jko you know the rules...good luck
J.K.O
KillahBebop_0024
jko you know the rules...good luck
u spit first 10-15 lines............................................. .........................
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i wont be posting till tommorow...my dad...ill post first thing tomorrow morning or noon...whenever i wake up.
PEACE.
man u suck,u aint got no rhymes,your disses are shit,theres gay written on all your lines/
im gonna make u sick,and u wont be fine,cause the titles mine/
you wanna start shit,but u aint gonna back it up,doesnt that mean yoyur pussy/
your rhymes are weak,and your scared to write them better,you little wussy/
im gonna make spin around,and make u look like a gay clown/
kill u,put you in a ditch,while still makin know sound/
your lyrics aint good,they aint worth shit,just another person callin you a 'FUCKIN BITCH'/
its all good sick of you,so say good bye to your family cause your goin in a ditch/
im sick of your shit,u need to quit,suckin fuckin dick,but i u dont stop till your real sick/
i just one the battle,no need for you to spit,cause u cant even rhyme/
all u got is a dime,to live life,so get of ppl's dick and just die/
know no ones gonna cry,and if they do they just lied,but its alright/
u dumb fuck,if u got any balls,u would shut up,cause your gonna need luck/
to win me,cause u know im the one being shown on t.v,while u get on porn fuckin a duck/
had to fix it sorry pplOriginally posted by J.K.O
man u suck,u aint got no rhymes,your disses are shit,theres gay written on all your lines/
im gonna make u sick,and u wont be fine,cause the titles mine/
you wanna start shit,but u aint gonna back it up,doesnt that mean your a pussy/
your rhymes are weak,and your scared to write them better,you little wussy/
im gonna makeu spin around,and make u look like a gay clown/
kill u,put you in a ditch,while still makin know sound/
your lyrics aint good,they aint worth shit,just another person callin you a 'FUCKIN BITCH'/
its all good sick of you,so say good bye to your family cause your goin in a ditch/
im sick of your shit,u need to quit,suckin fuckin dick,but u dont stop till your real sick/
i just won the battle,no need for you to spit,cause u cant even rhyme/
all u got is a dime,to live life,so get off ppl's dick and just die/
know no ones gonna cry,and if they do they just lied,but its alright/
u dumb fuck,if u got any balls,u would shut up,cause your gonna need luck/
to win me,cause u know im the one being shown on t.v,while u get on porn fuckin a duck/
man u suck,u aint got no rhymes,your disses are shit,theres gay written on all your lines/
im gonna make u sick,and u wont be fine,cause the titles mine/
you wanna start shit,but u aint gonna back it up,doesnt that mean your a pussy/
your rhymes are weak,and your scared to write them better,you little wussy/
im gonna make you spin around,and make u look like a gay clown/
kill u,put you in a ditch,while still makin know sound/
your lyrics aint good,they aint worth shit,just another person callin you a 'FUCKIN BITCH'/
im sick of you,so say good bye to your family cause your goin in a ditch/
im sick of your shit,u need to quit,suckin fuckin dick,but i know u dont stop till your real sick/
i just one the battle,no need for you to spit,cause u cant even rhyme/
all u got is a dime,to live life,so get off ppl's dick and just die/
know no ones gonna cry,and if they do they just lied,but its alright/
u dumb fuck,if u got any balls,u would shut up,cause your gonna need luck/
to win me,cause u know im the one being shown on t.v,while u get on porn fuckin a duck/
i had to do somethin
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i know its late but im checkin in...ill post my spit in like 15-20 mins or less.............................................. ................................................
PEACE.
killa when u psot ill vote on ya shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=69349
JKO HIT DIS UP NOW......AN VOTTE ILL BE BACK INHERE TO VOTE
sup "bloke" you a "joke" why you challenge me son//
every time you "toke" you "choke" and dont learn your lesson//
dont even know why im battling, if i dont spit ill still have won//
but just in case, after this battle, youll meet my smith and wesson//
its okay if you wanna cry...i know the "rhymes i spit hurt"//
its so hot i got you sweatin like a "hooker in church"//
im the lyrical assailant wit a preverbial "bat made of birch"//
im like a vulture, i wait for the right moment to leave perch//
you test me, and i meet you in an alley and blow ya brains out//
i got my crew wit me, you dont know what delinquentz about//
we tied you up, put you in the trunk wit a gag in ya mouth//
and throw ya off a dam, and leave you to float down south//
fatal components and ill delinquentz eat pussys like you//
but when you see a pussy, you dont know what to do//
uppin#1 then im out............................................... .................................................. ...
PEACE.
comeon ppl vote on this battle
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J.K.O gets ti, better punches, killa's opening line, bloke and joke? No offense, but it didn't grab like J.K.O's,
Vote = J.K.O
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=67825
^^^ please vote here for me voting on your battle!
J.K.O -
- first of all i think it is wack that you changed your verse twice... i am just gonna read the first one you posted.
- your opener is something that anyone can say... not very creative
- you rhymed wussy and pussy... comon man!!!
your lyrics aint good,they aint worth shit,just another person callin you a 'FUCKIN BITCH'/
its all good sick of you,so say good bye to your family cause your goin in a ditch/
im sick of your shit,u need to quit,suckin fuckin dick,but i u dont stop till your real sick/
^^^ all that is filth... i dont know how you have 5 wins!!! no offense dogg you need to elevate and get those dick riders off ya
while u get on porn fuckin a duck/
^^^ did you really say fukkin a dukk?!!???!??! ROFL
KillahBebop_0024-
- good intro... great rhymes and decent personal
- nice follow up too! i like this verse so far!
- ROFL ROFL NICE LINE HERE!!!!
its so hot i got you sweatin like a "hooker in church"//
^^^ ROFL ROFL THAT WAS HARD!!!
we tied you up, put you in the trunk wit a gag in ya mouth//
and throw ya off a dam, and leave you to float down south//
^^^ nice hard punch... good work
- great vocab too... this was a GOOD GOOD battle verse
Vote: Killah
yep.......Originally posted by Deceit
J.K.O gets ti, better punches, killa's opening line, bloke and joke? No offense, but it didn't grab like J.K.O's,
Vote = J.K.O
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