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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?

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  • Fredrick

    0 0%
  • SwiF']['

    5 100.00%
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Thread: Swift VS Fredrick

  1. #1
    CasalenA
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    Swift VS Fredrick

    These r my rules

    10-20 lines
    No d/r hate votes
    U spit first
    U got an hour to spit
    I'll spit quickly after u

    peace

  2. #2
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    yo dis is my check in theres no feedin right??
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  3. #3
    CasalenA
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    No feedin?

    if that means bitin, NO

    tell me what it means

    And u have 1 hour to post.............................................. .................................................. .................

  4. #4
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    it means if i say somethin u can't come off off it
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  5. #5
    CasalenA
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    Why thats what battlins all about isn't it lol?

    Just post u got an hour no more questions......................................... ...........................................

  6. #6
    CasalenA
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    Times tickin

    ATTENTION ALL MODS

    If Fedrick does not post in half hour can you please close this So I may start another battle, thanks peace............................................. .................................................. ..

  7. #7
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    yo
    u might as well call the police now cuz im ready to start slaugtherin//1
    if u used to tastin defeat then i know ya mouth is waterin//2

    ~lets get serious~
    i'll leave this puppet like brand new fabric with no strings attached//3
    this faggot gets used more than similes in raps//4
    i will freeze ya gats, u can tell this pyscho is pure "ass" the way he gets "clapped"//5
    this dude bows down to so many kings like me its like his knees collapse//6

    ~change up da style~
    Like Sadam, U Really Never Did Have-A-Threat, FUCK IT! I'll Be The 'First' To 'Wage' Ur Loses - Here's My *ALPHA-BET!* //7
    Treatin~Ya~Worst... Decieven~With~Curse, swift I'd Make U 'Eat Ya Own Words' But It's Probaly Not Even~Ur~Verse!! //8
    I'm Shovin Rods Down Ur Lungz Like Ya Boyz Go 'Deep-In-Ya-Throat', & It's Like Ur 'Jerkin Ur Dick' Same Way U Have To Pay 'Pee-Pull'-To-Vote! //9

    ~switch it back~
    An Ugly Playa Ya Flows Couldn't Heat If Ya Flowed In An Ozone Laya//10
    Just A AIDS Conveya But Predicting Your Loses Aint Just A Soothsayer//11
    Identies Re-vealed Pretty Ya Verse With Stars But Still Wont A-ppeal//12
    LiC's Robbing Weed-Deals.. So Ya Admit Ya 'Drop Off Herb' That Ya-Steal//13

    ~closing~
    Bust Out Sega Genesis And Turns On Mortal Comba,Selecting: Sub-Zero//14
    Freeze Mode,I'll Solidify Your Tongue, Mouth, And Rip Out Your Lip-Ring//15
    And Rip Out Your Spine,So Ya Front Side Can Finally See The End-ing//16

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  8. #8
    CasalenA
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    In this race im like a fat person, bette believe its you im over lappin/
    Fuck this bitch Fedrick, your fuckin wack battle verses gave reason to invent the trash bin /!

    Man Your verse wouldnt get love frum Cupid, all ur lines are stuck on stupid/
    This bitch is guna burn, my words are fire and my saliva is the lighter fluid/

    Lyrically, after this verse you'll disperse, consider this dumb fuck history/
    You can't spit wit me, I'll heat this chicken on a stick, style rotisery/

    I'll end ya blood line when i cut off ur head, leaven ya skull by ya legz/
    Fuck ur punk ryhmes, they wouldnt be above mine if i was 6ft unda and half past dead/

    I can flush Fedricks head down the toilet and he still wouldnt be the shit/!
    I give him 4 bars before he's stuttering like Gareth Gates and that'll be his spit/

    Im rupturing ur weak structure from steady to critical/
    My punches are intentional while ur's aint even existant like the hood wit no criminals/

    Its almost judgement time Fedrick, make sure ya lookin both ways/
    YA STOCKS RUN OUT, so ill end this battle like Martha Stewarts Cooking Days!/.........................


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  9. #9
    CasalenA
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    Man this iste so retarded i thought I had well over 20 lines So i erased some

    These are my concluding lines:

    I thought you had some skills, but your just another newbie/.............
    Words of wisdom, quit droppin shit and go find another cock to plug ya bootie/!
    Real smooth! Ill put power tools in ur gloves Im ready to Drill Threw/ (Through)
    This is a dun deal Dude! I beat U this time despit the fact Im new/
    Even your stupid ass is dissipointed in U/..........

  10. #10
    Organik
    Guest
    vote goes to SwiF']['

    his verse was overall better, more punchlines and it cracked me up

    but Fred, that "eat your own words" line was sick

    props

  11. #11
    CasalenA
    Guest
    Aight thanks but too bad ya cant vote dawg.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................

  12. #12
    BiZzUrK
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    Swif gets my vote
    better flo, multis, punches, wordplay
    that martha stewart line was cold
    SHEEET better everything, but just by a lil bit
    it was still all and all a close battle
    no beef, just elevate fred
    Vote=swif

  13. #13
    CasalenA
    Guest
    Thank dawg.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

  14. #14
    CONTAGIOUS 4REAL... XL4REAL's Avatar
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    Swift took dis easy betta flow and meta's and wordplay....no you to brand new though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!new my ass.........


    I VOTE SWIFTY YO..............
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  15. #15
    CasalenA
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    LOL what?............................................. .................................................. ..............Where still lookin for votes ppl

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