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    New World Clones

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    Let's lift the screen that shields a crusade built by true masons
    As scientists sample human genes, & yield obscene mutations
    These crude creations are then laden with pagan information
    An amazing fazing of the senses takes place on the patient…
    Who has the same face as another, each resemblance is blatant
    Yet both brains differ due to the subduing of defiant stem cells
    The old Gen fails in a new world ordered by blueblood personnel
    A few rebels run to the hills as clones stay true to themselves…

    Jacob grafted flecked flocks in the Bible; His - story was deep
    Modern-day chemistry first simulated this with Dolly the sheep
    Bleating as she was eating genetically modified holly & beef…
    Now folly & grief commences by means - of these DNA freaks
    Even high priests seek shelter from this bleak terror gone crazy
    Each day reeks of conspiracy from London to Washington DC
    Feel the cold breeze bringing death & hell to even young babies
    Prince of Persia may join Asia: forming 2 million-strong armies
    Since the Chinese dragon poses fatal threats to western society
    Therefore, when the bear hugs warfare & a harlot breeds tragedy
    If you can’t see then you obviously didn’t study the prophecy…
    It’s soul sorcery, gripping energy using forceps & mittens
    Clones grown forcefully in laboratories, fusing concepts & missions
    Bruising with bomb threats; cruising thru sets with indifference
    As abusive judiciaries are busy having blue sex with them infants
    Thinking of invincible links, power turns sour like ginger mints
    Satan sinks to new lows, & then tries to scour his fingerprints…

    On the brink of calamity – humanity is shook to the bones
    Looking at zones controlled by clones hooked on methadone
    ET could phone home & speak words about silicone soldiers
    Moulded by boffins that write secret signs in science folders
    The eagle takes flight as parasites stand on giants shoulders
    Behold a Dark horse that sparks forth forces of destruction
    Reduction of the masses; rebels amass in morgues & prisons…
    Amid meteoric abductions of intelligible organisms
    Facing robotic orphans reinforced with chemical endorphins
    Aborting all things known to be of logical importance
    Biological reports support the short-term grafting of sperm
    As germ warfare turns its ugly head, - causing mad concerns…;

    It burns the guts like German tanks, earning the rank of major
    Engaged in dangerous acts we make pacts with a Saviour
    & our enraged behaviour is observed by big brother & neighbours
    Breaking down natures ways… waylaying our mentors
    Betraying the laws of Moses, while praying relentless
    We enter a trance state glancing at fate, waiting for miracles
    Spiritual essence is excluded forever, replaced with materials.


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    Re: New World Clones

    this piece was definitely fucking dope, man. The vocab was good. The imagery was amazing. The creavity was wild, man. The emotion in this piece was very, very strong. I mean, at parts, I just felt everything you were saying. The beginning had me puzzled for a minute, but as I kept reading on.... I instantly hooked right in... The overall - dopeness. I'll look forward to reading more from you. To kinda make it easier on me, post some of your links in here. I'll check them out, and leave some feed on em.

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    Re: New World Clones

    thanx for the lookout yo....yeh maybe ill edit a couple of my recent pieces into my sig


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327381
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327483
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    I'd appreciate it, man, so I can check them out. I plan on reading more from you, no doubt. Your styles ILL. It deserves attention, feel me? I never thought heads on here would come like this, but so much for my fucked up ways of thinkin'..... lol..... Im glad we got dope heads, cuz most boards are pure wack. That shit was awhile ago though. i pretty much know who most the dope heads are now, and got in a crew, and still gettin' PM'd to join crews.... blah.....Your added to my list, bro... I'll look around and see if I see anymore, and reply ASAP. You stay safe, bro... -one-

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    Re: New World Clones

    Yup another good piece here V, i liked the vocab as usual with the flowing that your pieces bring. A step up from your last piece i read and one thing i liked came near the beggining. When you talked bout pagan ish, that reminded me of how christianity is built from pagan beliefes na mean..i always like it when a bit of religion ish can be joined in one way or the other na mean. Overall, i found it goog, good flowing like i previously said, good concepts used between the lines and the concepts amde this an enjoyable read na mean. So yeah, good work, Stay up^ man.

    My new piece is a bit more poetic so idk how it's gonna go down an mean lol, if possible a few comments would be great na mean
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327846

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    Re: New World Clones

    safe
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    Re: New World Clones

    uhm?

    yeah feed is allowed to be given


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    Re: New World Clones

    overall this was a fresh piece. im not really into that "spiritual" type of hip-hop. but i dont ignore skill so i gotta tell you how it is... you did a good job on this, man... and the flow was consistant through out the whole piece. the imagery was on track. shit i think i evened learned a few things from it. its good to see somebody bringing some knowledge to the board. maybe it'll help pull some people into another direction.. you never know.. but i really appreciated the read, man.. it was amazing.. keep on the incredible work...

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    Re: New World Clones

    thanx Nut's


    apreciate da piece of inspiration...sure is hard to get hold of nowadays

    f'sho
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    Re: New World Clones

    sneeze
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    Re: New World Clones

    k so, this began a little more stretched and bumpy as your usual pieces, but you got the flow down right after, which is pretty impressive considering youve left for a while, interesting metaphors and visuals, and you seem much more polished using larger words, and it was interesting, you actually included content in this piece. lol, just playin', but most of your shit is a slef-prop tear-t-up flaunt-your-skills type shit, but this was different, and much better, good job here, my friend, hit up my piece

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    Re: New World Clones

    yea ill hit ur piece tomorow soul.guess u havent read most of my heavily content pieces

    oh well
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    Re: New World Clones

    this piece was dope i liked the flow and the wordplay but the structure wasnt really there nahmean but overall this was nice and i liked it...keep writin pieces like this one and stay up

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    Re: New World Clones

    yea safe split
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    Re: New World Clones

    Jacob grafted flecked flocks in the Bible; His - story was deep
    Modern-day chemistry first simulated this with Dolly the sheep
    I really like this line. I like your spiritual style, man. This is just skill, I didn't think anyone on this sight would've kick that line....and u didn't even have to cuss once. It's hot but I still believe you holdin' back, though. Spit truth!
    Da Day Iz Comin' When E'ry Knee Will Bow Down & E'ry Tung Will Confess Dat JESUS Iz LORD!

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