IceBerg420 vs DaShowStoppa2

[.Mack.]

5 bars or 10 lines
u spit first
no hate crew d/r votes
no bitin feedin

ill spit asap after u

[IceBerg420]

*Picks up Mic...........*
IceBerg420: Wzup My Niggaz'? Ya'll ready for this Merkin gimme a Hell yeah!

Crowd: HeLLLLLLLL Yeahhhhh

IceBerg420: Aight les make this shit Quick, I gotta blunt to burn and Money 2 earn ya'll feelin meh? Les Go.............

DaShowstoppa, u fuckin 'Pill-Popper' ya show stops here/
I'll spit 'Water', & take the 'flame' out of this 'flaming' lil qweer/
'Adhere-and-fear-my-severe-Lyrical Rumble tactics/
I got "Herbal" semi-automatics, Verbally piercin yo flak jacket/

Crowd: Ohhhhhhhh

Lil fagget thought he could spit flows, and "stop shows"/
When in reality he the one bendin over "takin dick like them hoes"/

Crowd: LoL LoL LoL LoL
Anonymus person: HeLL Nawww!!

DaShowstoppa I'ma Break U off a lil sumthin Proppa right around this time/
I'll "Transform" into a gun like "Megatron", & merk yo ass as if ya name were "Optimus Prime"/

Crowd: OOOoooooooooooooooo

Last Lines? Ok lemme finish this fuckin 'coward-quick'/
I'll rip off his teeth & lips so his lyrics can't 'devour-shit'/

Crowd: OOOhhhhhhhhhhh

Announcer: Oh shit ya'll give it up muh man IceBerg 4-tweezy, Its lookin ugly up in here ShowStoppa U gotz ta c'mon wit it...............Drop ya verse.......

[.Mack.]

now iceberg, wha i tell u about imaginin urself on 8mile and u was eminem dats so played, and u kno dat dese fake crowd yells dont need 2 be recorded on a cd and tape, and i should tell ya mom u was cussin

mic check 1 2 1 2 check it

ill spit "metonymy" shit in ur "ear" still ya dumbass still aint "heard of"//
my flows "kill", like holdin "picric toxin" wit "no gloves"//

your rhymes have "no meanin" like "Iceberg is the best!!!"//
your rhymes show "ignorance" like "Helen Keller and Stevie Wonders eye test"// (blind)

ill "slit" ya "throat" wit my "machete" like I was "OJ" and u was "nichole"//
youll end up like dat "Kelley Rowland" song....but wit ur life "stole"// (stole that song she made)

you couldnt land a "hit" if I was a "platinum record" and u was "2 pac"//(he had a lot of platinum records)
but instead of him gettin "popped", youll be the one endin up "gettin shot"//

ur flows are "soft like cotton", am I the one that ur dissin?//
ill "stomp" my "glasses" in "pieces" and make you "contacts" so u can "see" how im spittin//

[.Mack.]

uppin fo votes drop a link and we'll peep urs

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[BiG ApE]

this was a tight battle.........but i gotta go with showstoppa on this one. WOW dashow. ur punches got him. iceberg that was a nice drop but ur disses and punches werent as good as dashows

[.Mack.]

thanks fo votin uppin fo mo votes (2)

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[Bad News]

dashowstoppa had good wordplay and punches, Iceberg was good too, but it was close one to call. Iceberg had good structure on his verse with the crowd stuff, but I think......

VOTE=DASHOWSTOPPA2

check out my battle and drop an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66471

[.Mack.]

thanks fo votin uppin fo mo votes (3) come on i kno yall tired but dont sleep on dis 1

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[IceBerg420]

Damn I comeback on and I'm losin 0-2. LoL Oh well les get some mo votes up in heuh
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[.Mack.]

come on people dont sleep vote on dis piece uppin fo mo votes (4)

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[Two.Up]

alright here we go...

iceberg. I like the flow of ur verse, was feelin it. The crowd thing was original, but it took away from ur verse's overall flow...that hurt you. Punches were good, but flow was just killed by that crowd.
Showstopper gave a more balanced verse, with some structured, well put punches, flow was much better. Only thing that pissed me off was the "mic check 1 2 1 2," i mean cmon man its RB and ur writing a mic check?
but overall, i think show edged this one with some good flow and solid punches. vote = show. peace.

[tengo]

heres what i think:

wordplay - da show stopper
- wordplay was very very good. lines went together like cookies n cream.

flow - da show stopper
- whoever has the better wordplay has the better flow, and da show has the better flow. what hurt you iceberg was like someone else said, the crowd thing. this is RB not singing songs :P

punchlines - tie
- both had some good punches goin. da show had two great ones at the end that avoided me giving this one to iceberg. iceberg overall had constant punches that were good.

overall: was a great battle, but da show won it.

vote = da show

and hit my battle with an honest vote please,
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66527

[.Mack.]

thanks fo votin uppin fo mo votes (5)

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[Frame]

Originally posted by Audo
dashowstoppa had good wordplay and punches, Iceberg was good too, but it was close one to call. Iceberg had good structure on his verse with the crowd stuff, but I think......

VOTE=DASHOWSTOPPA2

check out my battle and drop an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66471

exactly.......
can u hit dis up fo me...................i need 1 mo vote thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66592

[Crash]

punches-dashowstoppa2
creativity-dashowstoppa2
flow-dashowstoppa2
wordplay-dashowstoppa2

effort-iceberg420

vote=dashowstoppa2


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