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Thread: Good Meets Evil.

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    Soule
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    Good Meets Evil. [Feat J6F]


    Good Meets Evil
    By: Bell And J6F



    The time had come, the 4 horsemen had scorched the skies
    The dead had clawed out their graves, the flaming torches rise
    But now its time to thwart those guys, Gabriel drew up the plans
    A counterattack to take place from the UK to Japan
    The celestial host stood strapped in etherial armour
    Golden spears and winged helmets, fearless of drama
    They were peerless in karma, the force to strike balance
    Defy the serpent's ambition to grasp on Christ's chalice
    Time to invade the Night Palace, home of the blood throne
    Where tortured souls roam, and nightmares are flesh and bone

    My army arise from the ground as we partol the sky
    Awaiting the moment that we enter our hellish prime
    "I wont rest until my army beholds this victory"
    Words of wisdom that shall float down into history
    As we begin flying past the golden gate of heaven
    My army slices pedestrian angels causing a rebelion
    We enter the center of olympus, war begins
    The saints and sinners, who shall grasp the win


    The armies rush like 2 tides, like the red sea reverses
    Crash together with violence, heavy bleeding and curses
    Gabriel dueling with the minotaur, pearl white feathers flying
    Sledgehammers cracked the earth, the earth quakes as if crying
    Tears of larva crack the surface, marred the perfect scenery
    Both sides began to cook, burning bushes in the greenery
    Angels and Demons knew horror as their world was collapsing
    "What have we done?" Perhaps then, the last thing they were asking

    Neither leader is proud, neither side is winning
    If this war never ends then their will be endless killing
    Endless sinning, neither side can truely die
    People of earth frown as the blood of angels lowers ..
    ..from the sky
    Shall I try, to kill Jesus as he slaughters my minions
    I mean, this is the man that blessed me a soul of demons
    I float up next to him, breath of hell shivers his spine
    And at the same time, we cross eachothers line
    "Our leaders are down! Is the war actualy over?!
    Maybe as of now ..
    But It'll return the month of October."
    Last edited by Soule; February 21st, 2007 at 05:17 PM Reason: name Change

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    Re: Good Meets Evil.


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    Re: Good Meets Evil.


    This piece was amazing, man. I enjoyed every second of it. The imagination I had reading this, was beautiful. The both of your vocab was on point. The multi's even.... You both did incredible. It never wouldv'e been wrote better.

    I actually have a piece in Poetic Striptures called "The 4 Horseman". You both should check it out.... I'm stupid for putting it there (Its more Hip-hop, than poetry), but I didnt want the MODS deleting it. Id appreciate it if you two RTF.... The "Feedback please..." in "Open Mic". I wrote that a few days ago... The other dudes are loving it, so check it out, maybe you'll like it, too....-one

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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    I'll check out the 4 horsemen. Thankyou for the feed.

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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    upps

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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    nice drop..good flow..nice multies.....i really liked the imagery and flow going on here this pieace was amazing... and it was set up just right...this was thought out very nice...overall =8/10
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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    Thanks.

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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    DEEP & CREATIVE peice... Good multies mostly, and this was just hot... I'm not much of a topic guy myself, but I still enjoy reading others... Very nice... The opener was my favorite... Great way to catch the reader's eyes... Keep up...
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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    Thanks.

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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    good piece you did here your word choice and picture usage did justice for the piece like the whole tempo of it kept me in it the whole time never drew away so kudos on that. My advice would be maybe more direct and forceful but other then that good showing

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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    I left that with feedback.. I think.

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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    Uppin.

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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    This was creative and intriging but very unrealistic. Now you know that Satan, his demons & all the unsaved will be tossed into The Lake of Fire. Why would God "The Creator" lose or even tie with The Devil "A creation"?......
    Last edited by The Mezzenjah; March 28th, 2007 at 11:02 PM
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    Re: Good Meets Evil.

    DUDE! It doesnt have to be real fucker. It's called imagenation, you might want to get one or stop reading poetry!

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