West: #8 Dao vs. #5 Meks

[Philly®]

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[Dios de Hip Hop]

Check yo

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...14&postcount=9
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...20&postcount=7

Only two links cuz Spit no-showed so BTK automatically wins.

[Meks.]

check brotha

[Dios de Hip Hop]

I'm easily advancin.. son trembles when I'm holdin nines
cuz Mecca pussy..
..and I ain't talkin bout bitches reppin that clothin line
your inconsistent verses make it easy to son you
fuckin limited chump.. you should stick to the 1-2
you was an accident..
.. ask yo mother, it was the alcohol that made her
your pops was hopin that the birth was a failure..
.. but instead momma just gave birth to a failure
now yo' momma love to get down with oral.. that shit made me shut mouth
but NO ONE wants her to concieve again..
your pops took one for the team.. even Russell Crowe is Gladiator cunt OUT..
your better? Your must be kidding I really murk kids
while you only named your crew that cuz you Takeover..
.. a week to write them shitty verses
we in the same crew.. got the same style..
.. I say it first you spit it later
this battles full of coincidences.. like you reppin that R.I.P avatar
I'll murder you. Send you home holdin bruises
Meks isn't the missing link of Hip Hop..
.. that's just the only way his oppenent loses
Here's my predictions: for the season of most vile violence
Smoka's got the East and Meks has got the West..
....... Nile Virus


so just take your whole verse and put it on a pile of poo
cuz all your concepts are older than the style I've used
watch ya girl. you never know who's pokin up her skirt
cuz if she ever met me you'd be broken up like my verse
Your hopeless son. fuck ya crew bitch it's history
only reason ya'll get forum'd cuz I'm puttin up the cash out of sympathy
you broke fuck. ugly fuck too always lookin like you just woke up
then you wonder why you been datin your girl for months and she won't fuck
I won't even bother trying, hoping for advancement is hopeless
cuz Mek's punches are way better.. off not being posted
the wins up for grabs.. watch as I snatch it and advance in the brackets
the only way you'll see him in the finals is if he's voting on matches


28.

[Meks.]

lol...



changed name, same account i'm only blurtin facts kid
& still, no1 wants to see when u [Insert]in that wack shit
if he merkin than thats it, I can't be competein wit his hood
but still its wednsday night... so Im'a beat'em like I Shuge
treat'em like I should, so in my crew I'm headin the scruntiy
he won't takeover, he's the type thats likely ta settle for mutiny
hot as kettles I'm truthfully, yet on the east I get colder than lately
and u come with a played out style like it's fro's in the 80's
close on'em maybe?, well thats a garuntee for sure
rb's his life, & raps his bitch so I can't wait till he up & marrys a whore
intervention please, my verse is fine try'ta lesson the steez
thinkin I won't pass, D's when I leave u dead within ease
1st round u spread a disease, and when I drop u shook of rappin
thought u came sick, then cry & vas dropped look what happened
u don't belong, it's like a horror flick I'll make sure it's scary no flop
combine ego with a playoff berth, and he'll scream like Carrie then drop
wtf as his verse?, like I wanna feed for my will need help
never thought he'd take it over the edge, and go & kill'eem self
u spit wack lines over the years, put four leaf clovers ta ears,
cuz when u bullshit lines I sham rock like u sober & queer
I hate ta rep u, ur wack and if u got pride I'd say u swallow
cuz I'd never present D A O, unless the fuckin K'll follow
in ur case thats not happenin, even losin if u rap ta the bone
still ur a rock, wishin for Star Wars like The Attack of the Clones
why all the lines?, with ur blatant mature take
even tho the crowd, u attract aint waitn for ur tape
bored as fuck, keep ya eyes open I come wit grime & clout
focused on dope, then I broke ya watch son ya time is out

28

[Big Question]

