kautious vs Ambiguous

[Chemarim]

10-16 lines

Rb basic rules

[Axe]

I said 10 MAX... once you fix that, consider this my check in.
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[Chemarim]

i can't fiz it but yeah 10 max fah sho, sorry bout that playa
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[A-Squall]

DROP a VOTE ON MINE and ILL RETURN THA FAVOR FOR SURE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=67808

[Axe]

Like tip-toeing near sleeping giants… battling me you better be cautious, your “rhymes” are disgusting, by just reading them, they’re making me nauseous/
You goin’ against me, you’re facing an execution squad, I’ll ask ya… “what’s your last wish”, like students at the end of the day, by my words you’ll get easily dismissed/

Acceptin’ my challenge this kid must be crazed, he thinks he’s tough cuz he game me a hard gaze, like the family feud… survey says, “kautious must be blazed”/
My words are like walls… and you’re entrapped like a rat in a maze, my rhymes amaze, he’ll blame his lateness on delays, but really it’s his verse he needs to rephrase/

You and your arrogant attitude is the only way you’ll ever be considered “cocky”, on RB, you winnin’ a battle is rare… like blacks-playin’-hockey*/
I’ll drop “bombs” on you… like your name was “Nagasaki”*, your relationship with tha alliance is rocky… yet you’re STILL their dick-riding-jockey/

Like bein’ in the slow lane, your skill is easily surpassed, you’ll get cut like grass, smashed like glass, this battle is another win i’m ‘bout to amass/
I’ll break your spine in half so you could be the first emcee to “kiss-his-own-ass”, kid can’t handle my disses, he’ll run to a mod sayin’ he’s been verbally harassed/

Didn’t you know, like a rabid dog I’m vicious, messin’ with me will have you sleepin’ with the fishes, I’m the emcee that’ll kick you when you’re down… cuz like that I’m malicious/
Battlin’ two different newbies in one day… your dreams are ambitious, you’re easily devoured like you were nutritious, you should run for senate ‘cuz everything you spit is fictitious/

*Not being racist or anything... but how many blacks are in the NHL?
**Nagasaki is the second city that got bombed by atomic bombs during WW2.

[Axe]

Meh... whatever, i didn't think the lines were gonna be that long, you can still spit 10 lines, match that whatever, my lines are designated by /... so that's 10 lines to me.

[Chemarim]

aight im droping. need to piss first *dances around*........................................... .............

[R-Dot-Capone]

no hate or nothing.......
but that was 10 bars (20 lines)
if Kautious don't care it don't matter.....
just letting u know 'cause some newbie is going 2 complain about it if u battle them.............

[Chemarim]

aight lemmi catagorize the begingin

{THE DECONSTRUCTION OF HUMAN 'BODY' ANATOMY} (part 1 on RB)

~this is the begining of an end, you better say your amends cause im sending you to where your streak of wins end//

~starting with the neck i'll sway your spine away from your head, no need for a death bed i'll have you quickly casket spread//
~watch as the 'ex-o skeleton' sheds as i rip 'your flesh' to shreds,
dismantel your hart from your veins and watch them go red with blood spillin on to the thread//

~Full speed on collision when i smash~bash and clash his ribs with a precision of contempt//
~no need to exicison his stomach, i'll slash~lash and gash his belly to no extent//

---------------half done----------

~this kid's a -pussy-... 'litaraly', 'as what i can see'- this is 'his anatomy', it's not my fault he chose to be handled badly randomly//
~this kid lacks a good joint as i sever his knees and watch his eyes open and freez, strip his quads with a fallen guarantee as i hear help of slient plee//
~It's to bad NYG can't be hear to save you as you suffer 'de-feet' by 'my last deconstruction spree', As you may be a diss-'memeber'(dissmemberd) i'll leave the next nasty gangsta on signs of retret//

------lyrical forensics won't be able to pic up the peices-----------

~Im finishing this up with a few words of truth, if you would all look below, the end has come for this NYG youth///

~Im Entering this kid's 'mind' on 'matter' with words of curse,
ripping apart his 'brain' and 'body' is basic to my immurse,-u could say those 21 words summed up my whole verse//

[Chemarim]

NEEED VOTES PLEASE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
IM OUT SO DROP A LINK AND I"LL HIT BACK

ALSO!!!!!!!!

PLEASE VOTE IN CATAGORIES

I THINK IT WILL BE CLOSE IF YUO READ BOTH VERSES

GOOD BATTLE AMB

IM OUT

[Axe]

Nice spit... i got tired of fake stuff like "ima kill you" so that's why i do similies, but nice spit though, let's get some votes.
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[Axe]

UP(1)... don't sleep, this is a good battle.
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[Aprentice²]

yall both kinda sound like canibus to me Kautious had better wordplay i vote 4 him............................................... .................................................. ..................................................

[Genetikz]

tight battle both good stuff kaut took it i feel wid this verse was ill n the finish well as he said summed it all up.

[Axe]

0-1, let's get some more votes.
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