin and call him quasimodo cuz he keep havin hunches//"
^^ nicely put...alot of ppl might have thought about this line but tha way u worded it was proper....
Tha Remix's sTAND OUT lines...
"Destruction has a "mouth" of constant "suction" so there it is that was his introduction//"
^^sweet personal
hole lower verse was sweet......
voted THA REMIX...
don't forget to hit up ma battle wid audo....even if u can't poll vote i don't mind getting critique's
what exactly didn't make sense in my lines?..................and why tha fuck you freepostin' man unless u a d/r for destruction......
lol i wasn't talkin' to you blanks........i was talkin' bout tha dude wit tha weird name above u...........lol.........thanks for tha vote
This was a ok Newbie Battle......Unoffical vote=Tha Remix For Erm....Better Structure?........................................ .................................................. ................
thanks dogg^ i like critiques even if it isn't a poll vote so please critique me................................
Hit This Battle Up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=70777
This Was A Decent Battle Both Verses Were Good..But Tha Remix Was Just A Little Betta...Tha Remix Had A Betta Flow & More Punches .
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