Swift VS Fredrick

[CasalenA]

These r my rules

10-20 lines
No d/r hate votes
U spit first
U got an hour to spit
I'll spit quickly after u

peace

[Fredrick]

yo dis is my check in theres no feedin right??
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[CasalenA]

No feedin?

if that means bitin, NO

tell me what it means

And u have 1 hour to post.............................................. .................................................. .................

[Fredrick]

it means if i say somethin u can't come off off it
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[CasalenA]

Why thats what battlins all about isn't it lol?

Just post u got an hour no more questions......................................... ...........................................

[CasalenA]

Times tickin

ATTENTION ALL MODS

If Fedrick does not post in half hour can you please close this So I may start another battle, thanks peace............................................. .................................................. ..

[Fredrick]

yo
u might as well call the police now cuz im ready to start slaugtherin//1
if u used to tastin defeat then i know ya mouth is waterin//2

~lets get serious~
i'll leave this puppet like brand new fabric with no strings attached//3
this faggot gets used more than similes in raps//4
i will freeze ya gats, u can tell this pyscho is pure "ass" the way he gets "clapped"//5
this dude bows down to so many kings like me its like his knees collapse//6

~change up da style~
Like Sadam, U Really Never Did Have-A-Threat, FUCK IT! I'll Be The 'First' To 'Wage' Ur Loses - Here's My *ALPHA-BET!* //7
Treatin~Ya~Worst... Decieven~With~Curse, swift I'd Make U 'Eat Ya Own Words' But It's Probaly Not Even~Ur~Verse!! //8
I'm Shovin Rods Down Ur Lungz Like Ya Boyz Go 'Deep-In-Ya-Throat', & It's Like Ur 'Jerkin Ur Dick' Same Way U Have To Pay 'Pee-Pull'-To-Vote! //9

~switch it back~
An Ugly Playa Ya Flows Couldn't Heat If Ya Flowed In An Ozone Laya//10
Just A AIDS Conveya But Predicting Your Loses Aint Just A Soothsayer//11
Identies Re-vealed Pretty Ya Verse With Stars But Still Wont A-ppeal//12
LiC's Robbing Weed-Deals.. So Ya Admit Ya 'Drop Off Herb' That Ya-Steal//13

~closing~
Bust Out Sega Genesis And Turns On Mortal Comba,Selecting: Sub-Zero//14
Freeze Mode,I'll Solidify Your Tongue, Mouth, And Rip Out Your Lip-Ring//15
And Rip Out Your Spine,So Ya Front Side Can Finally See The End-ing//16

[CasalenA]

In this race im like a fat person, bette believe its you im over lappin/
Fuck this bitch Fedrick, your fuckin wack battle verses gave reason to invent the trash bin /!

Man Your verse wouldnt get love frum Cupid, all ur lines are stuck on stupid/
This bitch is guna burn, my words are fire and my saliva is the lighter fluid/

Lyrically, after this verse you'll disperse, consider this dumb fuck history/
You can't spit wit me, I'll heat this chicken on a stick, style rotisery/

I'll end ya blood line when i cut off ur head, leaven ya skull by ya legz/
Fuck ur punk ryhmes, they wouldnt be above mine if i was 6ft unda and half past dead/

I can flush Fedricks head down the toilet and he still wouldnt be the shit/!
I give him 4 bars before he's stuttering like Gareth Gates and that'll be his spit/

Im rupturing ur weak structure from steady to critical/
My punches are intentional while ur's aint even existant like the hood wit no criminals/

Its almost judgement time Fedrick, make sure ya lookin both ways/
YA STOCKS RUN OUT, so ill end this battle like Martha Stewarts Cooking Days!/.........................


Uppin....................votes.................... ..

[CasalenA]

Man this iste so retarded i thought I had well over 20 lines So i erased some

These are my concluding lines:

I thought you had some skills, but your just another newbie/.............
Words of wisdom, quit droppin shit and go find another cock to plug ya bootie/!
Real smooth! Ill put power tools in ur gloves Im ready to Drill Threw/ (Through)
This is a dun deal Dude! I beat U this time despit the fact Im new/
Even your stupid ass is dissipointed in U/..........

[Organik]

vote goes to SwiF']['

his verse was overall better, more punchlines and it cracked me up

but Fred, that "eat your own words" line was sick

props

[CasalenA]

Aight thanks but too bad ya cant vote dawg.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................

[BiZzUrK]

Swif gets my vote
better flo, multis, punches, wordplay
that martha stewart line was cold
SHEEET better everything, but just by a lil bit
it was still all and all a close battle
no beef, just elevate fred
Vote=swif

[CasalenA]

Thank dawg.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

[XL4REAL]

Swift took dis easy betta flow and meta's and wordplay....no you to brand new though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!new my ass.........


I VOTE SWIFTY YO..............

[CasalenA]

LOL what?............................................. .................................................. ..............Where still lookin for votes ppl