Ambiguous VS. DaIllistReBel

[Essen]

Aight, here are the rules:



10lines max
No feeding, d/r votes etc.
First to 5 wins, 5-0=KO
U spit first, I'll spit when ur done



It's due Sunday I guess, but spit when ur ready and good luck

[Essen]

Checking in, if u don't spit by 11:30 eastern time, i'll probably have 2 key something 2morrow, I hope u spit 2nite though.

[Axe]

Checkin' In...
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[Axe]

Aite... sorry i took so long, i was a lil bit busy, don't vote on this battle if you don't get my double meanings or don't understand some words... thanks.

DaIllistRebel couldn't stop my "reign" of punches... if he started spittin' sunshine/(double)
He calls himself "ill" 'cuz his tumor's malign... after this battle, all that'll be left, is-a-chalk-out-line/

I know you're 'bout swallowin', but this loss... you're gonna take-it-on-the-chin/(double)
Your chances of beatin' me, resemble those of a Muslim-eatin'-pork... NEVER GONNA HAPPEN/

The inhumane way i'm bout to murder this "dawg", you'll swear i battle like a "vet"/(double)
You'd think i'm spittin' fire the way i'm makin' this kid sweat, i'll hit em so hard... i'll-cripple-his-silhouette/

Rebel will never get a contract, only "scouts" lookin' for him... are tryna-sell-'em-cookies/
This thread must be school, the way Rebel's playin' "hooky", isn't well known on RB... like NBA rookies/

Rebel's real name must be Samuel L. Jackson... the ways he's always-gettin'-the-"shaft"/(double)
This kid is duckin'-n-dodgin' my punches more then an army draft, you're too elementary... like arts-n-crafts/

[Essen]

Iight, good drop. Here is my verse. If u don't get the personals or the multis, please don't vote....


You'll never be able 2 implement, it's evident, saying ur rhymes are "wack" is a "compliment" I'll leave u suffering with torment//

A win for me, u can not prevent, it's like I put "cologne" on my rhymes, it's only the beginning, but the "smell of victory" is so "pleasant"//

Ur rhymes have not fully grown, ur chances of winning this battle are smaller than that "mascot from Honey Comb"//

I'll leave u stoned, my flow is "steady" like a "metronome", a win would never "lean towards ur way" even if u were writting in "Rome"!// (Leaning Tower Of Pizza)

With my rhymes, I intrigue, battlin a cat that's way below my league//

Let me proceed, if this was the game of "Chess" I would beat u with the tactic of "Blitzkrieg"!// (U can win with that in chess in 5 moves and "5" bars, get it?)

This kid has no framework, I'm writtin this verse with one very little smerk//
U wanna talk about "arts and crafts"? My verse is a "verbal picture" of u getting "merked"// (lol)

But let's serious, I'll leave u delirious cause ur rhymes are so hideous//

Dawg, ur an "enigma", u ever winning a battle will be mysterious and "ambiguous"//


There may be some spelling errors, I dunno cause I g2 bounce.

[Axe]

Um... you fed of my "arts-n-crafts" line... and you didn't use my name right... but let's get some votes.

[Young Philly]

nvm....i cant vote.......ambiguous is in my sub-crew and i dont want no hate.....good verses for newbies....if u r newbies.....

[Axe]

Can we get some votes in here? (#1)
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[9 Millimeter]

vote honest on my battle and i'll vote honest here
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=66363

[Axe]

Uppin for votes(#2)
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[Axe]

Uppin for votes (#3)
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[Essen]

Ummm, if the arts and crafts line is played out, I have never seen it, I've seen ur line about the arts and crafts written be4 and I did use ur name right.


Ambiguous=unclear meaning u ever winning a battle would be unclear 2 me, so I think I used it right.



Neway, good battle and Uppin............................................( #1)

[Essen]

And btw, when u said "fed", u meant just that I used it in my verse, I only used it as a personal.

And 2 Young P, yeah I am pretty new but thanx 4 the feedback.

[R-Dot-Capone]

Good battle....
i ain't saying shit 'cause ambiguous is the newest in my crew
just wanted 2 see how he spits.....
good shit from both of you....
funny how the only 2 people 2 hit this up can't vote....
figures....................

[Two.Up]

ok heres how i see it...
ambiguous had some pretty good flow and some solid punches....i wasnt getting the (double) after some of the lines, but whatever. You came solid and ended solid as well.
When i read rebels first verse, i felt like this battle was over...had nice wordplay and good flow....but it kinda fell apart from there. Nothing else came close to his opener. The fact that some bars were 2 long lines and others were kinda short didnt help the overall verse flow as well. But solid effort...
Anyways, vote = ambiguous....and TRY to figure out what ur name means before callin someone out on it. peace.