Spaced Out - Ft Johnny 6 Feet

[TeLLaKoNeSiS]

Feedback Please - Vocabz
Life's Treasure - Soulder

Ok so me and johnny go through phases of making hundreds of collabs when he's not on tour and stuff, this is one we just wrote, decided to call it spaced out cause i have had no sleep in the past 24 hours as you might tell cause i just typed out a fucking huge intro for no reason


Johnny

Someone pumped my head with helium, you could say that i'm gassed
The room's warping like super mario, mental plague that won't pass
Was it those mushrooms or mary? That bottle of whisky?
It's flipped me, 3-60, i'm beyond tipsy

Me

Is This A Sick Dream?.... Or A Reality Crisis?...
Whatever It Is, It's Quite Shit & I Don't Like It...
I've Started Hearing Voices And They're Drivin...
Me OVER The Bend Like Bumper Cars Doing Ninety...

Johnny

Well crikey! Someone get a broom to peel me off the cieling
I stand on it like Fred Astaire, dance across it with feeling
My 3rd eye is squeeged clean, to a dazzling polished sheen
calling ufo's to space me out, this i've gotta see!

Me

Omg What A Scene.... I'll Never Be Sane Again...
Aliens, Made My Brain Extend, Creating Waves & Bends...
That Give Me The Power To Devour Any Names And Trends...
That Have Ever Pissed Me Off, Watch My Game Ascend...

Johnny

Like G-unit on trampolines? Landing hard to stamp a scene
Crushing foes from the hardest G to the campest queen
Take a gramme of these, and call me if you wake up
Observe the ultimate headrush, to make your face flush

Hook
Listen to a few lines, you get spaced out
Walking up into a room to take the place out
This drug abuse, will warp and take your face out
Time to take the fake out, Kung Flow make you spaced out

Me

So This Is What It Feels Like To Be Really Spaced Out...
Feelin 100 Miles Away While Remainin In The Same House...
What Can I Say Now? I Can't Feel My Face Now...
Owell Doesn't Matter I'm Busy Speakin With Gray Cows...

Johnny

Lying face down, poison climbing through my viens
The walls melt, the carpet swirls, lying to the brain
The munchies eat away my stomach, feeling lucid, torn
Plus i'm watching Jesus flying round on a unicorn

Me

Are You Stupid Or.... Just Fucked Up From Hurlin?...
Cause I'm Sure That, That's Not Jesus, It's Merlin!...
Cast A Spell On Me Man, Make Me He Man. Perfect...
Now I Have The Power I'm Not Sure That I Deserve It...

Johnny

But it is worth it? You know how smoked up herbs get
Feeling worthless, thats the consequence of being a cursed vet
Expanding minds with outstanding lines, starting the hammertime
Drinking sorcerous potion, the commotion is mine

Me

You Should Open Your Mind.... Start To Understand...
I Feel Like Some Other Man Comin From Another Land...
Although For Hours I've Been Stood In The Same Spot...
I Still Haven't Got A Clue As To Where My Brain's Gone...

Hook
Listen to a few lines, you get spaced out
Walking up into a room to take the place out
This drug abuse, will warp and take your face out
Time to take the fake out, Kung Flow make you spaced out


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[vocabz]

The lay out....

Johnny....
Someone pumped my head with helium, you could say that i'm gassed
The room's warping like super mario, mental plague that won't pass
^that super mario line was dope

Well crikey! Someone get a broom to peel me off the cieling
I stand on it like Fred Astaire, dance across it with feeling
My 3rd eye is squeeged clean, to a dazzling polished sheen
calling ufo's to space me out, this i've gotta see!
^this whole shit was worded nice...dope

Tella....
So This Is What It Feels Like To Be Really Spaced Out...
Feelin 100 Miles Away While Remainin In The Same House...
What Can I Say Now? I Can't Feel My Face Now...
Owell Doesn't Matter I'm Busy Speakin With Gray Cows...
^fuckin dope, yo...



Listen to a few lines, you get spaced out
Walking up into a room to take the place out
This drug abuse, will warp and take your face out
Time to take the fake out, Kung Flow make you spaced out

^ and this hook was dope



This was definitely dope all together. I could've put down more bars, but it'd take up alotta space. lol. You both came great with the imagery and multi's... You two did fuckin amazing.... I didnt think you'd come with another piece together this quick... I mean, no hate. I'm glad you did. I really enjoyed this. Its real fucking ILL..RTF on my battles. The two open, but judge them fairly. Id really appreciate it. The one was already closed, but the dude claimed the votes weren't long enough... lol... Im not sweating it, just make sure the votes are decent... and, poll it... for me or him, the one who wins...-one-

[TeLLaKoNeSiS]

Cheers for that dude,
will do my best to reply to your battles!

Up to the top!

[P. Mortuus]

Different, reminds me of how oms were when i first got around and then oms became more poetic and colabs changed to different format. I liked the flow at times and at other times it could have been better. It was certianly good how you switched after every 4, not that daunting when you look at it. Overall, i found it to be pretty good, though it seemed more like a breezy colab not one you both spent a lot of time on. Seemed like y'all were having fun with the words and put together a good write. In totality, it was good though i'd like to see you both doing another colab but doing radically different to see how you both go together then. Nice work.

Also, comments would be appreciated on the linked om:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327168

[TeLLaKoNeSiS]

thanks for that man, this collab was a fuck around we just put a hook inbetween some lines we wrote randomly so yeah...

serious collab comin up soon

[Tebo]

This was fresh and the best collab I ever seen, you guys did this dope, ya'll worked together, waitin for each verse to be done I can tell. Props to this, it was a enjoyable read from beggining to end, fresh shit guys.

[Spoken]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327410
^^
please hit that thank you.

but this was nice..old school which i like cus back in the day OM's like this was creative and showed effort..also the hook thing mad old school...but now and days things are just more straight with verses and no hooks..but its cool i liked this how you both alternated back and forth and both were in sync... the flow was cool and i could see this as a audio aswell cus this is really some nice wording aswell.. the wit in this is cool and the multies and metaphors controlled in this were nicely set and attempted and executed.. touche' boy's... i give big props for TEL to actually keep up with MR.JOHNNY.. nice collab both were on the same page and did well and pulled it off nicely..

keep it up boy's