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    Question jus sumtin

    yo can i get sum feedback, cuz i wanna know wut to work on to so i can be betta cuz im only begginin



    no matter what u do u neva gunna pleaz every1/
    theres alwayz gunna be a hater out there son/
    but i treat it like rubber, let it bounce strait off/
    i look at the hate and dodge it like im in tha matrix dawg/
    i don't give a fuck wat u gotta say about my style/
    cuz i kno it's a fact my spit iz past mild/
    itz blaze, sum a ya'll iz a bunch a dick suckers/
    i can't be beat by 1 other, hear dat motha fuckas/
    i'll make u suffer, im not 1 2 be fucked wit/
    step on my block & duck quick, u will get abducted/
    it don't matter who u are, wat set u rep/
    age jus' a number, fuck wit me u gunna feel my steps/
    i'll stomp all over ur ass like a motha fuckin' doormat/
    niggas swearin' they pimpin' , then where tha fuck ur hoes at?/
    man im a fuckin' pimp, n' that ain't no lie/
    so don't ask why i be wit mad girls, n' ima guy/
    it's cuz i fucked them all, even in they overalls/
    i get mines no matter where we at, thats how a tru balla ball/
    so don't fuckin' hate, niggas u must learn 2 start congradulatin/
    cuz u kno ur ass at home right now tryin' 2 stop ur masterbatin/
    looking at me in amazment, can't spit out a statement/
    oh, guess u really thought i wouldn't tie ur ass up in tha basement/
    this niggas crucial, n' i don't play fairly/
    so wacth ya'll motha fuckin' mouth any time u get near me/
    u hear me?/

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    yo can i please get sum feedback

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    simple drop but good starter up yah vocab some similis an multies an u be on tha road for real but other then that its pretty tight for a starten artist keep spittin it'll up yah game peace 6-10
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    not a bad drop, a simple one. Up the vocab and mulites and yo shit will be extremely tight...still nice drop
    7/10

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    decent verse nice flow..5/10 nothin special keep elevatin kid..
    peep ma shit
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66485

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