Fuck You. I'm Leaving.

[Tragedian.]

Time to upp this!

[Tragedian.]

Hm...Up..leave links.

[Orc]

I'll post a piece in a minute man, feed it. But yeah, this was decent bro. The flow was simple, maybe you should work on a more advanced scheme? But it moved along quite well, there was good story progression man. It sucks to get slept on in this section (happens to me too). But you proved you can write nice here, the soldier theme was cool, emotion was also strong. Overall a good piece, RTF and keep writing, Dan.

[D. Jizzle.]

Thanks.