Raz Vs. Kautious

[Raz]

Yo rules:
10-15 lines
no hate votes ect....
checkin's
whoever goes when ya ready
verse due 30minutes after checkin


Let's Battle

[Raz]

Here's a lil sumn sumn, ya know nuffin big jus lil verse..........

you ready mayne........

Yo ya punch delivery is that of tha united states postal service//
garrentted he's nervous, been here since march and he still actin herbish//
look at tha sig, all colors of tha rainbow, this bitch is homosexual//
i'm ambedexrial, pimp smack ya wit either hand, u can't match my intellectual//
yo this lion is on da prey and i huntin kautious da herbish antelope//
don't matter what color beray(spellin), u'll still be silenced by da scope//
fuck if u prewrote, just means ya shits older and ready for allztimerz//
he braggin bout doin shows, this bitch is headlinin, mom and pop's deli dinners//
i cremate tha alphabet, while kautious just gives it da hand//
after this merking, his rep gonna be sinkin like he joggin thru quik sand//
listenin ta heavy metal records backwards is tha equivilent of my lines//
insted of rockin his crew sign, he gotta chain wit a charm of calvin klein//
i'mma call u marv albert kuz u bite-n and rape-n//
everyone see ur posts and it's despizing and hatin//
in 4 years kautious gonna be fillin da Raz tour Bus wit gas, at his service station//



Yo don't no show...... lets do this

[datzecho]

whoa.........that was hard..............lets see da reply............................................. ....................................

[Raz]

Damn this is gonna fuckin suck if its a noshow, i tried pm'ing u kautious but u need to clean ya box out........Post!

[Raz]

Yo u online now, lets get this shit goin dawg............i hate draggin out battles ya know...............................

[Chemarim]

yeah mayn sorry bout dat

im gonna spit

also- it's only a no show if i check in

but i never no show

[Raz]

WEll where ya at dawg.........common don't dragg this shit out no longer just spit........................................

[Chemarim]

represent my side and i'll elemetalize your whole crew,
when i strike with volts of light you be burning like a holocaust jew//(not racist, sorry if you jewish)
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strike hits compact to rest yeah hart and cave yeah chest
through,
you lack new skills kid you "old school" have u shocked and rested like old blue//(half to see "old school"<--the movie lmao)
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8-3 a nice record raz has for battling newbs,
your losses came from cats u didn't think compared to u//
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so kid now your record changes over poll to '8-4',
your structure 'won't be as even' when i 'rip out your spinal core'//
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giving it to u straight and hardcore ripping yeah rhymes till theirs no more,
like paper shredders-your pre writ text won't be needed or asked for//
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merking this no skilled talent-he soon to be ignored,
smashing his frame in brutality, turning it to executive shame and wreck his face in full gore//
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this was over before it started, after im done me n this kid will have a synonym sense in being coldhearted//(he's dead im mean)
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you can't be me-see me-or act me

Another fallin executive emcee preposed as a casualty, kid im sick of "weak textcee"s like you-give me "the boss of your faculty"//

[Chemarim]

need votes
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[Chemarim]

still uping for votes please
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[MC GAMBIT]

yo kautious that first line waz fuckin sick kid!!!!!!!!!!!!!
what waz it??
represent my side and i'll elemetalize your whole crew,
when i strike with volts of light you be burning like a holocaust jew//(not racist, sorry if you jewish)

yo i aint racsist either but that was fuckin funny!!!!!!!!!
good diss man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
like kautious sorry if your affended!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the other kat was tight but i would say KAUTIOUS win

[Raz]

Hmmmokay...........Yo uppin fo' votes..................



lets get this shit over with, thank you kautious for finally postin.......lol good battle

[Raz]

Yo foreal uppin fo votes, drop a link and i'll hit yo shit up witta poll. drop a poll and recieve a vote on ur battle, thats how its goin down........ again UPPIN

[Raz]

Originally posted by Raz
Yo foreal uppin fo votes, drop a link and i'll hit yo shit up witta poll. drop a poll and recieve a vote on ur battle, thats how its goin down........ again UPPIN

shit ain't changed....

[Bad News]

close battle, I gotta break this down...

FLOW=BOTH
PUNCHES=RAZ
WORDPLAY=BOTH
CREATIVITY=BOTH
OVERALL=RAZ

pretty close battle, but Raz's punches hit harder, so that was the determining factor...

VOTE=RAZ

check out my battle and drop an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=69580