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    Pop, Rock, Rap Star

    The whole point of the title jus because people say certain shit cause i rap and im white or cause they know me to be sometin else like "justins little brother", the whole nsync, i dont rap cause i think im black lines.


    No mother fucker,
    I'm not just "Your Justins little brother?"
    this just in, others still ajustin,
    to a rapper with a just cause,
    like there's no such thing.

    I do it for the applause,
    and not the "cha-ching!"
    you like my shit, thats touching,
    I'm blushing, just think,
    how people listen to my shit,
    sit and just think,

    I gotta drink to that,
    put on my thinking cap,
    they see my hair and say "N'SYNC is back!"
    and no, i don't rap because i think I'm black.
    my flow is coke, i'm on the brink of crack,
    i got links infact convertin inks to wax.

    fuck pot i got a zip lock of hip-hop,
    i hate pop,
    for mixtapes im in ship-shape,
    gimmie the O.K. to dictate,
    and i'll make sure that the games maintaining a fixed rate.

    from these bitch made cats might switch like blades,
    dispite age their wits fade.
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    Re: Pop, Rock, Rap Star

    i do it for the applause
    And not for the cha ching
    Good line...

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    Re: Pop, Rock, Rap Star

    i have to say, no REAL person who knows shit about hiphop is gonna give you shit for bein a white rapper, so ignore the ones that do, cause they're clueless. if you're sick, you're sick, period. being white, black, whatever, it dont matter. you jus get hella lot of ignorant people in this world.

    anyway, to the piece. i felt it started simple, then started taking on more and more and it got nicer as it went through. the structure was a little odd, but it flowed okay for the most part.


    I do it for the applause,
    and not the "cha-ching!"


    ^^ i liked this bar, straight forward n clear.

    I gotta drink to that,
    put on my thinking cap,
    they see my hair and say "N'SYNC is back!"
    and no, i don't rap because i think I'm black.
    my flow is coke, i'm on the brink of crack,
    i got links infact convertin inks to wax.

    fuck pot i got a zip lock of hip-hop,
    i hate pop,


    the above excerpts are straight too. the nsync bar was pretty funny to me. overall, this piece was fairly simple and short, but it was concise and it improved as it went on. keep it up. 1

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    Re: Pop, Rock, Rap Star

    yeah first of all, real mc's don't give a fluck if you black, white, brown, whatever, skills are color blind. although I wouldn't say you're undeniably sick yet, I can feel the fact you wrote this from the heart, but it seemed like some amature shit, all I can say is keep writing, you'll elevate, and fuck what ignorant minds say about your skin tone, some of the best mc's today are white, asian, hispanic, this isn't the 90's, lol don't let that discourage you, keep at it.

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    Re: Pop, Rock, Rap Star

    nice spitz
    kinda over the place but none the less enjoyable!
    stay up!!!

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