Soliloquy

[Sniper Clown]

Soliloquy

[Enter Macbeth]

Act I, Scene I

All the world's a stage, n me an orphan puppet in a cage
Pulled by strings to tear limbs in some medieval gauge
My eyes are hazed, with blind King Lear's tears of rage
Sins are tattooed lyk Polynesian circles on my face
Death warrant issued, my pyre about to be set ablaze
Lived an unappreciated lyf quelling sorrows wit purple haze
Wreath of marijuana leaves decorated wit brushes of sage
Final Wisdom creeps into me from onlookers chilling icy gaze
Funerary rites praised, I'm flung into enternal labyrinthian maze
Blinding flash light at the end of tunnel embrace me after final race.

Act I, Scene II

Gates of hell swings open lyk barndoors to swampy lakes
Cannabis are coiled lyk caduceus wit venomous snakes
It's apparent that for survival I must feed on those weed cake
But to conquer my phobia I must regress to my past mistakes
It's dark and it's cold, time slowing down, as my life iz at stake
Inhalin pungent odor Im swiveled into million trips of high dosage
As I rake thru the biological contraption, suddenly I realize how fake...
My lyf was being stoned to death for no reason but just for fuck's sake!
I had everything....a lovin mom, girl of my life, creative genius, yet...yet
All I could care was how to live day to day just from marijauna breath....

Act I, Scene III

I awaken from nightmare in front of pearly gates wit models n concubines
Mind filled wit Heavenly Light a glow Divine, chakras opening thru spines
Moment of Truth overtaken my stream of veins, in hell I've paid my fine
No longer Im chokin lyk the canaries in South Africa's diamond mine
I look at my palm, gone are all the prints, all remains is a circular lifeline
System has tested me, Game's Over....I've understood the final Sign

[Exeunt Macbeth]

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[Sniper Clown]

rip it guys.....negative critique most welcome.

[TheAshganMan]

very good read it flowed easely and u kept it consistantly exiting, this is thd first OM i read from u, i hope u keep it up.

[The Genesis]

this was straight, although it would only work as a 'text' piece, which for me defeats the purpose of writing if you couldn't actually spit it, but nonetheless I'm feeling the poetic vibe and use of vocab, nice shit, keep posting.

[Sniper Clown]

point taken, but i had to sacrifice the audio because i was trying to focus on the narration. i guess i need to master the rare ability of both narrating and spitting at the same time.

thnx