u people will neva make it into a league...
...uppin....lets get this shit closed
im tired of noobs votin...plz sum experienced heads
u people will neva make it into a league...
...uppin....lets get this shit closed
im tired of noobs votin...plz sum experienced heads
uppin this shit...lets get sum god damn votes...im tired of this shit...you'll sleepin in this shit...votes in
get real with tha votes
...and close this shit...tired of waitin...experienced heads vote
now plz...uppin for honest votes
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Advisory
im fast to da punch, and im known to make them hurt worse
^so this bitch'll jus bite tha dust...and a bar or two from my last verse
yeah i'll knock ya teeth out, leave you in pain, while we're fighting
and you'll "cry for help".....but thats considered ghostwriting
those made me chuckle... verse was ok. Not alot of hard punches but some wit and directed.
Sickmate
nothing... in fact embarrassing...
I dont even know how you're getting votes. You had one punchline about some gay website and that punch sucked. Wow... you need to learn the basics.
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Advisory took this pretty easily. better punches, flow, personals; just everything was better.
Sickmate, no hate, but you dropped really weak. all your lines were statements, you had no personals, and the name play you tried was wack.
elevate.
uppin this shit
...i want tha fuckin FL title...so i can brag like everyone else..and i cant get it..if you'll dont fuckin vote
uppin...
..jus need two more votes..damn.. lets go get sum more fuckin votes in here....Lets gooooooooooooo
i adjust to my battlers, so wen i speak ya lango, its no hate
but wen i spit, this bitch FLU...so i knew u was Sick, Mate<---str8 opener
im fast to da punch, and im known to make them hurt worse
^so this bitch'll jus bite tha dust...and a bar or two from my last verse<---iight
you could write for hours, jus make sure ya shits on track, heck
you'll be bridging tha gap...with metal wires, and brackets<---no
yeah i'll knock ya teeth out, leave you in pain, while we're fighting
and you'll "cry for help".....but thats considered ghostwriting<---ok
rb is like ya home of homes, and you could call me MR.NICE GUY, cuz
here is where I draw tha line....to show ware exactly ya house was<---nah
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This site is full of gangstas n drugs... Ill step back im sorry
Not even... The only dope on here's the 1 called Ad-vi-sory<---coulda been flipped alot better
Your getting burned...Your verse about to get melanoma
Always takes long to reply... Wats wrong fell asleep? ..
Reading ur shit... Watch what u write so i dont slip ina coma<---stretched and...no
Every line just plain wack...So stupid a retart got insulted
Every one that read it ... Mental health was consulted<---no
Wasteing my time... Every lines not even straight
Broken...Bent... Noobish...I cant see why ur still not a noweight<---the most abused concepts on RB, wrapped up in one line, wow.
Your punches are gay too...There more like slaps
Get off rap battles...GayMatchMaker.com perhaps<---nah
overall...
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ok drop, couple good lines...liked that flu shit.
sick
you gotta get off those type of concepts, they're way too basic. dont ever spit a punch involvin "noobs" "RB weight classes" or the old "go to gay.com" shit again. its embarrassin.
no hate, just objective feed.
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btw, both yall hit one a my joints up.
my bad for the free post.
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uppin this shit, need sum more votes in here.. lets hurry up and finally close this, i only need one and this shit is done. LETS GO
Sickmate..
This site is full of gangstas n drugs... Ill step back im sorry
Not even... The only dope on here's the 1 called Ad-vi-sory
hahah no.
Your getting burned...Your verse about to get melanoma
Always takes long to reply... Wats wrong fell asleep? ..
Reading ur shit... Watch what u write so i dont slip ina coma
that was a terrible setup, too stretched and this concept has been used alot.
Every line just plain wack...So stupid a retart got insulted
Every one that read it ... Mental health was consulted
meh..needs rewording.
Wasteing my time... Every lines not even straight
Broken...Bent... Noobish...I cant see why ur still not a noweight
Noooo
Your punches are gay too...There more like slaps
Get off rap battles...GayMatchMaker.com perhaps
bah, calling him gay is not a diss.
I didn't like your verse too much, i found alot of filler in it, you had one or two good concepts but you just need to connect them well.
Advisory
i adjust to my battlers, so wen i speak ya lango, its no hate
but wen i spit, this bitch FLU...so i knew u was Sick, Mate
meh, you had the right concept but instead of saying you knew, it shoulda been somthin like " this bitch flu so much its nowonder ur sick,mate"
im fast to da punch, and im known to make them hurt worse
^so this bitch'll jus bite tha dust...and a bar or two from my last verse
Ok
you could write for hours, jus make sure ya shits on track, heck
you'll be bridging tha gap...with metal wires, and brackets
Nah
yeah i'll knock ya teeth out, leave you in pain, while we're fighting
and you'll "cry for help".....but thats considered ghostwriting
Ok
rb is like ya home of homes, and you could call me MR.NICE GUY, cuz
here is where I draw tha line....to show ware exactly ya house was
Played, i've seen this a couple times.
I thought you're verse was alright, seemed average to me, wording will help you get better in time. you seemed harsher and found your verse easier to understand.
Vote - Advisory.
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