Blood_Line vs. .::XdetoxX::.

[Blood_Line]

10 lines min. 20 lines max

[Blood_Line]

you spit first dogg unless you cant handle the heat... best step up dogg i dont have all day.........

[Blood_Line]

Hey yo check this rhyme
Your chump ass shit is wastin my time
Im a show yall how dis shits done
When my rhymes over yall get up an run
Now im a break it down for ya so listen real close
When you check out my shit youll be lookin like a ghost
Straight up from Franklin those are the streets i roam
Im a put a knife to your throat when i bust down your home
Now take your last breath cuz dis is where it ends
Looks like your shittin your pants so check your depends
I own your ass and dats how it should be
When in front of me you better be bowing on both knees

[Blood_Line]

aight man your up if you can handle the heat... best step up other wise your gonna get your ass beat....

[.::XDetoxX::.]

I remain focused/
Castin' lyrical spells like Hocus to Pocus/
Like Abra-Cadabra and poof ya mouth is motionless/
Tryin' to battle back with lyrical swords is simply hopeless/
And I'll never lift the spell it's stuck for life bro and you know this//

Not sayin' a word because ya scared/
cmon' say somethin' intelligent, you've just been dared/
Lookin' out at the crowd for words like they cared//

I can't stand you, lookin at ya inability/
I know that you can't touch me/
You rhymes reek simplicity/
And furthermore irriate me, makin' me laugh lyrically//

im not even' tryin yet i'm just gettin' started/
but you already lookin like my words made you retarded/
lookin' like I tore you up, even worse than anyone did//

I ain't got time to rumble/
cause if i get knocked out, they ain't tryin to hear that i stumbled/

So I pull out fast/
Put two into yo ass//

make em' look like tits/
Talk about it on my skits//

[.::XDetoxX::.]

Uppin for votes...coemon guys...I cant believe we have 24 views and none of them are votes...how abotu some votes...and Bloodline, I have mine one bar over...is that ok?

[.::XDetoxX::.]

Come on guys...wait..are we not expert enough for this shit or is it cuz we suck? Come on..you can possibley give SOME votes on this...

[Blood_Line]

detox your rhymes cool so every one hit use wit some votes we need to get this shit done wit know what i mean

[GridLockDaFelon]

yo hit my battle up and vote on it and i will vote on this one iight......its me vs, Unstopable_MC

here is tha link>>
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=71755

[Blood_Line]

hey this is my battle so hit it up wit some votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=71441