Southernrapper v.s Merking King

[ILLunatic]

aight here we go
Rules:
Southern spits first
no hate votes
no d/r votes
10-20 lines



LETS GET THIS SHIT GOIN!

[Flip]

Iight...

Kid Thinks Hes The Merkin King But i Dont See A Crown:::
The Only Time This Kid Sees Heat Is When Hes Hell Bound:::
Coulnt Connect A Punch If Ali Taught U in Training School:::
He Bout To Collapse Cuz My Rhymes R Like A Draining Pool:::
Kids Tryin To Battle Newbies So He Can Go Undefeated:::
But Ill Give Him A Second Loss And He'll Be UnGreeted:::
U Just Like A Drunk Guy in This Battle U Cant Stay On Ur Feet:::
Why U Want Beef With Me? Oh Yea Uve Never Seen Real Meat:::
Kid Tells All His Challengers To Spit First So He Can Feed:::
PreWritten Shit and Still Sucks Hes Left Without A Deed:::
U Get Attached To My Lyrics Like U Have Some Sort Of Addiction:::
A Choppy Verse, Played Out Punches Yea Its A Prediction:::
Kid Got Banned And Came Back Thinking He Was In Control:::
He Thinks He Can Direct Me Like A Police Officer On Patrol:::
Ill Leave U Stranded Pickin Up Scraps And Limbs:::
Rhymes Are Garbage Kid Lemme Go Find Some TrashBins:::
Couldnt Go All Out On Me If He Was Takin Anger ManageMent:::
Scared To Go First Cuz He Thinks He Has An AdvantageMent:::
Look Kid The Only Way u Winnin This Battle Is If U Cheat-Me:::
Might As Well Throw in The Towel N Take Second Cuz Ya Cant Beat-Me:::

Next?

No Feeding!

[Flip]

Shit Im goin To Edit It For Speeling Iight
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[ILLunatic]

Dawg ya punches had no Connection, All those ya threw at me got lost in rejection//
Ok so ya name SouthernRapper, dawg ya rhymes are weak maybe ya need ta plug in another Adaptor//
Ya wanna battle with no Feeding, dawg ya rhymes are wack ya verses aint worth reading//
Ya rhymes are weak exactly my Prediction, Wack ass lines bout as old as Science Fiction//
I'm bout ta hit ya up wit some facts, ya gettin on my nerves imma cut off ya head wit an axe//
So ya go to George Town High, they must not teach ya how ta rhyme cuz ya bitch ass gone die//
It was obvious this battle was gone be Heated, and pretty soon after the votes come you gone be defeated//
You a Sophmore you only in 10th grade, hahaha you a virgin and i gotta feelin u aint eva gone get laid//
Honestly homie you juss a dick ryder, ya wanna be hood rich but ya can't be like Big Tymers//
Dawg ya verse was Copy Writtin, dont botha me cuz i'm still gone be spittin//
I'm a merking king you is my next victim, ya rhymes comin at me but i juss restrict 'em//
My rhymes comin at you outta controll, ya scared ya dont kno what ta do ASS HOLE//
I'm kickin you out of this site like it was an Eviction, ya not an MC you'll be Pink Slipped in a week that is my Prediction//
I'm gonna kill you with High Quality Perfection, when ya get married aint no one gone sho up ta ya Reception//
Dawg battlin me ya better be Kautious, cuz my flow is sick it will leave ya Nautious//
I kno what your thinkin " i couldn't come at you any meaner", i broke ya record when i meant ta break ya femur//
Bitch you a disgrace, ya wanna battle me how bout i merk you face ta face//
See nigga i drop Bombz, i was the real winner in the war wit Vietnam//
Finisher
Nigga ya spit these bricks but my flows not destructable, look at ya grl she so ugly i name her Non Fuck-able//
Fuck it i'm done, look at my record my losses equal exactly NONE//

[EvilKronix]

I dunno....Close close battle...king obviously doesn't know what a bar is...that should be a DQ...I'm not voting cuz its 'that' close you guys need to use more Wordplay....(since this is help month) (or some shit like that)...but anyways...good luck guys

[youngblood]

yo this was tight as hell battle and king's was pretty fuckin long, but it kept me reading it, it was interesting, southern i've seen you come harder than that man, so i poll vote king for better punches and wordplay, good battle ya'll no hate

[mr.mayhem]

Southern rapper got this shit.
merking dude kept sayin prediction
way too much
my man from tha south came wit it
flow and wordplay was more on point
but it coulda been better.

vote=southern rapper
touch this wit sum truth
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=58602

[ILLunatic]

aight uppin............................................. ..........................................
thanks for ya'll votes even if ya didnt' vote for me
it's straight!

[Cory Stylez]

nice battle keep up the good work both of ya................................................ .................................................. ...

[ILLunatic]

aight still 1-1 i guess
UPPPPPPPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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[Chemarim]

hottt battle, i can't vote on this but elemental uppin!!
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[ILLunatic]

Aight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Still 1-1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Flip]

uppin....
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[ILLunatic]

Uppin damn
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[ILLunatic]

Originally posted by SouthernRapper
uppin....
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