A Treaty: Ink Embraced

[P. Mortuus]

Ink Embraced

Embrace the droplets that rain lord’s pain upon my brain
I feel his hands delve into my membranes inking up stains
Linking up maimed guilt that’s cogently driving me insane
Mains adapter of my CNS is discharged with it all attains
Former legend to fallen poet listing off metaphorical games
Shames as such that force home contempt, my ink drains…..

Drip…
………Drip
……………Drip

I dip the quill with the blue blood of past scriptures recycled
Pictures cycled through my head, Susie dead in her little bed
A daughter now a spectral saunter I didn’t mean to taunt her
Or daunt her; busy with wordings I never had the simple luxury
To breathe a moment completely but I couldn’t sheathe poetry
Complete a quilt each inked with images of a family in joy
I remember dancing with Joanna & bringing Susie her first Toy
But now I have a quill to embrace & an inkpot to create kisses
My pen misses crucial notes of issues, the falling tissue hisses
It talks to me to forget the dynasty I disassembled without care
I get up & glare in the mirror a wild yet worn man reflects my stare

Drip…
……..Drip
…………..Drip

I hug my completed assignment with plight hindering my fight
Will justice be given or will crooks use the monetary might
I crack a fortune cookie, “A treaty will be passed today”
Few…nothing bad….then again who believes in it anyway

Drip…
………Drip
…………..Drip



The law is past
Criminals docked
He laughs aghast
Finally their locked

“You cannot expect to uphold the law without giving a sacrifice”

I lost my family for this…..but many families have been saved
I embrace the ink that carved into this treaty, efforts braved

[P. Mortuus]

^Yup from the infamous battles

I think these are unused
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9&page=1&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312848

[P. Mortuus]

Yup checked, thanks

[NiNjah Red]

yea nother nice drop P.shit is staying warped for a minute. i like that whole new like delivery thing thats poppin.... wording and imaging was top shotter shit
better than most actually............ ish was str8 graphic..........
the whole piece as such was stand out so no need to quote on lines

keep poppin them ones

pz1

[sILLable]

this is a very enjoyable piece......vocab and wordplay are very advanced....rhyme scheme is on point......very intricate and complex....i enjoyed reading this piece as do i enjoy reading all your pieces...keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

[DaMicSnatcher]

this was really really good....the vocabwas just amazing and it flowed amazingly....i loved the concept as well. I don't even know what to say about it but WOW

[P. Mortuus]

Well thanks.

[Tragedian.]

hmmm..even though this was used against me i really like it....it came off real good from the start...the flow was real nice and smooth...strutre was nice and easy to read and very creative...the pics added in some intresting spots...and you were very creative with the topic...check out dear brandi..keep up.

[O.Z.]

yea i'm feelin this post....sick vocab, it flowed well too...nice topic too, keep on it play boy

[Ascend]

Nice piece, it had it all. I loved the Vocab. and flow especially. Keep up and please check - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=313372

[Lil' Rickie]

i really cldt even follow
poor skills

[P. Mortuus]

i really cldt even follow
poor skills

WTF at upping such an old piece of min lol wow.