I'm easily advancin.. son trembles when I'm holdin nines
cuz Mecca pussy..
..and I ain't talkin bout bitches reppin that clothin line
THIS WAS TOO OBVIOUS TO ME HOW IT WAS WORDED, DIDNT FEEL IT REALLY
your inconsistent verses make it easy to son you
fuckin limited chump.. you should stick to the 1-2
MEH, TOO SIMPLE
you was an accident..
.. ask yo mother, it was the alcohol that made her
your pops was hopin that the birth was a failure..
.. but instead momma just gave birth to a failure
NOOO, MAD STRETCHED AND WAYYYY BLAND
now yo' momma love to get down with oral.. that shit made me shut mouth
but NO ONE wants her to concieve again..
your pops took one for the team.. even Russell Crowe is Gladiator cunt OUT..
NICE WORDPLAY, BUT WHATS WITH THE LONG ASS LINE? THIS MADE IT JUST SEEM AWKWARD AND NOT HIT
your better? Your must be kidding I really murk kids
while you only named your crew that cuz you Takeover..
.. a week to write them shitty verses
BETTER, DECENT
we in the same crew.. got the same style..
.. I say it first you spit it later
this battles full of coincidences.. like you reppin that R.I.P avatar
DOSNT RHYME, BUT DECENT IDEA
I'll murder you. Send you home holdin bruises
Meks isn't the missing link of Hip Hop..
.. that's just the only way his oppenent loses
EH? HIS OPPONENT LOSES BY MISSING LINKS?
Here's my predictions: for the season of most vile violence
Smoka's got the East and Meks has got the West..
....... Nile Virus
NOT REALLY
so just take your whole verse and put it on a pile of poo
cuz all your concepts are older than the style I've used
YEAH GOOD IDEA I THINK, BUT ITS NOT HITTING
watch ya girl. you never know who's pokin up her skirt
cuz if she ever met me you'd be broken up like my verse
YOUR DISSING YOUR OWN VERSE?
Your hopeless son. fuck ya crew bitch it's history
only reason ya'll get forum'd cuz I'm puttin up the cash out of sympathy
NOPE
you broke fuck. ugly fuck too always lookin like you just woke up
then you wonder why you been datin your girl for months and she won't fuck
NAH MAN, WEAK
I won't even bother trying, hoping for advancement is hopeless
cuz Mek's punches are way better.. off not being posted
BIT MORE CREATIVE HERE, BUT KINDA PLAYED AND SIMPLE IDEA
the wins up for grabs.. watch as I snatch it and advance in the brackets
the only way you'll see him in the finals is if he's voting on matches
OK

vs

changed name, same account i'm only blurtin facts kid
& still, no1 wants to see when u [Insert]in that wack shit
MEH
if he merkin than thats it, I can't be competein wit his hood
but still its wednsday night... so Im'a beat'em like I Shuge
DONT GET IT SORRY LOL
treat'em like I should, so in my crew I'm headin the scruntiy
he won't takeover, he's the type thats likely ta settle for mutiny
NEARLY
hot as kettles I'm truthfully, yet on the east I get colder than lately
and u come with a played out style like it's fro's in the 80's
NEARLY
close on'em maybe?, well thats a garuntee for sure
rb's his life, & raps his bitch so I can't wait till he up & marrys a whore
HUH
intervention please, my verse is fine try'ta lesson the steez
thinkin I won't pass, D's when I leave u dead within ease
NOT REALLY
1st round u spread a disease, and when I drop u shook of rappin
thought u came sick, then cry & vas dropped look what happened
OK
u don't belong, it's like a horror flick I'll make sure it's scary no flop
combine ego with a playoff berth, and he'll scream like Carrie then drop
NEARLY
wtf as his verse?, like I wanna feed for my will need help
never thought he'd take it over the edge, and go & kill'eem self
PLAYED
u spit wack lines over the years, put four leaf clovers ta ears,
cuz when u bullshit lines I sham rock like u sober & queer
MEH,
I hate ta rep u, ur wack and if u got pride I'd say u swallow
cuz I'd never present D A O, unless the fuckin K'll follow
OK
in ur case thats not happenin, even losin if u rap ta the bone
still ur a rock, wishin for Star Wars like The Attack of the Clones
HUH
why all the lines?, with ur blatant mature take
even tho the crowd, u attract aint waitn for ur tape
MEH
bored as fuck, keep ya eyes open I come wit grime & clout
focused on dope, then I broke ya watch son ya time is out
NO


DAO YOU DROPPED DECENT AGAINST PHILLY, I DONT KNOW IF ITS JUST ME BUT YOUR VERSE WAS REALLY BASIC IMO. NO HATE MAN, I JUST EXPECTED BETTER.

MEKS?....MAN SAME GOES WITH YOUR VERSE, NOTHING REALLY I LIKED EITHER A LOT OF STRANGE CONCEPTS THAT DIDNT DO ANYTHING FOR YOU, ITS LIKE YOU WENT BAD CREATIVE BUT OVER THE TOP
AGAIN, KINDA SURPRISED,


AIGHT SO RE-READING AND MY VOTES GON SWAY WITH DAO, SIMPLY FOR THE FACT HE ATTEMPTED A BIT MORE CREATIVITY THAN MEKS, WHILST SOME OF MEKS SHIT WAS LIKE NEWBISH CONCEPTS LOL, HE WAS DRUNK THO N I CAN TELL.

