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    ====Fallen Soldiers======

    This isn't the final version, the only difference is, the final version will have an "actual hook" with a female singing. I have the hook all written up, but I'm being kinda anal, still looking for the right girl with the right voice I'm aimin at, been through a few and they were good, but just didn't had the type of voice I was looking for.

    So till I find that voice, I'm prolly just gonna run with this version of the beat

    The hook I wrote for it' is some real deep shit, so I don't want the wrong girl ruining it,

    but anyways, get at me

    leave links and I'll RTF

    Fallen Soldiers - The idea for this is a very mellow type beat. Listen to the entire thing, few changes n stuff ;p
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    Last edited by 10fingaz; July 7th, 2008 at 04:54 PM

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    Re: ====Fallen Soldiers======

    Aight yo, mix on here is straight, but I think the sound choice needs a bit of work

    the piano doesn't sound very realistic and has a very dry sound, drum samples sound ordinary and I mean I think you coulda chose better

    composition is on point, and I see your idea with the track, I just think it could've been executed better.

    at least you're trying somethin different, props
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    Re: ====Fallen Soldiers======

    nice im not feelin the mmmmhhhh sound but thats just me overall preety dope beat

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    Re: ====Fallen Soldiers======

    this is nice, vibing to it, a bit too much drum roll for me though, maybe every other if that makes sense to you, but the guitar at the end...sick, love it, good stuff overall

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    Re: ====Fallen Soldiers======

    appreciate the response

    and I know what u mean DT about the sounds

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    Re: ====Fallen Soldiers======

    the only thing i didn't like was the snare roll, but i liked the drums, the snares hit pretty hard and had a nice live sound to them.

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    Re: ====Fallen Soldiers======

    really appreciate the feedback yall

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    Re: ====Fallen Soldiers======

    bump, don't sleep on this
    Last edited by 10fingaz; July 9th, 2008 at 09:22 PM

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    Re: ====Fallen Soldiers======

    uppin

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    Re: ====Fallen Soldiers======

    some serious sleepin goin on here

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