Brooklyn
Ace Of Spades
aight this shoiuld be good, he's been wanting to
battle me for awhile but had bad timing....now this is his moment to shine
here are the rules:
10 lines max
no h/d/c votes
u spit first
i won't feed
good luck
may the best verse win
no time remember......lol....
no hate either
peACE
.:I Told You To Pm Me The Link, You Don't Listen:.
Ya Choice Actors 'David Spade' How Ya Coverin 'Aces' When You Playin 'Strip Games', And You Fake Like A Stage Name And Like Bowlers With Bad Aim Ya Firin With Open Frame/
I'm 2 Faced Like A Trench Knife An I'll Murder Ya Ass Like When Blake Beats His Wife, You Grabbin Ya Toes So Ya Half My Height And Cut Out 1 Of Ya Eyes So Ya Half My Sight/((Blake=Rober Blake)
Ya Shits Trash Like National Rag Day, This Is What Happens When You Give Batman A Set of Blades.. I'ma Cut This Deck Cus This Ace Is A Full Hand Of Jokers Like He Was Cheating In Spades/
You Cant Even Get a Vote On RB And Like 'Herbs In Deep Waters', 'This Dope Cant Swim', I Break Ya Lyrics Like I Was Poppin A Limb And Like Shaggy Bitches Ya Shit Needs A Trim/
You Cant 'Spit Clean' If Rinsed With Scope And Like Feces Gone Crazy Ya Shit Cant Cope, Skip Ya Lines Like A Jump Rope And Shits Dirty Like Kids Bein Tagged By A Priest And Pope/
'Punches Stickin' This Bitch Like Im 'Boxin Glue' Ace Of Spades..Your Mockin Who?...I Must Be An Armless Produce Worker The Way I 'Drop This Fruit'/
Everyone Knows Your Not American Spades, I'll Pause Your Card Game With A Numeric Page And The Only Way You'll Get A Vote Is If The Site Says 'Done But With Errors On Page'/
So You Should Give Me The 'Credit' Cus I Easily 'Master-Cards', You'll Be Seeing Stars & Wrapped With Sars Like I Hit You With A Ace Of Club And Like Cats With No Dick Ryders, You Just Got Spade!/-Hope Ya Get It
nice drop
i smell a 2 day written commin in thiz battle mayne............................................. .................................................. ............................
Lets do this
^^^Another disgrace to the elites....
Erase your win, deduct your losses, you won't find ya true self till you've realized you've lossed this//
You ain't hot-shit so come back till you've come across-hits, you couldn't become straight if you "flossed" pits or "crossed" tits//
And what ever happened to the G-unit look then? Well kids when you get f**ked up as bad as this cat you get reduced to plain Brooklyn//
Readin his verse and yet to find a single hook-in, you could keep searchin a decade and you would still be lookin//
You ducked too slowly, gettin f**ked two rows deep, its time for you to grow-G, so i decap ya back to sac your stat, so bad you owe me//
No need to start gettin holy, but too bad you can't experience winnin this but you can keep on hoping// (jus keep on prayin)
We got another dick rider ready to "return the favor if needed" ya sig and your verse is whack so prepare to be lyrically depleted//
I wouldn't have pity on you if you got on your knees and pleaded, I'm jus tryin to set an example to how cock suckers need to be freely treated//
You dont' need to see me heated, since you don't know how to rap I just showed you how you should//
Now watch as the each member of RB slaps your face sayin "I wouldn't bite off you if you tasted good"//
i edited for a spelling error but its before
any votes came in so its not cheating....
my verse was aight, yours was good to
may the best verse win
and next time don't rap about my name
cause everyone else already did....oh well
this is finally over
peACE
Last edited by Ace Of Spades; July 8th, 2003 at 06:44 PM
yo Soldier, how dare you try out for my crew and come
in this and say somethin like that.....i spit on dick riders like
you.......damn man.......
peace
EMhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...ama take my time on thiz..ama go reread thiz cuz is a good battle
BRB...wit my vote
OK i came to conclusion
Punches: ACE
Wordplay: Brooklyn
PErsonals: Ace
creativity: ACE
Overall Verse: ACE
Vote: Ace
enuff said he got ou wit the personals......and made me laugh
^^^^^I dont know WTF HAPPEN BUT IT WONT LET ME VOTE ON THE POLL>.......................................
Ace Of Spades.... Im an Alliance Member Now.... 'Nuff Said
battle breakdown
personals - Brooklyn.... With so many Ace Of Spade Disses.. but it was close
punches/meda4s/multis - Ace Got Sick Punches.... But he got let down with little/no meda4s or multis and Brooklyns was packed with these so i giv it 2 Brooklyn
Flow - Ace Of Spades ~Had A Nice Flow With Goood interbar rhymin
Creativity - Tie ~ Brook Made soo many Multis and disses outa your name... but Ace made it str8 up funny!
so i think thats it... if ive left anythin out then tell me... but it looks like brook won
Maybe ruthless over-exagerated or didnt read the verses thoughly
Ace of Spades had 2 peresonals, the G-UNIT line & the sig. line
I think Brooklyn came with good multis, punches & the names he dissed with were hard hitting.
Ace fell off after the last 4 lines, closer was sloppy & the 2 lines before it were just OK, nothing stood out much except the opener so heres my breakdown:
Opener- Both, mostly Ace
Closer- Brooklyn
Consistency- Ace
Punches- Both
Multis- Brooklyn
Personals- Both
Complexity- Neither
Creativity- Both
Intensity- Both, mostly Brooklyn
Overall: Brooklyn
I suggest to Brooklyn not to take chances when you battle someone such as TruthZ, who you called out because I seen you do much better & not to be a critic but this was sort of a disappointment
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Strait Up.....Good Battle Though....Originally posted by ~RuThLEss~
OK i came to conclusion
Punches: ACE
Wordplay: Brooklyn
PErsonals: Ace
creativity: ACE
Overall Verse: ACE
Vote: Ace
enuff said he got ou wit the personals......and made me laugh
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tight battle peeps, here's the breakdown:
multies: ace
personals: ace, i dont consider card punches personals, or just the use of the name
flow: tie
punches:tie but leaning towards brooklyn
creativity:tie
vote:ace
yo brooklyn, you should have kept the card punches to a minimum
and if you did, you might have got this
aww.............heck, this is to close for comfort....lol
oh well.........ruthless, try to poll vote man.........
so far its 2-2.......aww damn, this was a good battle
brooklyn........at least we got this over with
uppub
peace
thanks for the votes dogs.......uppin for more
please vote on this
don't sleep......leave your link
and we'll vote fairly in return..thanks
peeps.........
peace
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