Rules::
8-10 lines
5 votes wins
no hate/dr votes
spit right now.....
Stealth Eclipse
SouthernRapper
Rules::
8-10 lines
5 votes wins
no hate/dr votes
spit right now.....
<center>SuckaS</center>
Iight Somthin Short...
Kid Saw My Verse And 'Fleed' Like He Was On Vacation, His Mom Saw That He Was Lookin At Illness So She Called For An Evacuation:::
I Turned Into A Pissed Off Hulk And He Still Didnt See-Me, Why U On Ur Knees Whorshiping Me Thats No Way To Treat-Me:::
Kid Thought He Was 'Fast' But He Couldnt Put The 'HighWay' Through-Me, Even If U Were R.Kelly Theres No Way u Could Abuse-Me:::
Why Dont U Take A Picture Of Me Cuz Thats The Only Way U Intake Illness, U Need To Go To 'Sex Ed' Cuz If I Was A 'Bannana' U Wouldnt Know How To Peel-This:::
Im Shredding Ya Life And Ya Wonderin What Im Doin, U R Seriously Lyrically Challenged But I Dont No What U Need To Start Usin:::
Done
<center>SuckaS</center>
im goin to edit it for spelling and i need to space...forgot
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wheres this bitch at?
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checking in, remember I told you yesterday that tommorow
would be the day we battle 4:00-4:30, remeber my time where
I was last night.?? as soon as I pm'd you with that I logged out..
(sorry for any miss understanding)
Anyway what happened to my 12 to 14 lines rule...?
And the NO CREW
NO RECYCLING
Ill be waiting right here for a reply..
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dope verse, ill come vote when ya done,,,,,,,, peep ma battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66349 thanks
never mind im puttin my 14 lines like I stated before...
Ya lines are pretty much all horrible, pathetic, you REEK/
You need the power of FRESH SCENT like a GLADES PLUG in to
stop the stink/
Your style is edible and your shit aint delicious/
I'll consume ya leftovers cause I HUNGER for competition/
Your beyond the help of Wackness Emergency Center/
Ya better off getting hot in herre laced in Nelly's leather/
Feelin lost and forgotton like Whos The Boss?/ (sitcom,show)
The last humid thing to come out of the South was Louisiana
Hot Sauce/
Ya occupation is student , cause you far from LEARNING the ways
of a MASTER/
Leave this grasshoppers White Belt blood stained so he can
remember the answer/
BE KIND AND REWIND my rhymes for intelligent minds/
I should charge a LATE FEE cause you fail to RETURN In the LINES/
You comin with punches but im coming with BLOCK BUSTER ability/
Your just another RENTAL only viewed temporarily......
all yall reading my text just remember its grasshopper's(with an s)
Uppin for honest, intelligent, explained votes...
One
u went over the line limit......but o well....uppin/..
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ok ok dis was tight kinda like da battle of da master n under dawg,,, southern u came short n basic, their was nothin in yo verse that really stood out na mean, i was lookin to read somin that maybe wouldent get a laugth or a OOHHHH but just a smile, failed, flow was off but hey dis is a battle n fuck flow, ya best bar was da r kelly bar..
stealth ya shit was ok again no flow, wordplay was basic n the 1st 2 lines could kill u in many emcees eyes they where pure whackness fosure, HOWEVER id did get better n culminated in these bars----I should charge a LATE FEE cause you fail to RETURN In the LINES/
You comin with punches but im coming with BLOCK BUSTER ability/
Your just another RENTAL only viewed temporarily......
specially those last 2 and the way u constructed the 1st to lead into the last, IMO thats what took dis battle.
vote= stealth (just)
iight............he got 6 extra lines tham me....but nice drop...went over the line limit..but no hate....i didnt think it would take much...
<center>SuckaS</center>
yeah but you ignored MY rules that YOU agreed to...
So whats up with that changing shit at the last minute...
and I only have 4 more lines than you remeber my rule
12-14
I have 14 you have 10??
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yea but i dropped last niight cuz i was goin to be gone...and i was goin to make it short....and plus if u had a line limit set that must mean u been pre writin ya shit..
<center>SuckaS</center>