I TRY......some real introspective shit....

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leave links i will rtf and ill be very detailed in it too....

holla!

[Xdicy]

listening...i dig the sample...ur flow is nice...it fell off at one point u came back on it... sometimes its hard to understand ur words...u should practise pronunciation alittle bit...i made a song like this...i feel the topic emotion could be upped a lil bit but a lot of people over do it nowa days so its not bad sounding....beat is cool most the time ur flow compliments it alot...the beat change up for the third verse is nice...lyrics are good...only in the first verse u sounded like u werent saying whole words or something...overal nice song...chorus is cool original...ending is nice not to abrupt...
cool song i feel the topic i feel the same way....

[Split.]

this wasn't too bad, man.. some real shit to be sure.. Lyrics are word, delivery could use a bit of work.. More emotion here and there.. Flow was pretty straight as well.. not much to complain about here, nothing aside from the passion really jumps out at me either... good job. Keep at it.

[Jonezy]

Loving the beats..shits real nice..flow is cool switches up alot..good shit..emotion is good..could better in some parts..deliverly is nice..liking your voice man..yeah lyrics dope..feeling um...good shit man..liking it

who made the beat man.

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any other opinions?

[#1 §yndicate]

it was iight

[Zed Peace]

Sampled was flipped nicely. Cool verse, could use a lil' more energy, force us to feel what you sayin, nahmsayin. But it was a real nice listen. Stay up.