VOTE DAO


BOTH HIT UP MY BATTLE

[Born To Kill]

This was real long...

And honestly, not all that good...

I'm thinking Dao mighta taken this for being more direct...

But lemme see...

I'm easily advancin.. son trembles when I'm holdin nines
cuz Mecca pussy..
..and I ain't talkin bout bitches reppin that clothin line
Eh...
your inconsistent verses make it easy to son you
fuckin limited chump.. you should stick to the 1-2
Eh...
you was an accident..
.. ask yo mother, it was the alcohol that made her
your pops was hopin that the birth was a failure..
.. but instead momma just gave birth to a failure
This coulda been alot better with nicer wording.
Good concept though...
now yo' momma love to get down with oral.. that shit made me shut mouth
but NO ONE wants her to concieve again..
your pops took one for the team.. even Russell Crowe is Gladiator cunt OUT..
No, no, no, no, no...fuckin ancient concept...
your better? Your must be kidding I really murk kids
while you only named your crew that cuz you Takeover..
.. a week to write them shitty verses
Better...
we in the same crew.. got the same style..
.. I say it first you spit it later
this battles full of coincidences.. like you reppin that R.I.P avatar
Doesn't rhyme...
I'll murder you. Send you home holdin bruises
Meks isn't the missing link of Hip Hop..
.. that's just the only way his oppenent loses
"Missing link" concept is nice, punch isn't worded effectively though.
Here's my predictions: for the season of most vile violence
Smoka's got the East and Meks has got the West..
....... Nile Virus
Ok...whatever...

so just take your whole verse and put it on a pile of poo
cuz all your concepts are older than the style I've used
You said poo...that's bad, bad, bad.
watch ya girl. you never know who's pokin up her skirt
cuz if she ever met me you'd be broken up like my verse
Good-ish...but don't use wordplay on yourself.
S'not so cool when you set it up...better when your opponent unwittiingly does.
Your hopeless son. fuck ya crew bitch it's history
only reason ya'll get forum'd cuz I'm puttin up the cash out of sympathy
Blah...but I guess personal so, ok.
you broke fuck. ugly fuck too always lookin like you just woke up
then you wonder why you been datin your girl for months and she won't fuck
Eh...wording...but aight.
I won't even bother trying, hoping for advancement is hopeless
cuz Mek's punches are way better.. off not being posted
Ok...funny, kinda...
the wins up for grabs.. watch as I snatch it and advance in the brackets
the only way you'll see him in the finals is if he's voting on matches
Eh...obvious statement, but aight.

VS

changed name, same account i'm only blurtin facts kid
& still, no1 wants to see when u [Insert]in that wack shit
Eh...aight opener...
if he merkin than thats it, I can't be competein wit his hood
but still its wednsday night... so Im'a beat'em like I Shuge
Eh...funny somewhat...
treat'em like I should, so in my crew I'm headin the scruntiy
he won't takeover, he's the type thats likely ta settle for mutiny
Pretty eh...
hot as kettles I'm truthfully, yet on the east I get colder than lately
and u come with a played out style like it's fro's in the 80's
Eh...kinda played...
close on'em maybe?, well thats a garuntee for sure
rb's his life, & raps his bitch so I can't wait till he up & marrys a whore
Played life/bitch concept...
intervention please, my verse is fine try'ta lesson the steez
thinkin I won't pass, D's when I leave u dead within ease
Eh again...no fire...
1st round u spread a disease, and when I drop u shook of rappin
thought u came sick, then cry & vas dropped look what happened
Well, what happened? Don't make us guess or remember...
u don't belong, it's like a horror flick I'll make sure it's scary no flop
combine ego with a playoff berth, and he'll scream like Carrie then drop
Blah!
wtf as his verse?, like I wanna feed for my will need help
never thought he'd take it over the edge, and go & kill'eem self
Eh...
u spit wack lines over the years, put four leaf clovers ta ears,
cuz when u bullshit lines I sham rock like u sober & queer
Eh...stretching for wordplay...forcing it...
I hate ta rep u, ur wack and if u got pride I'd say u swallow
cuz I'd never present D A O, unless the fuckin K'll follow
Good-ish...
in ur case thats not happenin, even losin if u rap ta the bone
still ur a rock, wishin for Star Wars like The Attack of the Clones
Blah!!!
why all the lines?, with ur blatant mature take
even tho the crowd, u attract aint waitn for ur tape
Ok...whatever...
bored as fuck, keep ya eyes open I come wit grime & clout
focused on dope, then I broke ya watch son ya time is out
No, no, no!

