Raz Vs Young Hercule$

[Raz]

Rules:
I spit first
no dickrydin ...ect...votes
Make it Quik too...
I'll spit first....
12Lines (6Barz) Min and Max


Good Luck

[Raz]

young hercules, dawg quit rappin and go back-to-pegasis//
fuck rappin i'mma go "wwe" on this nigga and suplex-this-kid//

fuck if u hercules then call me zeus, ur my-bastard-child//
nah i take that back, this bitch ain't got ne relation to me, he-can't-freestyle//

u say ur from neverland so did u get fucked by michael-jackson//
but u say ur from tha-island-man, is that ur coverup from all-of-ur-sexual-action//

only money u ever see is in yo lame-ass-sign-on//
could have ne name u want but lets see u chose a greek heroes dick to-be-rydin-on//

this niggaz dumb as fuck, thinkin he on drugs lookin through-a-colidascope//
and to tha viewers, look at his piece of shit, click Raz at tha top thats were u-direct-yo-vote//

yo i could stop right here give u unlimit amount of barz and still demolish-ya-text//
infact i might, my words are scared around u, u bitin, u need to quit-yo-molest//

this bitch likes to procrastinate just look at his record, he always-wants-to-win but never-does//
i'm gonna aniliate like oj did to his bitch, do-u-comprehend, bitch i ain't gonna wear-no-gloves//



Yo here ya go i fixed tha brackets

*Throws Young tha Mic*

damn i wish shit coulda been longer thou........oh well get yo rap on.......

[Young Philly]

idk how hard hercules'll cum...but hopefully it wuz harder than raz's shit....i seen better outt raz....neway....uppin for votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=61876

[Raz]

yeah hopefuly he'll respond tonght......but neways thanx fo tha help dawg........lol be back to vote on it aight,,,,

[Dyslexic]

Yo, much respect, check this battle please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=61664

[Raz]

dayuuuuum./.........kid don't get on do he......foreal herc u see this post dawg......characters....

[Bad News]

Raz your lines didn't really rhyme, but I ain't seen Young Hercules yet so I ain't gonna vote.
..........!!!!!!!!!

[Raz]

huh what part don't rhyme? when there is a - inbetween u say it together.......foreal what part don't rhyme?

[Raz]

FUCK IT, HEY I HOPE A MOD, PEEPS THIS, I'M CLOSING THIS SHIT NOW......HE AIN'T GONNA RESPOND.....................


SHIT IS CLOSED......

[Tha lepercon]

yo man hold ya fuckin horses he'll be there he just told me to tell you that no diss ( i'm on tha phone wit him)

[Raz]

aight man, i just don't want no prewrittin shit, i mean common u could tell him my shit and he got time to write and rewrite his shit to me then post it....shit ain't fair dude....

[Icarus]

pretty hot freestyle but don't put the stuff that rhymes in brackets, it looks too sloppy
I'll try and vote when the other guy drops his lyrics

[Tha lepercon]

Aight he comin on right now he said********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ****

[Young Hercule$]

Yo ***Picks up tha mic***( that shit cool)


Raz you can just Kiss my Ass
why tha hell you talkin' bout me when ya rhymes stinks like
you... fuckin trash!!//

ya avatar is hot, but ya punchlines not, I would hate to put you on tha spot, but you fuckin stink so I ma let ya rot, Man im smokin yo ass like pot//

in this Ima Evil maxwell "This womans work" is sraight fuckin dirt

and it stinks like a terd made by a fuckin herb, or a white ass nerd
you just like Malibu's most wanted, smokin paper instead of chronic, ya vocab is weak are you hook on phonics//ha ha

you can tell by tha welts I put on ya ass I got all tha gold belts
you need to go to charter wit that shit even ya rhymes need help// (that's tha kill)


Yo man I don't want to spit no mo cuz I gettin sick ( i'm 2 ill )

[MoRbId]

im w/ cameron on this one. Raz u got some nice stuff but really... the brakets just make me wanna not read it.
it hurts mah head d00d. but other than that its all good.
Wish i could vote!

Vote Raz on this one ppl.