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    Genetikz
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    "my imperfection" dont sleep

    waddup dawg's, ma boy just got access to his studio again so off i got to record again .... anyway i aint dropped shit in here for awhile so here is alittle drop im workin on for ma next aud..... constructive comments please......iight heres da 1st verse of a mighty long fuckin song............

    the slightest imperfections stands out like ya got a erection//
    ma shit dont need any correction, my words are like me standin n flexing//
    hexin all comers wid evil solutions to their worries, makin um hurrie//
    so hot, hotter then a mexican curry, i get the impression ur here n its just a flurry//
    so hurry out the back door, ill show ya da way, same way as the last n the one before//
    mind the step on ya way maybe u could go buy a rap book on Ebay shouldent cost much//
    hey look ill even lend ya ma gold credit card to pay so long as i get ma tranquility//
    i need it to impress hoes wid ma inginuity, origanalty and quality nothin temporery//
    here to stay ud be well advised to listen to every word i say, ya cant keep me at bay//
    I got things to say, put down in only the lyrical way, no play till i reached perfection//
    I dont wanna get their by no democratic election, i aint a beurocrat ima rapper//
    heart stopper, blood warmer, jaw dropper, aint no way i whant a free ride//
    or some one to slide- ma dick n elivate me high, i already no ma skills are fly//
    takin me high, outta reach, just like when i hear ya preach, i see every breach//
    in ya armory, chink in ya scails, all adds up to one thing, another nail- in ya coffin//
    u see, call me a boffin in ma field, none better i aint about to yield, still got ma shield//
    force field around me no way in, so i go let it drop, whatch the white boys flop//
    they only got one thing in mind, make me blind tear ma face off like silence of the lambs//
    then wear it, but i do solemly swear it, when they got ma face on they become dope//
    only problem is they spit blood n choke, cant handle the naturel talent in it//
    like jim carey in mask, they turn evil and become just another one, possesed//
    by the best that is within me, swallowed whole just another emcee in me//
    cus at the end of the day like in highlander, their can be only one, one geniuse//
    all da rest become tediuse n drive ya deliruse, im seriuse ma rythem is ma cancer//
    no answer, shit just eats me inside to out, turns me inside out, exposed to hoes//
    at every show-s i do, they all whant a piece a me, but ma feet are firm--ly on the ground//
    now turn the lights low lay back n listen to ma perfect flow//

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    uppib 1

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    THIS WAS STRAIGHT HOTNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    dawg this is probably one of your best drops ever man.......yo.......keeep spittin that shit can't wait to hear da aduio and see the whole drop yo I'm lookin forward to it.

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    uppin

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    uppin cats

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    ya i was feeling it but it was hard to follow though
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    thanks,,,, and i did point out this was an audio n u just cant get the same reflection on ya piece in text until ya play wid it on aud na mean

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    I'm new.......WHUT DA FUCK IS UPPIN?
    If the only way to the top is thru you...THEN SO BE IT!!

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    tru mine r like that also

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    man when another post is made or commented on ur post drops,,,,, thus ^^uppin^^

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    uppin

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    that was some good shit i enjoyed it alot keep doin wat your doin dawg
    im made of money/and i dont like honey/

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    that was hot, definitely... good flow, nice wordplay and vocab.
    fav line :
    cus at the end of the day like in highlander, their can be only one, one geniuse//
    all da rest become tediuse n drive ya deliruse, im seriuse ma rythem is ma cancer//

    Nice drop my, keep postin stuff like this, it was tight
    peace
    Much too dangerous
    Meet the perfect stranger
    I'm the extreme case of fire and anger
    The misguided angel with deep routed fears
    My face shows the years of blood sweating tears
    Pay attention, this gypsy that deeply senses
    Evil spirits lurking behind picket fences
    Embarking darker images and skeletal remains
    Cold hearted soldier with ice in his veins

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    Genetikz
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    thanks dawgs for da comments

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