Just a bit...and I mean a bit...
Better from Dao.

Vote: Dao

[Meks.]

i was high, and drunk as hell lol i kept forgettin my punchlines and starting over good battle tho D...

[Cody Nash]

what the hell ..this match was a definite upset and i had a lot of trouble reading it enjoyably. for 28 lines, and none of them being really that good at all, that's sad. from the both of you. i think dao edged it with some better/fresher concepts in mind, but they were still executed poorly.. bleh, whatever.



vote dao

[Mr. Q]

I'm easily advancin.. son trembles when I'm holdin nines
cuz Mecca pussy..
..and I ain't talkin bout bitches reppin that clothin line
meh
your inconsistent verses make it easy to son you
fuckin limited chump.. you should stick to the 1-2
ha
you was an accident..
.. ask yo mother, it was the alcohol that made her
your pops was hopin that the birth was a failure..
.. but instead momma just gave birth to a failure
meh
now yo' momma love to get down with oral.. that shit made me shut mouth
but NO ONE wants her to concieve again..
your pops took one for the team.. even Russell Crowe is Gladiator cunt OUT..
ehhh
your better? Your must be kidding I really murk kids
while you only named your crew that cuz you Takeover..
.. a week to write them shitty verses
ha
we in the same crew.. got the same style..
.. I say it first you spit it later
this battles full of coincidences.. like you reppin that R.I.P avatar
cant view avatars :/
I'll murder you. Send you home holdin bruises
Meks isn't the missing link of Hip Hop..
.. that's just the only way his oppenent loses
ok punch but wording could've been better though
Here's my predictions: for the season of most vile violence
Smoka's got the East and Meks has got the West..
....... Nile Virus
not feelin it
so just take your whole verse and put it on a pile of poo
cuz all your concepts are older than the style I've used
nah
watch ya girl. you never know who's pokin up her skirt
cuz if she ever met me you'd be broken up like my verse
nah
Your hopeless son. fuck ya crew bitch it's history
only reason ya'll get forum'd cuz I'm puttin up the cash out of sympathy
nah
you broke fuck. ugly fuck too always lookin like you just woke up
then you wonder why you been datin your girl for months and she won't fuck
nah
I won't even bother trying, hoping for advancement is hopeless
cuz Mek's punches are way better.. off not being posted
played
the wins up for grabs.. watch as I snatch it and advance in the brackets
the only way you'll see him in the finals is if he's voting on matches
nah

vs


changed name, same account i'm only blurtin facts kid
& still, no1 wants to see when u [Insert]in that wack shit
ight
if he merkin than thats it, I can't be competein wit his hood
but still its wednsday night... so Im'a beat'em like I Shuge
nah
treat'em like I should, so in my crew I'm headin the scruntiy
he won't takeover, he's the type thats likely ta settle for mutiny
ight
hot as kettles I'm truthfully, yet on the east I get colder than lately
and u come with a played out style like it's fro's in the 80's
ehh
close on'em maybe?, well thats a garuntee for sure
rb's his life, & raps his bitch so I can't wait till he up & marrys a whore
played
intervention please, my verse is fine try'ta lesson the steez
thinkin I won't pass, D's when I leave u dead within ease
ehh
1st round u spread a disease, and when I drop u shook of rappin
thought u came sick, then cry & vas dropped look what happened
meh
u don't belong, it's like a horror flick I'll make sure it's scary no flop
combine ego with a playoff berth, and he'll scream like Carrie then drop
nah
wtf as his verse?, like I wanna feed for my will need help
never thought he'd take it over the edge, and go & kill'eem self
played
u spit wack lines over the years, put four leaf clovers ta ears,
cuz when u bullshit lines I sham rock like u sober & queer
eh
I hate ta rep u, ur wack and if u got pride I'd say u swallow
cuz I'd never present D A O, unless the fuckin K'll follow
ight
in ur case thats not happenin, even losin if u rap ta the bone
still ur a rock, wishin for Star Wars like The Attack of the Clones
nah
why all the lines?, with ur blatant mature take
even tho the crowd, u attract aint waitn for ur tape
nah
bored as fuck, keep ya eyes open I come wit grime & clout
focused on dope, then I broke ya watch son ya time is out
nah


close..but v. dao

[Philly®]

dao wins